Long Live the Royal Brother

Opinion Building First of all, please don't disturb others reading. Secondly, if you have suggestions or dissatisfaction, please speak here and discuss the matter. In fact, the author is very good at listening to suggestions. Finally, those who directly curse others, give pointers to the author without even reading the book, express their sense of existence, speak in a weird way, and jump out of the book after seeing only the tip of the iceberg and say "What kind of iceberg are you?" I hope that the author will finish the book in 100 words and always look forward to the next moment when the protagonist can destroy the universe and finish the whole book, all the books will be deleted. Thank you.

Jianshui is an old author. I first met him in Final Catastrophe, and I can barely count myself as an old reader. The reason why I say barely is because I only read the first part of Cataclysm, and maybe I didn't feel right about it in the middle and later stages of the book. Then I had the opportunity to read it again, but unfortunately I abandoned it at the same place. I haven't read any of his subsequent books, so I probably know a lot of bad ones and eunuchs... I came across his new book this time, all because I had nothing to do, so I opened a data network and planned to find a new book by a great author to follow. Unexpectedly, it was too late. The master's new book didn't mention that Xiao Transparent's 100-person achievement was gone, and the signing achievement was gone. I had no choice but to retreat and find someone at level 5. At first glance, this water cutter looked very familiar. I thought it was strange that he was not close to becoming a master, so why was he still at level 5? So I searched with curiosity, and I was stunned at the first sight. Double open? ? ? I clicked on the book and saw the emperor pretending to be a Buddha. I fell in love with him, chased him, and invested 10,000. In the past few days, some people have been paying attention to the book review area, and they have also shared it with some groups. There is a group friend who hears that it is water cutting, and even says no, and does not want to get into the trap; In the book review area, several book reviews say that this book starts well, but due to the history of water cutting and the double book, it is very scary; Among them, some book friends are worried that they will not reach the shore at both ends of the double meeting... I noticed that Jianshuiis very accomplished. He spends a lot of time trying his best to answer every reader's question. He also has certain confidence in Shuangkai. Please trust him. As a book friend said, if too many readers say that the writing is not good and they need to change it, their confidence in writing will become lower and lower, and the writing will become worse. So I hope everyone will support him, whether you are reading another book or this one! ! ! The last few words are for Jianshui. Jianshui, you don't need to spend so much time responding to book friends. I believe you are good at it. I think you are also very busy with double-device. There may be other things in life. Please come by chance in the comment area. We are already very happy. Come on! ! ! ps: Personally, I only read this book, and I also recommend that everyone concentrate on supporting this book. Although there are not many new books by great masters recently, I believe we can do it. Let's send the great master of cutting water together (σ°∀°)σ..:*☆

I feel that Emperor Brother should be the best novel you have written so far. If it does not collapse in the later stage, the overall quality is still very high, and the style of the novel is still very novel and unique. It is different from other Invincible Literature System novels. It has great ideas and has indeed achieved some of it, but its strength needs to be improved. Xia Xiaosu is what interests me the most in Brother Huang. I really think it is very cute. This is also the attractive part of your book - the characterization of the characters is full of soul.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the author really has no outline? The beginning is really amazing, it is the best among the novels I have read, and it is very attractive. But when aristocratic families appeared in the middle period, I felt something was wrong. Isn't this just a traditional old routine? There is also fatalism. I really found that the author likes fatalism. After reading the author's previous books, they are all fatalistic. I am really convinced. This is a big poisonous point. From the beginning to the most recent chapter, everything emphasizes fate. This routine was fine ten years ago, but it is unacceptable now. It's best for the author to make an outline, otherwise the plot behind it is too confusing, so throw away some old routines and make it completely non-toxic.

I was fooled by this book review section. The first 20 chapters were so embarrassing.

The protagonist is too strong, and it was fun to watch at the beginning, but after opening a new map, the protagonist is still very strong. At the end of the whole book, the protagonist basically has the ceiling of combat power. He can crush him no matter who he faces. The nine people who are stronger than him are not interested in him. There is no one with the same strength, and there is no point in bullying those with lower strength. At the beginning, there are revenge, civilizing the world, and saving the world. But after writing these, the author probably doesn't know how to write it down, so he can only end it hastily. Some time ago, I had a long argument with a book friend who said that the author wrote the book without an outline. Now it seems that I was wrong. Up to now, the identity of Zulong, the identity of Miaomiao, the nine ancestors, and Su Yueqing's emotional line have been wrapped up, and they have not started writing. There are a lot of pitfalls in this book, and I have started to open a new book. The plot in the past few weeks is like putting up an outline. The whole book is anticlimactic, disappointing, so disappointing. I have been following it for more than three months and I don't want to follow it now! Goodbye author, I wish your new book will not be unfinished!

Okay, let's have an ending. It's better than the previous one.

Buddhist scriptures? Angry... Shaking... Cold... When can I, Daozang, stand up?

The small advertisement on Douyin vigorously promotes your book. Very good!

Come and tell me, Shen Nong, what is this book like?

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This author is a ruthless person, and his invincible articles are very good 🤓

It's a very refreshing and exciting book, and the author's writing skills are really good. Personally, I think the most important thing when reading a novel is to clear your mind and become the protagonist and follow the plot. To clear your mind, writing style, character design, and story structure are especially important to prevent readers from feeling out of touch with the plot, because once they are separated from the plot, the brain will start to think and start looking for unreasonable places. According to the author, this will be a long story lasting millions of years (words), and it may be the beginning of the story. Try your best to support, and hope it doesn't end badly or become a eunuch.

To be honest, this book didn't impress me at first. The reason why I continued reading was because I thought the author's writing was good, and there was a shortage of books. But I'm glad I persisted, otherwise I would regret it. Now that I have finally read all the chapters before the update, I would like to ask the author if only book lovers who persevere are qualified to enjoy the gluttonous feast you will have later.

I read a few chapters and it was very good. I read the comments but they were terrible. I hope they are different from the comments.

Did you only read the introduction and the Buddhist scriptures? I prefer Taoism.

I have read a few chapters and found it very interesting. It is my favorite type. I hope the author will update it soon. I am a fast reader and I am worried about waiting for others to read. It is too uncomfortable.

It suits my taste, but I have never dared to add a bookshelf for fear that one day it would become unappetizing. The author, hurry up and put more on the shelves, and finish it well!

I originally thought it was Miaomiao when I heard that the little girl Dai Meng couldn't practice, but later it was said that she just had a special physique and needed to practice hard, so I gave up this guess! Now, seeing the protagonist's sweet operation, I am increasingly suspicious that Dai Meng is the person the protagonist is waiting for!

The new book has been signed, please feel free to collect it

I drew a Xia Ji with my mobile phone. I didn't know how to color, so I had to use a pencil tool to draw to the end. However, it was still not aggressive enough. I was a little thin and my hair couldn't dance like crazy 😭

It was particularly beautiful until the end of the fire tribulation. Just run away from now on. The author lets himself go but cannot control the rhythm, and the setting becomes increasingly difficult to figure out. From now on, I read Chapter 2 and jump to Chapter 7. It's a pity that it was so rushed and unfinished.

Why is Qingmei defeated by Tiansheng, her sister is so good, but the protagonist is with Miaomiao. Although I don't hate the character Miaomiao, I still feel very unhappy (｀Δ´)! I kind of want to complain. The author likes to write a bit of ambiguity, and then all the female characters he has a relationship with later get married. Nani? If you don't accept it, don't be ambiguous and get close to the female character, okayヽ(￣д￣;)ノ. The protagonist has been written like a eunuch, so just concentrate on writing the plot and want a hammer wife. (Just complaining, just laugh)

I found some Buddhist moves for Pili puppet show One Thousand Truths (End), Six-Character Dharma Seal, Going to the Buddha Seal, Dust Lotus Peak, Foley Killing Karma, Heavenly Fire Killing Karma, Great Wheel Celestial Finger, Burning Wind Fire Lotus, Brahma Heart Killing, Buddha Yuan Qi, Ming Jian Tian Guan, Nine Brahmas Falling, Nine Brahma Killing, Heavenly Holy Light (three innate combination moves), Buddha Heart Killing Karma, a strike of every thought, my heart returns to the Buddha, Shura of the Wrathful Sea, Tathagata Summons the Heart Sutra, Transcendence and Forgiveness of Sins, Sword cuts off reincarnation, Armor-piercing seven-turn finger, One sun returns, Flying crane soars into the sky, Water flows for thousands of miles, Moves clouds to see the moon, Explores the throat and legs, One breath moves mountains and rivers, Thousands of miles of brain-shattering divine sounds (Heavenly Dragon Roar), Locks Qi and throws life, Thousands of rivers flow, Heavenly Road leads to return, Extraordinary holy power, Vajra shrinkage Bone method, step on the lotus upside down, double pupils in the water, Venus hanging horns, boy worshiping Buddha, leaning on the waist with hands, iron head, sky waves penetrating to the right, earth and clouds moving to the left, heaven and earth are infinite, shackles of Buddha's words, holy palm of Brahma, vacuuming to protect the body, separation of the Buddha's body, phantom guide, Luo demon cover, boundless sea of ​​Buddha, heaven and Buddha earth, vast loving-kindness, powerful spirit, forging demonic fire, locking hands, inversion Movement of Qi, Bodhisattva Seal, Ancient Tiny Lotus, Mahayana Yifan, Five Lotus Dharma Fingers, Buddha Zen Seal, Karma-burning Heavenly Thunder, Night Martial Strike, Heavenly Pass Double Refining, Falling Sun from the Sky, Precepts for Losing the Way, Jingwu from All Directions, All Laughing Heroes, Lotus Flower Sacred Road Opens Heavenly Light, Nine Brahma Divine Seals, Eight Dragon Divine Fires, Twelve Gods Heavenly Guard, Three Forms of First Meditation "Between Bodhi, the End of Reincarnation, and the Beginning of Nirvana" , My Buddha illuminates the lamp seal, My Buddha's loving voyage, One hundred hearts are as one, Vajrasattva Lotus Repentance, Zen Sea Thunder Sound, Buddha Sea's Holy Strike, Eight-leaf Seal, Tathagata's Destroying Demon Tribulation, Seven Days of the Great Sun, Mo Yang Hao Qi, Buddha's Face Holy Wrath, Buddha's Sea Boundless, Thousands of Calamities, Seven Buddhas to Destroy Sins, "Brahma Sea Divine Strike, Tathagata's Great Compassion, Lotus Sacred Power, World-Burning Heavenly Fire", Demon-Slaying Strike, Lotus Extinguishing Truth , Heaven's forgiveness, Recalling the Great Thousand, Heaven's Punishment, Good Dharma Seal, Avalokitesvara·Wishful Wheel·Prajna Paramita, Lotus Repentance, Avalokitesvara·Wishful Wheel·Dharma Net Vajra Seal, Avalokitesvara·Wishful Wheel·Great Compassion Palm of Heaven and Man, The Infinite Eightfold Path, Manjushri Dharma Sword , Buddha's word Tiansuo, Ten Thousand Vehicles Heavenly Dharma, Glazed Lotus Seal, Holy Dharma and Brahma Truth Appearing Ice Flower, Pure Lotus Flower, Pure Land Cloud Light, Original Vow to Pass, Amitabha's Response to the Dharma.

Thousands of words are gathered into one sentence. The author has great ideas, but it's not cool enough. Personal feelings: It's inexplicable, and people who watch it are very confused.

The beginning is very good, but it feels boring after the first five hundred years. Changing the map probably failed completely... And the author's power system is not generally chaotic. The power system of the current novel is basically the power system of online games. It is similar to the power system of level 60 in Warcraft. There is basically no chance to kill the level 70, and to increase the limit at level 60, you must upgrade to level 61. There is no other way. The power system used by the author is probably similar to One Punch Man, which is probably the new one. The realm is just like opening a new talent, skill, magic weapon column, etc. Even if your level strength is 10,000, if you don't open these things yourself, you will still be a first-level powerhouse. This setting is not bad, but the author's writing is not strong enough. Although he made the setting, it was set to cross the border. There are only a few people in the world such as the protagonist and the big boss, and the others are still stupidly kings of realms. This seems very strange, not to mention that there is still a situation in the setting where the upper limit of the realm will be stuck in the realm for hundreds of years, and then the combat effectiveness of other people is still calculated purely based on class? ? Do you do nothing when your feelings are stuck with others? There were already millions of level 11 experts five hundred years ago...

The overall writing style is quite good, the plot is a bit bland but interesting, and the character is very stable. But perhaps the biggest problem is that the author likes to use some vulgar contemporary memes and buzzwords to show his limited sense of humor. It will look very embarrassing. Others are actually pretty good.

Let me tell you, before 115, everything was pretty good, especially the first 50. After that, the plot became more and more dull. People who watched it wanted to doze off. It was so boring.

Wonderful Thoughts The universe of the time traveler is the main universe, the Yuanchu universe (that is, the universe of Chinese mythology), and the Huangxiong universe was originally a low-level or nascent universe. The universe was almost collapsed due to the battle between the immortal cultivators in the main universe. In order to prevent the collapse, the will of the universe connected with the Huangxiong universe to excrete the energy of the world (spiritual energy?). The immortal cultivators ceased war due to the massive loss of the energy of the world and gradually perished or proclaimed themselves (the end of the law). Era), the Huangbrother universe began to cultivate due to the energy injection from the main universe. The wills of the top powers in the main universe (the Six Saints such as Sanqing, Pangu, Demon Emperor, Human Emperor, Buddha, etc.) Were so strong that they could basically be engraved into the heavenly way or the energy of heaven and earth represented by the will of the universe. Therefore, the cultivators in the Emperor Brother Universe were unconsciously affected by the inflow of heaven and earth energy during cultivation and became similar great powers (reflecting the Heaven?) For example, the nine known ancestors are similar to Tongtian, Yuan Daode, Zhunti, Pangu, Nuwa, and Xiao Su's type of First Emperor. Now the main universe has basically recovered after a long period of cultivation, and then found that the development of the emperor's universe was good, so it planned to merge, so there was this invasion. Miaomiao's three causal blind guesses are that one is the original Taishang (actually Hongjun's reflection?) And the other is the emperor's universe. Zhiyi is the will of the main universe (Xia Ji may be the split of the will of the main universe or something), because Miaomiao was brought back by Yuan Taishang when he went to the center of the universe. Perhaps when Yuan Taishang went up, it was the moment when the official invasion of the main universe began. At that moment, he peeled off parts of the two universes and added himself to create Miaomiao. Miaomiao's possible results are all results. I have a wave of fantastic ideas, hahaha, thank you for reading this

After seeing Chapter 175 and analyzing it carefully, I roughly know why the author was a bit stuck in writing. It's not the author's problem but the subject matter. If there are readers who started reading Fengzi Monogatari more than ten years ago, they should be very familiar with this type of fantasy and immortality theme. The focus is not on the story, but on the time scale of the story. There are common problems in novels with a time scale of more than 10 years. This problem is basically unsolved now. It is because the time span is too large, which leads to the appearance of multiple roles. The main characters keep changing, lacking detailed descriptions, and the plot changes too quickly, including the protagonist. It is reasonable to be in seclusion for a long time or to suddenly change his personality. However, because the author wants to control the length, he often adds a picture It's still the same plot as before, but the next one has a completely new development and lacks the details in the middle (such as the appearance of the old lady, the younger sister suddenly becoming a busy queen, and the "sudden" personality change of the protagonist after meeting the old lady, all because of the lack of details) The early stage is good because time develops gradually, the details of the characters are gradually reflected, and the plot also develops gradually, but It was when the protagonist went to kill the emperor. Because the world view setting was too large and the time scale was too large, in order to advance the plot and reveal the world view, the emperor who was originally rendered as very important was unexpectedly killed casually as a puppet. It felt a bit anticlimactic, and the plot of revealing the secret also felt a bit too high-handed. After this plot, it started to fall apart. Lei Yun was deceived, joined the Su family, met Fire Crow Liuli, and then the catastrophe began. At the beginning, each plot is an important plot that should be described in a few pictures, but the author has written it in a few short paragraphs, so it feels like the author is rushing the plot. The subsequent development is even faster. The plots are one after another, and they are all major events one after another. The reincarnation of the ancestor, the release of slaves from the family, and the resurrection of the mother are all written in a short chapter. There is no detailed description of these events, and they are written quickly. I understand that the author has a big world view, and there will definitely be many bigger things than these events happening in the future, so he has to pack a lot of stories into the limited space. However, the consequence of this is that every plot seems a bit pale and thin. For example, the two people from Guan's family, the protagonist's father, are completely second-guessing characters. Writing it out does not make the protagonist's mother image fuller. Instead, it feels a bit strange, and the appearance of the old grandmother is too abrupt. In short, the time scale is too long. Books of the same type basically have this problem. A complete story with a huge world view needs to be crammed into 1000-2000 chapters, so every plot has to be shortened... Finally, people who say they want to watch it but not leave it or that you can do it and you like it should not come.