The Apex Predator

I personally feel that the period of being locked up in the zoo was a real failure.

I don't know what the author was thinking, but he locked the protagonist in a zoo. How do you exercise after being locked up in a zoo? And the zoo staff don't know how much you eat, so what should you do? Eaten the lion next door? Is it necessary for the author to feel satisfied if he writes something that feels like he is torturing his master? I've seen a lot of good ideas in a book that was originally good but had to be reworked to death. If the transition in your plot is not good, I can only say that I will definitely not be the only one to abandon the book. This post is not a threat. I just hope that the author will think about it carefully after reading it. Are you sure you can transition this plot perfectly?

This anchor plot is really embarrassing. First, a bunch of barrage descriptions. Secondly, you are an animal now, and the plot is now describing the host grilling the tiger. Although this plot is to increase exposure and increase mental energy, don't you feel embarrassed?

The warriors I met for the first time were stronger than Takahashi, who had been staying with the protagonist all the time (the protagonist is the source of spiritual energy, how many hands of spiritual energy did the warriors who were thousands of miles away absorb it?!) At first, I thought that the exercises they practiced had the ability to accelerate ten times, and these warriors who appeared should also be strong among humans As a result, the exercises were only accelerated by 1.5 Times, and several Warriors are also cannon fodder There is also the aura emitted by the protagonist. If other animals get a little, they will be in a mess. Tiger mothers and tiger sisters are not much better if they are with the protagonist every day Finally, to summarize, any good thing used on the protagonist and the animals and people close to the protagonist will have dozens of times worse effects (note that dozens of times is definitely not an exaggeration) What bullshit aura setting? ! This author feeds poison to poison the readers to death!

Tiger Roaring Africa is the main attraction for spiritual energy. As a result, the protagonist wanted to run away on the first day he came to the grassland without being familiar with the terrain at all. , The author's brain circuit is indeed different from others. . . Speechless. .

If the author wants to make corrections, he should start by exchanging spiritual energy seeds. Even if he wants to add spiritual energy recovery, the source should not be the protagonist. Then the protagonist speaks human language. This is the most important aspect of the book that should be corrected! A wild tiger that thinks and talks like a human being…. It's true: as soon as the protagonist opens his mouth, logic flies away! In the plot where the protagonist goes to Africa to shoot a documentary, the protagonist should not be allowed to escape early, let alone attack the filming crew. You should quietly escape when the filming is almost completed and finally get a profit from the system. Then write a story about the protagonist surviving and becoming stronger in Africa. In the end, the protagonist is so strong that it destroys the balance. When there is nothing more to write about, the aura is revived, allowing the protagonist to start a new adventure. And this revival of spiritual energy is best directed towards the end of the world or a huge change in the world, which will greatly damage human civilization and reshuffle the earth's food chain. The protagonist cannot be exposed to humans without pulling humans down from the top of the food chain!

To be honest, if you lose your character, don't so many negative comments explain the problem? You have to be clear, this is a cool article

It starts with food + grass, grass jelly before entering the zoo, food and grass after entering the zoo, food and grass + after coming out, but the last few pictures have turned into shit, really shit. What the hell did you write?

Is there any protagonist who is in the invincible stream? I have 48 of them and subscribed to them all. I haven't watched them yet. If it is not the invincible stream, semi-invincible is fine. This kind of protagonist is from the source and can be surpassed. I always say that I can't stand it either.

After the author failed to write, did he let himself go? It's a waste of my 330 coins. The protagonist can't defeat a group of spiritual beasts that eat his own shit and become stronger. It's outrageous. It's a waste of such a good idea. See you again when we are destined. I will withdraw first.