Marvel Animation Extraction

Seeing it now, I think it's okay. I suggest that the protagonist develops in the direction of a magician or an arcane master. Otherwise, if there is no development direction, it will easily collapse in the later stage. If it is scored out of five stars, this book can be given four stars. The main reason is that there is a bit of awkwardness between the protagonist and Skye. I hope it will not develop into a love in the future, otherwise it will turn into a poisonous point. It is difficult to control the emotional drama.

Please give up, this protagonist is really mentally ill, he is a double standard champion, just say a few random things. For example, persuading others to abide by the rules and go their own way. For example, persuading Tony not to take revenge. The people who killed his parents were forced to be controlled by others. Tony was asked to give up hatred for the sake of Captain America, but he and Skye killed all the enemies and blew up a computer base. For example, the protagonist accepts to be the leader of Hydra, then reports Hydra and kills Hydra. This is a protagonist with a garbage character. All retreated.

Many street-fighting authors think that writing an invincible ability with layers of restrictions is not a poisonous point. This is not how the growth flow is written... Either don't open the plug-in too big at the beginning, or don't add restrictions when you enable the invincible plug-in. Otherwise, adding restrictions to the invincible ability is a poisonous point. It's not because you, the author, think it's not poisonous, it's really not a poisonous point.

Actually, I don't want to stand up and explain so much. First of all, I didn't plan to be invincible. If I wasn't invincible, I wouldn't be able to open a more powerful cheat! ? I also gave the reason why the skill is temporarily weak. Even if it is far-fetched, it does not mean that it will not become stronger forever! ? When I started the book, I was struggling with two abilities as the protagonist's main abilities. The first one is the Golden Dayan Technique, and the second one is the ability in "Is This a Zombie" where words can come true? In fact, you can tell from the protagonist's last name, which is based on hers. But in the end I chose Golden Dayan Technique. Firstly, I liked it, and secondly, I thought it was more handsome! Although my writing is not good, I am not a senior and professional Magic Forbidden fan, and the description of my abilities is not adequate. Maybe it is like what some people say, selling mutton with a dog's head. I have never written any cuckold plots, nor any abuse plots. Even if the protagonist is weak, no one has bullied him. The use of his abilities may not be as big as your imagination, but his strength has also steadily improved. Why can't you follow my pace! ? No, no, you can't complain too much. Speaking of this, I just want to say one thing, The Golden Dayan Technique is very strong, at least in the expected plot I wrote. Now it is just not the time to show its true power. I just want to write according to the rhythm I originally designed! I'm really sorry that I can't satisfy everyone!

In a nutshell, diamond-level themes are written with bronze-level writing and sewer-level plots that make everyone scream. You said the writing style is not bronze? The logic cannot be self-consistent. To say that the writing style is bronze is an exaggeration.

After reading the author's comments, you will find that what he means is: 1. I want to ride on the popularity of the Forbidden Golden Dayan Technique 2. But I will never follow the original setting, everything is up to me. Then I wonder if you are like this, how can you still act and stand up? Wouldn't it be better if you just call the skills "Wishes Come True", "Virtual Creation" or something like that? I want to ride on other people's popularity, but I don't want to use the original settings. You're kidding me.

The protagonist's mouth is like a broken gong, beeping everything, showing that you know a lot, don't you know that telling it in advance will change what is about to happen?

I read it from Tencent and read chapters 89-90. I want to say that Ahri's copy of Captain's Serum is too powerful. It feels even stronger than the original version. After injecting the serum, Brosky was kicked by the Hulk and his whole body was shattered. He spent some time in the hospital to recover. I came here and ate a blast full of curses and still left a whole corpse?

It's better to say it's Golden Dayan Technique than it is Word Spirit, and the conditions for activating the skill are completely different.

The setting of Golden Dayan Technique is great, but the problem is that the current skill has the same name as Golden Dayan Technique, and has nothing to do with it at all. Except for rituals, chants, and incantations, the Golden Dayan Technique is not about following words, nor is it the kind of magic of laws, but about turning imagination into reality. It is a technique that turns everything you think into reality. It is essentially the distillation of alchemy. You are fundamentally wrong. You don't need any experienced magic chef, but Baidu Encyclopedia will do it. And the key point of release is to have a stable spirit and keep letting yourself believe. On the other hand, once he thinks in his mind that "he can't win this person" or "can't defeat this person", these thoughts will also become reality. However, now the protagonist always doubts this and that when using it, which itself does not meet the requirements for the use of Golden Dayan Technique. I don't know what others want to see, but when I saw the Golden Dayan Technique, the first thing I thought of was that the protagonist used the Golden Dayan Technique with determination to defeat the enemy without hesitation. The result was completely different. The protagonist was thinking that this would fail before using it. This is not Golden Dayan Technique at all. You might as well not write about Golden Dayan Technique and just write about the ability of the original Marvel to interfere with reality. Anyway, Marvel is not without the ability to interfere with reality. You don't understand this basic thing. If you just rely on your own imagination to write, no matter how long you post it, you won't be recognized by the readers.

I always feel that Ancient One was written by the author to prevent the spread of fandom. Why? Do we still have to let Gu Yi set up a time traveler agency? ? Everyone who wears clothes in Marvel will check in with her? ?

I don't know when I started to hate the character of Skye, because if all the Marvel protagonists meet Skye, they will become cerebral palsy dog ​​lickers.

The Magic Forbidden Chef was ecstatic at the beginning, but in the end, even if he copied the homework, he could make mistakes. If you want to gain some popularity, you should check some information. There are really none of the highly recommended books that I can read. The author's explanation of various grievances made me laugh.

The Golden Dayan Technique in the article is more like words, wishes come true, spells, etc. Although the "Golden Dayan Technique" incantation already exists, but because the incantation is too long, a person alone cannot finish it even if he chants it endlessly for a hundred or two hundred years. The incantation itself does not have any elements that can be shortened, nor can it be chanted from generation to generation in a segmented manner, because like the game of teleportation, the incantation will be gradually distorted. Therefore, it is impossible for humans with limited lifespan to use that kind of magic. However, Aureos used the "Gregorian Choir" to control two thousand students to chant the incantation at the same time, and the chanting speed would be at least two thousand times. Even a ritual that takes four hundred years can be completed in just seventy days by using this method. In addition, through the amplification effect of the mutual influence between the spells, the speed was increased another hundred and twenty times, and it only took half a day to complete the "Golden Dayan Technique". Aureos Isard's "Golden Dayan Magic" is not the magic of "whatever you say will come true" but "whatever you think will come true". It does not distort reality according to what he says, but to distort reality according to what he thinks in his mind. Therefore, the "Golden Dayan Technique" that can turn anything into reality at will is also a double-edged sword. On the other hand, once he thinks "cannot win this person" or "cannot defeat this person" in his mind, these thoughts will also become reality. This is also the reason why vampires and vampire killers are not created at will. To put it simply, because deep down in my heart I have the idea that "there is no way to create that kind of thing", so there is no way to create it in reality. Before activating magic, he will speak "commands" with his mouth. If you just "think" in your mind, a lot of distracting thoughts will be mixed in. As a result, the "order" itself is unclear and may not come true. Therefore, you need to rely on your own mouth to say "commands" to condense your thoughts, just like when memorizing English words, it is easier to remember them when you say them. But in this way, the enemy will also be able to guess the type of his attack in advance through the content of his words. In addition, Aureos has also prepared a set of preventive measures for this. Every time before he uttered an "order", he would insert a hair-thin needle into his own neck, then pull it out and throw it away. Let yourself enter a state of excitement through acupuncture and achieve the effect of eliminating anxiety

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Let me complain, this novel can last for a long time based on Marvel's own setting, but it has many flaws First of all, the author's dialogue skills are not very good. Many dialogues cannot be explained clearly and rely on the narration to explain. Why do I feel this way? There are too many such words and few descriptions are just descriptions, which is watery Secondly, the protagonist's personality is too soft. He always does something to prevent something and has no plan. A qualified protagonist can It's enough to drive the plot, and this is Marvel's plot to drive the protagonist. The protagonist never actively plans anything, but all improvises, which leads to the lack of twists and turns in the plot. I have seen many similar authors argue that my writing is realistic, just like a real loser should be, but you are not writing a biography, you are writing a story, and the story must have a rhythm and a fascinating plot link. This is also a flaw The third one, The protagonist's strength improvement is too vague, and we know too little about the strength and abilities of Marvel characters. Marvel movies and comics still have a lot of data to explain, such as the Spider-Man movie's power to lift the reinforced concrete of a collapsed warehouse, and the Hulk holding up mountains to save Iron Man and the others. The author writes this so that it seems that the protagonist is sometimes strong and sometimes weak, and the same is true for Marvel characters. The God of Thunder, who can kill large numbers of armies with lightning and withstand the impact of star cores, actually fights. I got tired after a while. I was surprised when I saw the protagonist killing a group of miscellaneous soldiers in an instant. Asgard, who can destroy stars, saw the protagonist's ability and thought it was awesome... Fourth, the protagonist is not very courageous and has a bad temper. As I said just now, he never thinks about the future, has no plans or plans. This is a person who has no responsibility and no consciousness. He is not decisive when encountering trouble. He wants to fight but doesn't want to fight. Are the readers here to see you worrying about gains and losses? It seems that you are unhappy and that is unhappy. S. H. I. E. L. D. And Asgard didn't recruit you and they didn't mess with you. They just imagined that others would threaten you... Haven't you heard that you are valuable only when you are useful? People also make choices for their own responsibilities. What choice did the protagonist make? Serious protagonists lead others by the nose, but he is better. Spoilers are like squeezing out toothpaste. He only tells others if they are nice to him. He does not think about the impact of telling others, nor does he think about taking advantage of others. He also rejects Casillas like a child. He does not want to influence the development of others. He just says bad things and reports. He is still like a high school student after graduating from college...

This is the pinnacle of anime!

After reading five chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. You're cheating me and you're still restricting me everywhere! Then why are you cheating? ? ? ? It doesn't feel good at all, and I still feel useless! ! ! !

It's really stupid. The author should be dragged to read Golden Dayan. What the hell is written about licking whoever he sees.

Calling God Farmer, what do you think of this book? , Highly poisonous or

. . . That's ridiculous, it's been two years. .

I was persuaded to quit by the fried chicken chapter. It was so embarrassing and the writing was very speechless

When I see how the protagonist uses the first ability, I feel that he is very mentally retarded. He can't get what he wants in one step, and he can't change it subtly?

I... Thought I saw it wrong

The Golden Dayan Technique can permanently erase the memories of two gangsters, but it cannot permanently double one's physical fitness 😅

I glanced at the first few skills and found that the author's design was a bit too complicated. In the final analysis, when I was young, I didn't have any skills that I could use to train myself. Whether it was practicing chakra, domineering, the energy in the Dragon Balls, or simply improving my physical fitness, there were no skills. If I didn't exercise, I wouldn't improve. Basically, I would always be an ordinary person. I wasted more than ten years of development period. I won't write. Invincible Wen, at least it has some staged growth. I haven't seen it before. Just catch an evil ghost and practice it to death. Once the armor is taken off, you are still a weakling. Your training experience will be much better if you add more energy and other training. The use of any ability is determined by its own foundation. Xiao Feng's Taizu Long Fist beats people like chickens. Who can beat Duan Yu's Six Meridians Divine Sword Later, Wu Kongjutsu was even given a skill slot, so it's hard to evaluate its suitability. In my opinion, it's a bit redundant for an anime with too many flying skills to include a dedicated skill slot for its training abilities. I scanned it all the way to Blue Eyes White Dragon, and I didn't bother to look at it later. They were all time-sensitive skills, without any enhancement of my own abilities, and they didn't take up any of the three aspects of mind, body, and skills. The summary is that just taking a look at the skills you gave me can't give me the desire to watch the plot.

The ending was too hasty. It was really exciting to watch.

Hey, hey, at least go ahead and finish the book. Is it really so bad?

This novel... Is somewhat interesting, but it feels weird when I read it. It's a bit childish. On the one hand, the protagonist wants to gain experience more quickly by fighting to the death, but on the other hand, he doesn't really want to kill anyone. It's very awkward.

My suggestion is that in the future, the protagonists of this type should be of Chinese descent and have a Chinese name so that they are easier to recognize.