Dream Maker

I started reading this author's books several years ago, starting with Dream Master. At that time, I was waiting for updates every day, and I almost wanted to put a knife to the author's neck and force him to write. When I saw the protagonist leaving the earth, I felt it was boring and I stopped reading.                               ，，，，，🤭

This is a very contradictory story, and it is a cheating book by the author. For example, Pig's Foot fought with the enemy for a long time, and one sentence: The two fought until the sky was dark, and finally Pig's Foot won. That sums up all the remaining chapters. But the subject matter of this book is very good, especially in the early part of the book, which is very fascinating. One sentence, "Thunder Nut", is simply hilarious. Unfortunately, the author's writing is not enough, so he just uses water words to make up. In the middle period, you will find that there are hundreds of chapters that have nothing to do with the theme of the book "Dream Card", so you can jump directly. Later, he actually comes back, but he often backhands himself in the face. A lot of zz complexes appear, which makes it uncomfortable to read, but the ending is really good. This is a novel about Phoenix Head~Chicken Body~Fengwei, So, this book can be read by novices, but also by experienced bookworms. It is recommended to read it, because you will want to curse people. After all, I think the logic of a book that started in 2018 and ended in 2019 should not be so confusing. Maybe some people say, why don't you write a book if you are so awesome? This involves the quality and manufacturing of the refrigerator.

I have something to say about the novel Dream Master I have read 240 chapters now Although I have not finished reading them all But I still have some suggestions that I would like to share First of all, let me declare: The following content is my personal opinion. Everyone has different ideas. This is understandable, but please do not impose your opinions on others. I first saw this book in the recommendation list The subject matter is very novel But as the author said Topics that are too novel are often difficult to write What I want to say is Since you have chosen a novel subject matter to write you must work hard to build your novel world instead of making an attractive topic The material is wasted Even if there is a gap of three years from some current novels it will not make the level of the novel so different I don't know how the author's other novels are. The following are some shortcomings of this novel that I think 1. Writing language:The author can play tricks, but he needs to control the degree. And don't just stick to a joke. Some good novels can use memes to transcend the Internet era. If the author masters this writing technique, the article will look very comfortable. I read so many chapters, and my mind was filled with Pi Pip Pi, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. In addition, the description of some fighting and life scenes is a bit weak. I can't understand it clearly and can't make readers empathize. For example, take the food of stone flowers. I think the author may want to express the protagonist's feeling that even if he has extraordinary powers, he is still close to life. However, there is really no way to connect this food with stone flowers as a line. It is clearly written that one should seize the time to practice, but sometimes it is written that a bunch of people gather together to watch the protagonist climb the rankings. People should not be able to improve their perception by watching the protagonist climb the rankings. 2. Character image: The image creation of the group portrait characters is a bit thin, as if they are just a set-up used to overdo the plot. In addition, it does not enhance the connotation of the story. In addition, there is no clear definition of the three views. The logic of the protagonist's three views makes me feel a little strange. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist's character traits seem to be told to me by the author, not what I experience. In inappropriate situations, the purpose of pretending to be sexy and then running away is just to improve yourself a little bit, but at this time, shouldn't you just run away? After the emergence of Goldfinger, it seems that others have no brains. I am not happy at all when reading Shuangwen. I hope that the protagonist crushes others because of his high IQ or strong combat power, rather than being crushed because others have no brains. 3. World building: The economic system is slightly broken, and points are exchanged for money at a cost of 1:1w. When you think about such a world, you feel that inflation is very strong. The world map is not very clear. What kind of federation is in one part of the world, and I don't know what it looks like. There are now more than 200 Great Dream Gates in the world (probably the Earth), but there is almost one in each province. There are some on the mainland and also on the sea. So is the number too many or too few? Then why the consortium can become a consortium? The capabilities of the consortium need some description, and some families also need to be described. Anyway, after reading it, I feel that something is missing. And even though the world has been integrated and developed for so long, there is still very little research on dream-eating insects (not mentioned). We are obviously in the age of science and technology, but the description of the world makes me feel that it is still very primitive. Dream cards are obviously the main thing, so why not choose to use dream cards to build artillery (although Tang Lu has it, but there are really few descriptions), tanks, starships and so on. Everyone fights with knives, swords, fists, and legs. You may want to use more dream creatures or magic things. If you say that these things save perception, then why didn't people in the past work hard to develop them? Why are physical skills only developed now? Why are low-level dreamers all short shuttles instead of rich and colorful skills? Aren't dreams supposed to be wild and unconstrained? Anyway, after reading it, I felt that these dream abilities were not very interesting, and the author's thinking was somewhat limited. 4. Plot development: The enemy descriptions are relatively simple, they are all dream-eating insects. There are some special descriptions of it in some places, but when you go to the battlefield, there are very few descriptions of the battlefield, and there is no specific description of the enemy's arms. At first, it was said that there was a battle dream, but later it was clear that the juice was enough and it was not opened. I really wanted to see that. Since the author did not plan to build this plot so early, it would be more appropriate to increase its opening limit, or release it later. Then there are some illogical aspects in the plot. For example, in the trial camp rookie competition, at the end of the final schedule, the number of wins and losses of each country/federalization was still wrong. The number of losses in kicking games and wins in defense was actually different. Anyway, I was a little confused when I saw it. 5. Level progress: The protagonist's combat power is very strange, and there is no flexible configuration of the skills he has (including but not limited to Xiaonu, Zilong, Penxian, etc.). It's true that your physical skills are very strong, but aren't you a dream maker? The protagonist's upgrade route is not clearly explained. He drinks juice every day, but he doesn't know how to become stronger, and his perception level doesn't know how to become stronger. Moreover, it is really easy to fight against higher levels. If the higher level is more reasonable, I can accept it, but it is not suitable to directly fight against high levels at low levels. The above is my review of this book. I will continue to read it. Although it is finished, I want to see if there are any improvements in the plot and whether the author has improved during the writing process. Although I have not written novels myself, I have read many novels myself. I think my comments should be quite pertinent. I also hope that the author can write better novels. I wish the author to write better and better.

Food and grass in the front, fairy grass after entering the universe in the middle and late stages. It's very humorous, and the main character is so mean and cute! And unlike many books, it still maintains a high standard in the later period. Although there are some minor inconsistencies, most of the pitfalls have been filled! Great! 🤭

The setting is actually very confusing, the first few chapters are okay, but after reading too much, I feel inexplicable, what is it like to dream, you physically enter the dream, but it doesn't feel like a dream, you have entered the physical body, is it a dream without numbers? Dreaming in a dream, there are cards in the deck and the types of restricted cards, is it a game? . Apart from being a bit cool in some cases and attracting people to watch, this setting is really cool and inexplicable. It slipped away. Personal opinion. Light spray.

As a subscriber, I would like to say that before this book was put on the shelves, it was actually quite good. It had a supernatural dream-making style and occasionally passionate fighting scenes. However, after it was put on the shelves, it suddenly became too hot-blooded. To be honest, it was like having a brain puncture. It was completely off track. You see, the House of Horrors, which has a similar core to your book in the early stage, has been firmly in the top five of the monthly ticket sales, but the performance of this book is declining. It is really taboo to change the style in the middle of writing.

First of all, the advantages of this book are that it is light-hearted and funny, very funny, the demon card of love and courage, gentle and comfortable, the little slave, Jun Yichen can't stop changing suits, Xin Lei, the boss, is very tired when lying down, and the characters have distinct personalities The disadvantage is that it is comfortable and a nightmare light card Not very good, basically using strength to fight through nightmares, the writing is very average Some plots are really witty, but the latter part is a bit weak Generally speaking, it is a slap in the face, but it is acceptable. This article is suitable for reading as a light-hearted novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It was quite interesting in the early days. It looks funny, but the more I write, the more senseless and dumb it becomes. Barely able to see the Heavenly Gate. I really can't stand it anymore.

A powerful dreamer is not powerful by hunting dream-eating insects but by hunting ordinary people. He dares to write a plot where the dreamer doesn't care. He is drunk, has no logic, and has a serious problem with his outlook on life!

I don't read horror novels, but I actually enjoyed reading this. Laughing until my cheeks hurt

As for your broken chapter, there is a 🐔vote😆😆😆😆

Personally, I think this novel is modeled after Tomato's Swallowing Starry Sky. I haven't read more than 400 chapters, but the plot is basically the same as Swallowing Starry Sky, a cataclysm, and the protagonist is a monster-level genius who resists the future of the entire earth and would rather die than surrender. This is like a portable grandfather. On Swallowing Starry Sky, there is a legacy of the top monster in the universe, and then he bounces around the galaxy, and is noticed by the three top forces in the universe, and they restrain each other. . . Really, if it weren't for the protagonist using nightmares to scare people, I almost thought I was watching Swallowing the Stars again. . . Overall, I feel that this book is worth reading. Although I have read Swallowing Starry Sky, and although the general plot is the same, the characters portrayed by the author still have a style. They pretend to be cool all the way, do not run away, rely on will to support themselves, and the protagonist is invincible! ! !

I rejected the synopsis I saw at first It wasn't until I saw Blushing Heartbeat that I knew it was definitely not a serious book (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

It feels much more interesting than the novels I have read before

It's almost Chinese New Year. Can you update more? Two or three chapters in one day are not enough.

This book was really interesting in the early stages, and I basically laughed while reading it, but by the middle stage, I was reading it. . The story gradually becomes a template

The protagonist failed to create the card at the beginning, and the texture did not match the import screen. So if the big man with his feet was imported directly, would it be successful...

To be honest, I am quite afraid of nightmares, but this book can describe nightmares in such a... Loving way 😏? Thank you very much.

What about Chapter 31? Eaten by you?

It's on the shelves, set a flag, the heroine is not Jun Yichen, I, live broadcast, Chixiang

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I agree that Jun Yichen is the "heroine"!

The author had a really good start, with various functions, various ideas, and all kinds of fun. But once he entered the later stage of the subscription and entered the society, it was all the same old routines. Fighting and fighting were still the main focus. To put it simply, in the dream, it was just for fighting, just to show off, fight, and use cards. The dream was like some or not. What about the dream? Fighting in a dream? Too social? The elements are too simple.

The subject matter is very novel. Unfortunately, in terms of obtaining juice, the protagonist is forcibly reduced to intelligence. He only publishes nightmares and deceives people to experience them. There is no benefit at all, so only a few people are attracted. Why not give the dreamer some benefits after experiencing the nightmare? For example, physical skills or dream skills learned in online dreams. These have to be made public anyway, right? Make the overall strength of human beings stronger. For the sake of the progress of the black protagonist, I went too far. If all human dreamers experience nightmares, one hundred million dollars a day is not a dream. The little slave soon reached level nine, and the Tathagata Divine Palm became a regular discipline. Mankind's crisis will soon be alleviated.

Just because there is no female protagonist as mentioned before, prepare to test the poison and don't have a rubbish female supporting role.

Although this book has many problems, it is already the author's peak. Gourmet is very interesting in the early and mid-term, but it becomes boring from the mid-term. If it could be finished early, or divided into 2 or 3 books like a mortal, it would be much better in terms of plot. The next few books are not as good as each other.

The logic is confusing! Author, can you write novels after you wake up? Just like the card selling thing at the beginning, the protagonist sells cards without registering his identity? A normal person would register and then sell it! What a forced contradiction! 😰😰😰

You all go away. This book has so few updates and the content is so watery. The author is willing to wear women's clothing even if he doesn't pay back the debt. If it weren't for my many accounts to click and collect, there wouldn't be so many of them. If you don't believe it, I'll change my account and send you 666 later 🤫

I want to know who gave those two monthly passes

It's a cheap building, it's 10b on the first floor, and I'll take my sister on the shelf. . .