The Little Machinist

I haven't read it. I suggest you don't write about campus life. Instead, start a business after graduation, set up a small processing plant, and gradually improve processing precision and upgrade equipment. Those who clicked in are basically industry enthusiasts. Focus on the main theme.

Seeing the author put machine tools and lithography machines together instantly conjured up some bizarre images: Planting a tomato seed, carefully watering and fertilizing it, and three years later I harvested an 88-story building, living in it and feeling so happy. I can only say that ignorance is truly terrifying; a novice writing about cutting-edge technology is a perfect match!

Getting too caught up in the minutiae makes the flow awkward and disjointed.

Mechanical manufacturing involves too many aspects. Even if you were at the top of the industry in your past life, you could only choose one direction within machinery to develop. With just a little bit of a cheat code, you can only become a senior engineer, not do research and development.

People still believe in industrial machine tools? And they even put them in the product description?

There were too many typos and omissions, but the rest was okay.

It's well-written. I also graduated with a mechanical engineering degree, and I found much of the knowledge mentioned very insightful. It's good, and the "golden finger" effect (referring to unexpected advantages or advantages) isn't too strong—just right! 🙂👍👍

The protagonist's development is too slow. He should develop a flagship product to make money first, then recruit talent for research and development, ideally producing a cutting-edge product that others can't manufacture. The current writing style is unreadable! Furthermore, the protagonist's cheat ability is too weak. More importantly, is the protagonist really going to be a full-time technician, spending all his time on research and development? What's the point of writing like that?

Machine tool technology itself isn't complex, nor is improving machining accuracy! The real bottleneck for machine tools is materials!

I've also processed some molds for lithography machine components. To be honest, I didn't do a good job. Why? They talk about craftsmanship all the time, but the wages they pay craftsmen are pitiful. Besides, my machine tools need to be manually adjusted to produce perfect molds, but who cares about that from the factory executives!