Naruto, the Top Student of Konoha

After learning "Ziwei Dou Shu", I became proficient in it. You should be familiar with the Book of Changes. You should understand the lines of Qian Gua at the beginning of the Book of Changes, and they integrate knowledge and action. If you are not referring to Ziwei Dou Shu in the traditional sense, don't write about any magic knowledge. If morality is not matched, there will be disaster. You, a little brat, have never been exposed to this knowledge in your life, how can you possibly understand such advanced mathematical knowledge. It's better to replace "Zi Wei Dou Shu" with something like "Thunder". The most insensitive thing is that everyone knows that the experimental steps cannot be wrong when doing experiments. Naruto also has the order of seals. Let you directly inject energy. Just as the experiment requires slow addition and stirring, you just pour it in. Writing a book is for readers to read. If you don't consider the readers, your feelings will not be as good as what you have in your own mind.

What would you say about the author's style of painting? Very familiar, like I've seen it somewhere before? Memories from a relatively long time ago. The author Naruto writes very well. He is a child with his own thoughts. Everything is very logical, but in fact, the real world is sometimes more outrageous than novels. Personal experience, it's really (//∇//), sometimes I don't even know what I'm doing? ⊙_⊙

It's awesome, the writing is very good, and the plot is very attractive.

To be honest, even if you can kill Naruto, the third generation cannot watch you do it. After Naruto dies, the Kyuubi comes out again and seals the Jinchuuriki again. It is impossible to be immortal. For the third generation, as long as it harms the village, the family can be destroyed at any time. There are traitors in Uchiha, and there must be other families. The Senju is the top family in Konoha, no, no, for the third generation, the family will always be inferior to Konoha, and Naruto values ​​​​strength.

I think the techniques should be divided into different levels. Loyalty to Naruto is a good technique, and hating Naruto is a technique with many side effects.

Hinata is so soft and cute, I like Hinata the most.

Ninjas are all squishy, ​​even a C-level ninjutsu can be fatal. There are body cells in chakra training, and your writing method is too fantasy. The clan leaders and elders are so powerful at present, but they are the most powerful elite jounin, and the shadow level is above the shadow level. What about the six paths? Moreover, it is impossible for the Third Generation to let other families out of their control. The Uchiha Mangekyo is not weak once it is turned on, and it can also control tailed beasts. It is too dangerous. If the Yamanaka Clan can use Heart Turn at will, will the Third Generation keep the Yamanaka Clan?

The setting is good, but the direct exposure of the protagonist is too cheating!

Japan is supposed to be about family, and it feels very awkward to write about an aristocratic family. The Japanese blood theory is more serious. The blood of Naruto and Uchiha are relatively noble. The blood of those families in Konoha are nothing compared to the two of them (except for the Hyuga family)

In the ninja world, the strong should be respected, with the most aristocratic families, the royal family... Is there any? ? ? Without Naruto's mouth escape, the ninja world... Infinite moon reading, the world's nuclear peace

Don't you really think this Naruto is schizophrenic?

The author writes about his background in history! Where did the aristocratic family come from when there is only family in Naruto? So embarrassing

I really want to ask Naruto, isn't he of royal blood?

If you read the introduction, you will know that it is the struggle of the proletariat against the landlord class.