Dream of the Red Chamber: Brush and Ink

The author should not let Lin Daiyu marry Jia Baoyu, the most incompetent person.

The author's writing skills are good, and the combination of text and white is quite natural.

It's a good book, it shouldn't start a harem. I basically gave up after reading 200 chapters. The author's writing is good, and the story was good in the early stages, but then it fell apart. You still have a harem. I can only say that an 80-point online book dropped directly to 20 points! Not only the group of female surnames in the later period, but also Yinglian in the early period should not be accepted. Well, if you have a crush on a girl and suddenly sleep with other women, the plot arrangement feels inappropriate.

How to say it! So many books on The Red Mansion have always talked about loan sharking, but in fact, before the collapse of the Jia family, loan sharking was a small matter. I don't know why the current author thinks that this can control the lifeblood of the other party. Specifically, you can watch some crime-solving TV dramas from ten years ago, the kind that wiped out the evil forces, such as Ren Changxia? Before the evil collapsed, how many people had no way to seek help? Before it was wiped out, even if there were officials who made decisions for them, the final result was basically that the official would be demoted or... This was still the case twenty years ago, let alone the world called feudalism hundreds of years ago. The evidence of guilt will not be found until the building collapses. Holding the opponent's lifeblood is probably not holding the blade.

The protagonist helped the Lin family to make great achievements, risking a narrow escape, and snatched an account of salt merchants bribing powerful people throughout the court and delivered it to the Yamen in person. However, the emperor rewarded the Jia family with a palace maid as a concubine. This was too far-fetched. Well, the Lin family has been separated from the protagonist's family for many years, and they are quite distant relatives. The Jia family and the protagonist's family have nothing to do with each other. Not to mention that the Jia family is sister Lin. This is the first time in more than ten years that I have heard of the protagonist being a distant relative!

What disgusted me about this book was that the author clearly wanted to expand the harem. In the early stage, the relationship with Daiyu was written as if they were a couple for the rest of their lives, but later on, the previous masterpiece of poetry turned into a joke.

Everything else about this book is good, except why Lin Daiyu was chosen as the heroine. Every time she is involved in the plot, the author skips it. Doesn't the author feel depressed? It's not that I hate her, it's that the author made her hateful. From her situation in the article, as a man, he wouldn't want her. Maybe the author likes her. If it were me, I'd rather marry a well-matched woman who doesn't like her but doesn't hate her.

This book tells the story of Lin Daiyu's stupid question about dog-licking. There are different logics. Let's just say that Lin Ruhai's mother and family members showed their kindness, but turned a blind eye (not to mention that the protagonist is too young, and the protagonist has an uncle in the family). Then, when the Jia family's affairs were told to the protagonist, the Jia family's affairs were very clear, but in the end, things were not done logically, and what was thought and what was done were separated. The same goes for the protagonist. You clearly decided to be prudent, but in the end, you told Lin Ruhai everything you read from the Dream of Red Mansions book, and later even asked Lin Daiyu to find out the bugs. I see this has gone viral. The protagonist has a stable and scheming character, but ends up doing things so brainlessly. Forget it, I don't want to read it anyway

Jia Baoyu is not a good match, and Lin Daiyu is not a good wife. It would be too insulting to match the protagonist with Lin Daiyu.

Update soon. Can the author come out and say something? So many people are waiting to see it?