I Don't Want to Live My Life as the Demon King

This is always the case with Jianshui's books. Those who like it love it very much, while those who don't like it want to strangle the author. It's obviously a novice novel, but it's fun, and it's not the kind of novice novel that's full of violence and killing. The most important thing is that the protagonist's mentality and consideration are very grand, rather than full of petty-citizen philistine calculations. This is probably also the reason for the author. The author Jian Shui writes about the same protagonist. He has the heart of a chess watcher, rather than engaging in a snail-corner dispute in a world of flies and dogs. This is unmatched by many authors. The key to invincible writing is not invincibility by force, but invincibility by mentality. Anyone can write about invincibility by force, but very few can write about invincibility by mentality. Many people in the book reviews mentioned the ridicule of the protagonist by people around him. I think this is the most outstanding aspect of the author. In other novels, I almost feel embarrassed when I see the protagonist being ridiculed, but not in this book. The reason lies in the pattern. In other books, the protagonist and the supporting characters are in the same world, both physically and mentally, but this book is different. Although the protagonist is physically in the same world as the supporting characters, his spiritual play is much higher than that of the supporting characters. He truly regards the noise as the cries of a cricket. I listen to it when I don't care, and crush it to death when I care. This is not pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but a butcher slaughtering a pig. No matter whether the pig screams or not, the knife is there. When does the butcher kill the pig? What does it have to do with the pig? The spectators watched the chess without saying a word, because the spectators and the chess pieces were not in the same world at all. Even if the spectators are obsessed with the chess game. (Youshu comments are posted by myself)

It feels a bit strange. You are obviously invincible and have the ability to change, but you have to compromise. This is no longer pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, this is cheap! You can obviously make your sister a good person, but she has to be all kinds of slutty. You want to show that the protagonist doesn't care about other people's opinions, and there's no need to call her all kinds of names, right? Boring? Too busy to panic?

I have posted several comments in the past few days. Ultimately, it is because I like this book and I really don't want it to be like the previous one. As Jianshui said, it "collapses suddenly." The golden finger of the male protagonist is very interesting, and the characters of the heroines and Bai Pu and others who have not yet appeared are also very interesting. After reading the introduction of the character cards, it can be seen that Jianshui also has a lot of emotional plot foreshadowing. Although the description of the male protagonist pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger and the lazy Buddhist style is a bit overdone, it looks aggrieved and needs improvement, but the overall shortcomings are not hidden, and you can get a glimpse of the smooth plot of the struggle between heaven and earth, and finally the fight with the immortals. But I never expected that Jianshui suddenly drifted in a spiral and turned around the map. People who suddenly broke through the five limits began to mess up the streets. Seeing that they were really going to collapse, they couldn't help but jump out and give some suggestions. First of all, there is no doubt that it is absolutely not OK for small groups of overseas forces to break through the second limit, and it will directly lead to the collapse of the power system. What is this concept? In the new map that suddenly appeared, the soldiers were two levels higher than the current map's top combat power. For example, Xiao Yan went out from his hometown to practice and found that the bandit soldiers were two levels higher than himself. Or Tang San goes out to play JJC, and finds that the person with the lowest points is two realms higher than him (just use these two ancient novels that many people know about as examples), or in Mystery, Xiao Ke goes out to run business in Loen, and finds that the ordinary priests in the opposite country are all angels. How can this work? Although, Jianshui made it clear that overseas people rely on alchemy and weapon refining, taking shortcuts, their own strength is not high, and they rely purely on magic weapons. But isn't the magic weapon strength? The demon weapon does not attack the male protagonist, but if you use it a few times, won't others see clues to the male protagonist's identity? Also remember that there are too few people in the Yin Division after all. Even if the demon clan is integrated, how much help can the demon clan who have been reduced to materials be able to help? So how does the male protagonist face such a large and high-level overseas force? To be specific, in fantasy novels, as long as they are not infinite, the maximum level is usually ten. Dou Po went from Dou Master to Dou Sage and then became emperor, Douluo went from Soul Master to Titled Douluo and then became a god, and best friend went from sequence nine to sequence one and then became a god. This is the case. In fact, the same is true for the Demon King. The first ten levels can be regarded as one big realm, then the three realms of extraordinary legend and myth, and the five major realms. Finally, there is the highest realm of transcendence, which is also ten. Then, different levels shouldreasonably correspond to different identities and statuses. The second limit of the Demon Emperor corresponds to the Soul Emperor in Douluo, and the bestie's sequence five should be the backbone of any top force, let alone the middle-level sect where this second limit chick belongs. Jianshui can specifically refer to the typical characters in these successful examples and compare whether the corresponding design of your own outline is reasonable. Secondly, the plot is incompatible with the setting of the Holy Society, which will lead to the collapse of the plot. As of now, I say it is an invincible novel, but the essence is that it is about the hero's battle of wits and courage with the Holy Society, and how to excel in chess. The setting of the Holy Society is an organization that is connected with heaven and attempts to change the heaven and earth to welcome the immortals. This means that Shenghui should be the biggest boss before the Heaven and Earth Bridge is connected. But before, "Zhulong" was one of the top 19 members of the Holy Association, and none of the five limits of heaven and man were broken. So even if Zhulong is at the bottom of the Holy Association, it is impossible for all the other eighteen members of the Holy Association to break through. After all, the strength of a force must be in the form of a pyramid. This makes the strength of the Holy Association significantly lag behind overseas. Generally speaking, fantasy novels, which always write about changing maps and raising the upper limit of realm, are pure and refreshing novels, but obviously this book is not. In other words, all kinds of substantial upgrades and the Machiavellian writings to be written are essentially in conflict. Jianshui needs to change the map and villain, which is incompatible with the original intention of the strategy article. Fantasy plot writing, refer to Yue Qianchou's book. The top villains are just one group from beginning to end, such as Daojun's Nine Saints. Even if the map is changed, the characters, plot, and realm are closely related to the previous ones. Of course, it is also possible to connect the Holy Society with overseas forces, such as setting it as a branch of the Holy Society in the Great Zhou Dynasty, but in any case, the people in the second limit should not be unknown people, especially the current plot promotion has just entered the middle stage. So I personally suggest that the realm of this little Luoluo can be downgraded to extraordinary or legendary, which is equivalent to the low sequence of best friend. Under the Five Limits of Heaven and Man, it is no problem to rely solely on elixirs. Wasn't the former aide of the prince extraordinary? As for those who have broken through the five limits, those who are higher than the real strength of the male protagonist, and those who are higher than the paper strength of the Holy Association, they must not spread wantonly. In addition, regarding map conversion, it is really awkward. Suddenly found a calling and went over to get the treasure? I remember that Longkong had the map transfer experience of Zhaizhu and other fantasy masters, and Jianshui could refer to it. In addition, having said it all, let me mention one more thing, that is, the male protagonist lacks clear goals and plans. For the same example, Xiao Yan fought for the duel with Nalan in the early stage, for Xun'er in the later stage, and for justice in the later stage; Tang San resisted Wuhun Hall for Xiao Wu, for his mother, and for his partners; Xiao Ke had clear goals and a very positive attitude in order to avenge the captain and uncover the mystery of his identity. Xia Jie's purpose is actually very clear, to protect her sister, and later maybe for the demon clan or something. But the male protagonist has always been too passive. He waits until I find out that someone is trying to mess with me, and then I strike first, making my opponent suffer a loss, and then I hide behind the scenes and be happy. Such a plot is okay, as is setting the male protagonist to be such a casual and indifferent person. But if it has always been like this, the problem is huge. Just like the problem of the male protagonist suppressing his Buddha nature, too much is not enough. The lack of a plot actively driven by the male protagonist makes it difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement. Fantasy novels cannot introduce male protagonists, which is definitely a fatal problem. Unconsciously, I coded so many words in half an hour that it felt like there was a chapter. . I still really hope that this book can be written well and finished. In recent chapters, the situation in the Great Zhou Dynasty has become intense, and Jianshui's writing is quite good. This is the issue of levels. No matter how different the cultivation methods are, no matter how unstable the foundation is, the cultivation system will always be the same, spanning two levels and reaching the sky. And these two levels should be the gap between the male protagonist and the biggest villain boss currently accessible, not the gap between Xiao Luoluo. Finally, cut the water and add oil ฅ(˘ω˘ )ฅ above.

"On the Willful Jian Shui and the Demonic Xia Ji" The world and characters in Jian Shui's book have a profound demonic nature. What is demonic nature? Demonic nature is willfulness. Willfulness does not mean willfulness, willfulness is the devil's nature, and willfulness is the nature of the Tao. "The Doctrine of the Mean" says that straightforwardness is called Tao. "Shuowen" says that rate means catching birds. Therefore, being straightforward does not come from one's own temperament, but from following one's own desires without exceeding the rules. The nature of the heart is like a wild bird, it must be restrained with a net, otherwise what is the difference between man and beast? For the same reason, Buddhism and Taoism emphasize great freedom and carefree travel, but Buddhism and Taoism also have precepts. What are the commandments? For ordinary people, the precepts are constraints, but for practitioners, the precepts are the protector and the end of catching birds. Turn around, the characters in Jianshui's paintings and the world in his paintings are a demonic world, where everyone is persistent, everyone is crazy, and stupidity is ignorance, ignorance leads to old age and death, and the cycle of twelve causes and conditions repeats itself. Even the undead, non-dead, and reverse dead in the setting seem to be immortal, but they are actually in the state of old age and death without knowing it. This point is not limited to Jian Shui, but exists in most authors. But what is different about Jian Shui is that Xia Ji is a chess watcher. He has an extraordinary heart but goes in the opposite direction. The fundamental direction is wrong. So what if you are invincible? The depression and boredom are clearly revealed between the lines. How can I be invincible? It is clear that the enemy is myself and invincible. The opposite of Xia Ji is Ji Yuan, another one of my favorite characters. He is not in Xia Ji's demonic realm, but in the realm of Zhenzhi Dao. Jianshui's writing is recognized as invincible, but in my opinion, it is clearly a xinxing style. Extremely passionate about love, he is bound by love. Xia Ji, who is extremely passionate about love, is destined to perish.

I have fully ordered this book. I finished reading it today and will write a review as usual. This is a wonderful story. Although it is unfinished... Its flaws do not hide its flaws. Although I originally thought it would end with the layout of the human world, I never thought about the fairyland plot. It is completely unnecessary to wander around the fairyland with such an increase in power. But it was a little surprising that it ended so hastily. Talking about the plot, the calculating showdown with Zhulong in the early stage is the highlight, and the suspense of the Demon King's layout in the middle and later stages is also very gripping. I just didn't expect to read it in this form in the last chapter. Generally speaking, the quality of the early stage is better than that of the later stage, but the later stage may also be unsatisfactory. There were a lot of foreshadowings and pitfalls, but in the end I lost control and inevitably missed a lot. Judge Cui Yu, Zhang Daolin, Queen Rakshasa... They all should have more plots, but it was a pity that they ended hastily. In terms of world view, standing against immortals and Buddhas from the perspective of demons is also one of the highlights. Putting aside the settings that beautify the demon clan, it is essentially a battle between races. Man and demon, the man wins, and the demon king regains his place, that's it. There is no right or wrong. People kill monsters to get pills, and monsters also eat people. It's just that in this book, people are stronger, while in other books, monsters may keep people in captivity. Natural selection, survival of the fittest. Whoever is stronger, whoever survives to the end, has the final say. For losers, they can only get the sympathy of spectators, and then they have to rely on their own efforts to survive. The author's writing is good, and the plot is not too poisonous or cruel. It is still a light and interesting invincible novel. I recommend everyone to read it.

Why is Xia Ning called a vixen, but Xia Ji is not crazy? His sister was hurt but he didn't take revenge immediately. Before, he even thought about testing his sister's thoughts and relationship with demons. At the beginning, he said how good the relationship between siblings is. I didn't see it at all. But at the beginning, the ferryman was pretending to be a dick. Please, someone harmed my sister! On the contrary, it was Xia Ji himself who was trying to find out the truth for the so-called layout. He said that if his sister is unhappy, then you can't do anything. Just do nothing. —————— Author, I feel that the relationship between your siblings was not well described before, and it was not that real. . It feels like you can scold me, but scolding my sister will kill your whole family and your close relationship with you. That kind of madness. My personal evaluation and personal understanding. It doesn't matter if I don't adopt it. I still like it very much. I give the recommendation votes.

I have basically read all of the author's invincible articles, but I haven't read them since the middle of the series. To sum up, it started well, but then everything got messy! This one is a little better, but it's a bit messy now! The most fatal point is that the protagonists in the author's works are only strong in strength, but their mentality is very immature! Just like a child playing with a machete! The author uses the technique of a romance novel to write an invincible novel. The beginning is good, but the mentality of the protagonist never changes. In the middle and later stages, it becomes very boring and very abusive!

If the protagonist really feels that his sister is unhappy and wants to help his sister break out of the cage, then should he let his sister know that the protagonist has the ability to break out of the cage? Others don't need to know. It doesn't matter if they think the protagonist is a loser, but the sister should know. It turns out that the protagonist likes to pretend to be a loser, and often asks his sister if he is happy in the cage. The protagonist is just a loser in his sister's eyes. Even if his sister is unhappy, will she tell the protagonist? What's the use of saying it, so I must tell the protagonist that I am happy, and then the protagonist really believes it, which makes me look confused.

It's okay to be low-key, but it's boring if you're too low-key. The protagonist is a relative of the emperor. He is extremely powerful and is looked down upon by all kinds of sidekicks 😍. What can he do? He spends his days drinking in brothels and writing poems in a decadent manner. But yes, the protagonist likes this lifestyle, there's nothing wrong with it

I almost couldn't watch Toxic Bar at the beginning. The content is quite good. Why do you have to turn the protagonist into a trash that everyone can call a fool? How can a governor who is obviously very powerful and an uncle of the country laugh at the protagonist? Did the author deliberately write like this so that he can show off to the protagonist? What idea is too poisonous?

You can completely explain it, but it must be reasonable. If you feel that people don't understand how you write, it means that your writing is not mature enough and people can't understand it. Some settings and plot directions need to be carefully considered. The so-called enjoyable writing is for readers to enjoy reading, not for yourself to enjoy writing. Maybe you think that writing it yourself is the most important thing, and it can be regarded as your own novel, but you have to understand that what you write is an online novel, not a physical novel. The reflection of online novels lies in the readers' reaction, not in yourself. Of course there are exceptions, that is, you think you are creating a classic. The author is also asked to think carefully.

Dear author, can you update it earlier? It's too harmful to the body to update at 12 o'clock in the morning.

The writing is okay, but the plot makes people feel a little frustrated. The protagonist seems to be an expert who is isolated from the world, but he has to join the world. The supporting characters are very dull. In summary, Invincible has to pretend to be a loser and pretend to be a pig to eat the skin of a tiger. It is good not to recommend this.

The author has serious modern thinking. In ancient times, these things were very strict. If someone said something behind his back and was reported, it would not be easy for the person who said it, let alone the younger brother of the emperor's wife. He said that the emperor was a relative of the emperor and was a idiot. He just didn't take the emperor seriously. In ancient times, rights were very important. This is not the case in modern democracy. It looked extremely embarrassing. Bye-Bye

After keeping it for so long, it's time to start reading. Looking at the character introduction, Xia Ji played six this time. He transformed into the Demon King first and then the human. Finally, he didn't worry about being woken up easily. What! You say this book has nothing to do with the final catastrophe? Do you believe it? I can't do it anyway

Finally caught up with the progress of everyone 😒😒😒

I always feel like the protagonist's life is so crappy

Get up, open the starting point, click on this book, and look at the table of contents... Well, it seems that this fight is not over yet.

I'm here again today, the recommendation vote has been cast, and I'm getting some experience.

The experience of book review comes again. It's just annoying that you have to post five or six times a day to gain experience. Being fattened.

It's actually pretty good-looking. It just sucks at the back

Recommendation votes have been given, and the fattening process continues. Wait until you save up one or two hundred chapters to read it all at once

I'm almost ready to watch it all at once. I like Xia Ning. I won't return to normal until the end, right?

Not much to say, author nb, bad ending**😁

Although I watched the pirated version, I still came back and gave you a monthly pass

This book is very good, and a lot of things are used in some places. Anyway, I hope Xiaoyu will update it soon.

The author's writing style is very good, a bit like reading martial arts novels by Gu Long and Liang Yusheng. I like it.

I don't want to read pirated versions, I come to Qidian to support the genuine ones.

As you continue to fatten up, watching it once is the most enjoyable. I hope Xia Ning wakes up soon

The outline of the article is okay, but it's a pity that the plot is useless.