Young Master Is so Righteous

The writing is good, but the deliberate creation of a universal enemy is too brainless, and the benefits and risks are too different. The protagonist is a single seedling. If the protagonist dies, not to mention his grandfather, even his father can kill all these forces. But these guys dare to provoke them individually, and they don't come to assassinate them. They come directly to Ming. Are you afraid that the Luo family can't find anyone to take revenge?

Let's complain I beg you, author, please stop writing about political struggles. I can't even read these chapters with my head in my head. A frontier official is going to rebel. Do you think the enemy country will bribe him to help him or hinder him? Don't talk about the death of the barbarian. He has a lot of blood debts on his hands. All personal grievances in front of the country can be put aside. Wouldn't it be nice to bribe him and let him go to the border? (Wu Sangui has less blood on the Manchus in his hands?) Suppose, hypothetical, the commander-in-chief of the Pacific Fleet of Yingjiang issued a declaration saying, "Yingjiang is not a human being. I will not follow him anymore. I will rebel." Do you think Rabbit will help suppress the Pacific Fleet? ? ?

By the way, this is the first time I have finished reading a book. Overall, it was pretty good. I still remember that when I read it for the first time, I was dissuaded by the title and introduction. However, when I read it later, I found that the plot is really good, especially the climax after becoming my disciple. ②The character creation in the Human World Chapter is quite good. At least Butler Chen, Mr. Luo, Master and others are very impressive. However, the creation of the evil gods in the Heaven Chapter is poor, and some evil gods even did not show their faces. ③The protagonist is very handsome wearing a mask, holding a magic sword and has skills, especially the combination of Devil May Cry and Ichigo. Every time I play Shura, I feel like Ichigo is playing bull's head (fulfilling my childhood dream of being a middle school student). ④The heroine is very suitable for me. The weak Xiaodouhua and the Queen's magic sword. You want to ask me who to choose? All I can say is that it's not good at all 😜 After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the areas that I think can be improved ①The title and introduction of the book are a bit discouraging. Would it be better to write a more serious fantasy book title and introduction? Otherwise, it will give you the feeling of a light novel zone. The anti-routine is reflected in the book (after all, the writing is quite funny), and there is no need to put it in the title and title of the book. ②The world view is a bit small. In fact, if you dig into heaven and hell, you should be able to write more, right? I hope that the world view of the next book will be larger, with more characters, and more pits can be dug in front of it ③Hmm... You can think of something more lofty for the realm name, and build a complete system instead of just expressing it with numbers. ④After the protagonist defeated Tianjiao, he talked about how strong and powerful he was every time he leveled up, but he had no record. There was not a single fight to watch. He either couldn't beat him or was defeated by his strength. ⑤ There is a bit of inconsistency between the front and back, and there are a lot of bugs. When Master suppressed the Buddha's head, he was clearly talking about the 4th realm land immortal, but when he appeared again later, it became the 5th realm. Xuehai Secret Realm initially said that it was formed after the fall of saints, but didn't saints only have first-generation masters? Also, Qingniu said at the beginning that heaven and hell were opened by the strongest ones, and later said that they were the three caves of the Three Realms. Where are those strongest ones? There is also no clear explanation of the characters who created the supernatural power of killing gods and practiced evil practices. At that time I:? ? ? Okay, I've finished what I want to say, I wish the author a better new book, see you next time, I'm 88

Another book by Li Hongtian that I have fully ordered! Lao Li's book is still as refreshing and humorous as ever. Although Lao Li felt that the writing of this book was not very satisfactory in his final remarks, it still fully meets my preferences: decisive killing, no virgin, no stallion (even no heroine at all). There is a plot about a younger sister at the beginning. Reading the comments, it was a bit annoying for some people, but there is almost no description of this younger sister, so I think it's okay. The only flaw I feel is that the whole book has been very tense, there is no relief plot, and it is not relaxing enough.

The idea is quite interesting. But the stalls are too big, and a small county town should start with some small things to set up people. As a result, it is Dali Temple, it is the King of Zhenbei, and it is a top master. As a result, the character of the protagonist is always very confusing, so that it feels like a forced pretense. Many classic online articles are keen on changing maps, because new maps can introduce new characters and new plots. This book just wants to cram all the characters into one county to serve as foils for the protagonist to show off. Middle school boys are not popular.

Hahaha

I first met the author in "The Gourmet of Another World" and followed him all the way. "The Young Master is Too Righteous" is an anti-conventional novel with a slightly playful style that keeps up with the trend while being funny. Goldfinger is a human skin book, with the protagonist wanting to be a villain but being unable to do so due to various factors as a conflict point. It can be seen that the author's control ability is still very good. But at present, the following small copy is used to gradually promote the development of the plot. I feel that there is not much new idea in the plot. The main selling point is the unexpected and sexy actions of the protagonist and the behavior of the characters, such as Erha Evil God, Miss Demon Sword, etc. I hope the author can carefully refine the plot, and don't break the chapter. Personal questions: 1. Who distributed the brochure. 2. The origin of the evil god, is it a result of cultivation or the world itself. 3. Why does the Master want to guard the world? Is there a Master before the Master? 4. I hope to describe the standard of realm in detail. 5. How strong is Emperor Xia? 6. Why does Tianmen interfere with the human world, the relationship between Tianmen and the human world, whether Tianmen is divided into local and foreign places, and who established Tianmen. 7. What are the specific settings of the Pillar of Luck. ... I hope the author can write out the plots one by one in the future. I wish the author better and better as he writes.

When I wake up at dawn, the leaves are wet with white mist. Little dewdrops flowed down from the flowers, leaving behind your longing for me. Little Luo Hong sat next to his mother and patted his younger brother or sister in his mother's belly with an expectant look on his face. At this time, Luo Hou came over, followed by Butler Chen. Luo Hou straightened his back and smiled honestly. Butler Chen looked at Luo Hong and smiled with narrowed eyes, but occasionally he couldn't help but sigh. Little Luo Hong walked over with small steps, looked at his father with wide eyes, and asked: "Dad, what do you mean by good people and bad people?" Luo Hou paused, with some hesitation in his eyes. He touched his son's head and asked: "What do you think is good and what is bad?" Little Luo Hong tilted his head and said with interest: "A good person means that no matter what difficulties or accidents other people have, I will help them, no matter who they are." At this time, Butler Chen looked at Luo Hong and his smile became even stronger. But there was some worry in Luo Hou's eyes.       ："，，"       ，， He said to Xiao Luohong: "Perhaps those who hurt other people's lives are bad people; but the really bad people are those who are busy scheming all day long, fighting within themselves to consume the country, and harming the virtuous. There are also some people who chant Buddha Buddha Buddha all day long, but they have no Buddha in their hearts, and they are just mindless crepe dogs. If some things can be solved by chanting Buddhist sutras all day long and not killing people, that would be great." Luo Hou suddenly realized that he had said a lot of irrelevant things, and after touching little Luo Hong's head, he became speechless. As if lost in thought.

The only 2 tickets are given to you. 4 Updates a day is perfect.

A bit too fast Ah, I used to read books on QQ. I recently canceled my account there and came to QQ. For this newly opened book, I feel it is a bit too fast. The protagonist traveled through time and found himself in a mass grave. Apart from the sadness for myself, there was no fear or horror at seeing so many dead people. For a bad guy, I think he takes it a little too much for granted. Not to mention that he just came here, this is a new and unknown world. After knowing that there are many dangers, he dares to risk his life and enter the gangster's den in order to earn bad guy points. I think he is a little too confident in his own strength. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been killing people in recent chapters. Of course, I'm not saying there's anything wrong with him. After all, he was the one who got into trouble first. What surprised me was how he could say the words "Tumanmen" without any trouble. If I could write more about the evils of those families, I might be more receptive to it. (I am not a virgin bitch, after all, I am looking at it from a modern perspective! It is more or less uncomfortable.) Generally speaking, this book is not as good as the first one, and the atmosphere of the second book is more relaxed and pleasant. (This feels like forcing me to pretend to be 13) The above is my personal opinion, please correct me if there is anything wrong.

Not bad, I hope the combat power will not collapse 😒😒

Probably, probably. If the protagonist wants to do bad things, people other than the protagonist will always assume that the protagonist does good things. (No matter what the protagonist does), the protagonist has a group intelligence aura and an automatic brain supplement aura.

Come on, author, this book is great

I really didn't look for it specifically, I just saw the recommendation and was pulled in. Unexpectedly, I have already read two of his books, and I just discovered it today 😰😰

I like this book very much The student party doesn't have much money It's still possible to make a full subscription If you have the conditions, just give it a try

It looks good, but updates are too slow.

Your increased combat power is comparable to that of a Saiyaman

The main text of "The Cruelty and Abuse" appears to be invincible all the way, but in fact, if it weren't for the super cheat, he would have died without a burial every time. They kept talking about how the King of Zhenbei was cheating, as if he just didn't want to rebel but couldn't. As a result, the protagonist was allowed to be plotted in various ways. The prince orders the protagonist to be captured, and the protagonist also has to perform various shows on his own? If you ask me, just let the black knights surround and kill them, wipe their ass with the imperial edict, and then say that they are fake, just to save face for the court. A warlord with more than half of its military power still needs his heir to cheat to survive? What do you write?

If you can't write something domineering, don't write it. If you slap others in the face, they will slap them back after a while, like a lost dog.

(Reasonable analysis, the troll goes away) What is the positioning of the protagonist? If you really want to be a great villain, just massacre indiscriminately, extract souls and cultivate treasures (although this will directly result in 404) If you have a conscience problem and want to level up, just do some harmless little evil (molesting, venomous tongue, deliberately scaring people, taking advantage of others, spreading bad reputation) to accumulate guilt points. Furthermore, this kind of anti-routine writing routine is highly repetitive and can easily make people tired of aesthetics (it's a shame that the capital has abandoned it this way). Logically, it is not difficult to see evil as it should not always be turned into a good thing (for me, I pursue logic in novels, and novels without logic will not be good works) (I hate those who say what novels should I read if I pursue logic)

If the world doesn't help me to become a Buddha, then I will help myself to become a demon. I want to be a bad guy, and no one can stand in my way, not even Jesus. Lao Zhao, don't go to the tavern to fool around and deliberately cause trouble for me.

Seeing now, I finally felt that something was wrong. No one in this novel has the proper respect for power. No matter what level of person is standing behind the protagonist, as long as he is not standing next to him, he does not exist. It was so abrupt. Don't you think it's strange that Feiliu Sword Pavilion was flattened so easily by the Luo family's cavalry? He obviously couldn't afford to offend the protagonist, so he just wanted to please the prince, and as a result, everyone in the palace was left alone. This villain really has no brains at all. All passers-by have facial makeup and flat faces. As long as someone moves around, they will definitely get involved. Whether these people are in the seventh or eighth grade or the second or third grade, they feel that they are upgraded in a daze. They have never been in the world or experienced fighting. Those people were aroused by the evil Buddha's words and couldn't wait to kill the protagonist and get the inheritance, but they didn't think about it. The territory of Wangchuan Temple is outside. Can you take it away? If I don't peel off your skin to prevent the Ksitigarbha Sutra from being leaked, it means Wangchuan Temple is still reciting the Buddha's name.

Little Douhua

I like it very much, don't stop, update soon

After reading half of the book, I feel that there are many shadows of the book in this book. The traces of the author's imitation and learning are still very obvious, from the bad horse Lao Huang traveling to the end of the world, the land immortal walking around the rivers and lakes (Swordsman in the Snow) to the master's invincible young master's uncle cultivating demons (Jiang Ye) to the bridge of Jian Lai (Jian Lai). The language is nonsensical and feels a bit like the first sequence. Halfway through, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist was having fun all the way, but it was a bit boring, with no ups and downs, and no strong sense of involvement. Overall, it's okay. Check it out when you're bored. Cheers, author.

If foreign enemies kill the protagonist, they can also say that they want to cause civil strife in Daxia, so what the hell is the domestic one doing? Kill the protagonist and wait for King Zhenbei to slaughter all the royal family?

"On December 20, 2020, the world has undergone tremendous changes.' Whether it is humans, animals, or plants, special individuals have appeared The main changes are: Strength suddenly increases Intelligence The quotient suddenly became high Suddenly controlled abilities beyond common sense And as time went by, the number of special individuals increased, and various countries began to implement unified management of special groups At the same time, the world Practitioners began to appear all over the world, and the legendary cultivation sect was born, recruiting disciples from the world On May 1, 2021, various countries reached an agreement and issued the "Precautions for World Cultivators" and defined December 20, 2020 as " "Aura Resurrection" Incident Attachment: Regarding the Reiki Resurrection incident, some academics have put forward different opinions. This view believes that the Reiki Resurrection is man-made, it is most likely to be some kind of conspiracy, and there is a mastermind behind it. However, not long after this statement appeared, it was defined by the country as Spreading rumors disturbed people's hearts and was banned. So far, they are only spread by word of mouth among the people. However, as time goes by, the mastermind behind the resurgence of spiritual energy has become a household name. "Not bad" Luo Hong closed the book, nodded with satisfaction, and then looked at Xiao Dou Hua next to him "Raise your head, straighten your chest, tighten your abdomen, lift your hips, and step on your feet!" Xiao Dou Hua stood up subconsciously, holding her in her arms. Miss Demon Sword, with a look of grievance Luo Hong turned back and looked at the book Unknowingly, he has been back for so long... Looking at the little bean curd standing there, Luo Hong couldn't help but think of what he saw on the way back to Earth > There are many people in the void, not only numerous but also with different personalities... A man named Su Fu gave Luo Hong several things called nightmare cards. Although Luo Hong seemed calm after experiencing them, he was actually frightened, and Xiao Douhua left a deep shadow... .. . But I have to say that it is not easy to see Miss Demon Sword looking so panicked. Next time I see him, I will ask him for some nightmare cards for Luo Xiaoxiao and Tiandao girl to try. But the one who impressed me the most was the one named Bu Fang. The food cooked by the cook is really delicious, and it is a pleasure to eat it occasionally. However, if he was not experimenting with new dishes, Luo Hong might not be able to meet him... Starry Sky Ramen is really delicious And... Luo Hong Subconsciously glanced in a certain direction, Lu Fan, the Lord of Creation, the spiritual revival on the earth was formed by Luo Hong with his help. Although Luo Hong thanked him very much, but... There are people who can be more pretentious than me! And his mind is too small, no! What is small? At all) L doesn't! Because Fusu gave the unborn Lu Fan a dream before. The world in the dream was similar to the earth, but it was actually Fusu's world. Later, because the Lord of Destruction was curious, he wanted to find a similar world to see, so after meeting Luo Hong, Lu Fan understood the situation and followed him. "Little Douhua, let's go back to the Confucius." I want to give Luo Xiaoxiao and Tiandao a nightmare card to try "Oh, okay... . Sir, can we stop by Boss Bu's place for a meal... The drunken pork ribs are delicious!" "I'll take you to eat, I've never been hungry for you!" "Sir, don't be mean."

Is it enough to add more updates? If not, I will ask again at the end of the month

Early in the morning, Luo Hong was walking on the street with Xiao Douhua and his guards, and suddenly said: "Xiao Douhua, give me some advice, is there anything that only bad guys can do...?" "Sir... It's not good to do bad things... It's not good..." Xiao Douhua said solemnly. Luo Hong slapped his face and said sternly: "Speak quickly!" Xiao Douhua's complexion changed slightly: "Young master... Don't be cruel... I said... I said... She then said four words: "Do it... On the street. " Luo Hong's eyes lit up after hearing this, and he touched Xiaodouhua's head: "Yes, why didn't I expect that this trick will definitely get a lot of sins. This time you have made a great contribution! " Luo Hong looked at the surrounding environment and saw a beggar begging. He had a new plan and was in a good mood. Luo Hong then raised his hand, pointed at the beggar, and ordered the guards to beat him. "Master... Isn't this good..." The guard asked weakly. "Stop talking nonsense... Beat him hard... Beat him until he can't get up..." Luo Hong said with a cold face. "The guards responded and walked towards the beggar. "Who are you and what do you want to do?" The beggar yelled loudly. Luo Hong stepped forward and said: "Hit me... Hit me hard..." A quarter of an hour later, the beggar lay on the ground unable to move and shouted repeatedly: "Stop hitting me, I'll hit... I'll hit them all! " After listening to the beggar's story, the people around him reacted and cursed repeatedly: "beat him to death... Beat him to death..." Little Douhua was stunned, it turns out that I misunderstood the young master... The young master is indeed a gentleman. Little Douhua lowered her head The head said: "Young Master... Young Master, I'm sorry..." The guard came towards Luo Hong and said respectfully: "My Young Master, a noble and upright person, a righteous example, the Young Master is unparalleled" "The Young Master is unparalleled... The Young Master is unparalleled..." Surrounded by The crowd also shouted, and the cheers continued. The plot development should not be like this. Please, stop talking... "Sin-1... Sin-1... Sin-1" It seems. Feeling guilty all the time, Luo Hong shouted angrily deep in his heart: "I have no grievances against you, you... You are driving me to a dead end..." "It's over... It's all over..." Then Luo Hong fainted...

Good guy, this late-stage rhythm is like flying a plane.