Pokemon: The Scizor King

To be honest, it got a bit boring after the protagonist was captured. The uniqueness of the protagonist being a spirit was no longer apparent; the story basically revolved around Shana, with the protagonist getting some screen time only as a side project. For a reader like me who was initially drawn in by the protagonist transforming into a mantis, this was a huge disappointment.

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It's a bit disheartening to see the collection prices fluctuate, so I'm creating this chat thread. Each person can only comment once, please don't comment too much, thank you.

This is so badly written. Give me a hundred pages to read and critique! 🐶

Honestly, if you could truly write a story where the protagonist is an elf, it would definitely be a hit. Only a very small percentage of readers would actually like your style. Since the protagonist is an elf, why even have a female lead? This Shana is completely superfluous. Even if there were a female lead, she'd still be an elf.

I reckon it'll be available next Friday. Those who have been waiting for this book to be published, remember to give it a first-day subscription, just be careful not to kill my book! 😭

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Scizor's 4x weakness to fire is really annoying.

I feel that if Xia Nana were removed, the grades would be much better than they are now.