Rebirth: My Wife's Family Owns a Mine

300,000 Words, 6 comments, the author should think carefully,

This is a proper persuasion to quit the novel. The rebirth novel only talks about a few principles and the plot seems to be good. It is not the kind of wimp. You, a good beginning is like a wimp. There are only a few hot spots in the rebirth novel. The novel Liu Anhua Youming is quite good. He took a different path and wrote romance novels from the rebirth novel. This is the kind of thing you are good at.

The mistake in this book's writing is that it's too heavy-duty and I can't read it. It's rare to find a good book. What happened to the author who was so depressed after being reborn? Is his life too depressing? It brings emotions into the book, making it depressing, boring, and boring for readers to read.

The author's sentence "You don't know how powerful a village-level cadre in a mining area is" made me laugh. My hometown is a mining area, and it is well-known throughout the country. The mayor of our village is very rich, and he could drive a Land Cruiser in the late 1990s. The villagers have been suing for more than ten years, but they still can't afford it, and everyone in the township and county is well fed. In every election, money is delivered door to door, clearly priced at 2,000 per vote. Do you understand? For people within the system, it is no wonder that the official level can crush people to death. A township chief can flatten and round them at will, not to mention that in the eyes of the protagonist's level, there is no difference between a village chief and an ant. If the author's vision can only see this far, then it is understandable that no one will read your book.

I really can't stand being a monitor anymore. I don't want to be a monitor and I won't be able to do it after a lot of effort. Do you insist on writing about the teacher forcing him to become a monitor? How many authors have died on this and you still write about it? Are you really 6

First of all, I'm not complaining, I'm seeking truth from facts. There are indeed many things that are unreasonable. The author set it so high at the beginning, and there was too much of a gap. To be honest, during the process of advancing the article, except for some caution, I did not see the knowledge reserve and structure of a person who had the perseverance to pass the Qingbei exam and subsequently became a department head of the State Council with a net worth of tens of millions. There are many things, not to mention reincarnation. Even a person with certain experience should be able to think independently and deal with things from a high perspective. Furthermore, the author's main plot is not clear enough. Many things in the early stage are quite confusing, including the positioning of the protagonist. At the beginning, it is said that even if you don't want to work hard after rebirth, it should be a relatively relaxed and indifferent route. In short, the author's writing style is good and the topic selection is also good, but there are too many poisonous points without overall consideration.

, Lick the dog, just persuade him to quit.

Come on, I hope you can persist

It's destined not to be popular, pig's feet are too frustrating!

What kind of thing was written? No wonder it was praised like this. The writing is not good, which makes me feel happy and unhappy at the same time. You deserve to be thrown into the street!

It feels like you have turned a country rich man into a billionaire