A Writer in an American TV Drama

This system is so poisonous. It even forces the protagonist to only pick up one woman. Haha, please, this is an American TV series. What if the protagonist gets cheated on? Can you forgive her?

The protagonist's IQ is so impressive, he looks like a primary school student in his forties, and he has also been a graduate student at the Military University.

I've only read a few chapters, and following the plot is called turning the plot around? Still remaining kind, did John kill passers-by? He didn't even kill the doctor who might have exposed his condition. This system is set up to be poisonous.

I read the first three golden chapters and couldn't help but post. First of all, the protagonist is forty years old, has been a soldier, and has read research. As a result, his speech and thinking are no different from those of a fourteen-year-old child. The author also explains in the chapter commentary that the person who was transported through time has this kind of character. Come on, I have traveled through time, what does it have to do with my original personality? Even if you want to maintain your character so that no one sees the problem, can you not use the tone of a fourteen-year-old when describing your thoughts? Then, a system was created to allow the protagonist to maintain the "good and lawful" camp. Then the protagonist goes directly to tell the killer how to kill people without causing trouble. Aren't you from the lawful alignment? Helping a killer kill someone is directly a crime, right? Then knowing that the protagonist committed a murder and not going to the police is also a crime of cover-up, right? What order does your lawful order follow?

The author needs to consider that not everyone has watched the American dramas in the article. The more American dramas appear in the article, the greater the chance that there will be American dramas that readers have not seen, so the details and character introductions must be sufficient. For example, after John's dog was killed and his car was stolen, you wrote that he was holding a hammer in the basement, but you never said what he was doing with the hammer in the basement? Forge weapons? There are so many details that have been ignored. Sometimes it's really confusing. Moreover, the author did not put much effort into character portrayal. It is impossible for the characters to behave in such a childish way, which is obviously inconsistent with the character style in the movie. For example, the female heiress of the Black Du Society in John's second movie, you describe her as a nympho, but she behaves as a hero throughout the movie. How can the people of the Black Du Society behave like kindergarten? They will only behave more reserved, more graceful, more rational and realistic. It greatly destroys the reader's impression of your work, and you have to lower your IQ to read it. The author is asked to put more effort into writing before and after writing. Read more information before writing, and after writing, use readers who have not seen the movie to check to see if there are any details that are not described in place.

Poison, all poisons, vomiting blood

I was originally looking forward to reading this magical book, but after reading dozens of chapters, I found that this book is extremely poisonous, so I won't write it next time.

I just saw Robbery. Overall, it was well written, but I feel like the score won't be very good. One reason is that the system has too strong a sense of presence, and it is a bit putting the cart before the horse if it does not allow this. The second is that the author's subjective enthusiasm is too high, and the author's personal characteristics are too distinct. From the beginning, the setting of the heroine feels a bit like holding the reader's neck and feeding water, that is, it has to be done even if it is not possible. This sense of compulsion will dissuade some neutral passers-by. The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.

It's really bad to have a single female protagonist, I want to be a father, it's malicious

Traveling through time and becoming a father 🙂