Online Gaming: The World of One Piece

Write less realistic storylines, especially those involving rescuing a rich young lady—they're incredibly toxic.

Four rather serious plot problems First, how exactly did the protagonist earn over 30 million? There's absolutely no explanation. Second, in the early stages, it was obvious that no one knew that Devil Fruits were cheap to collect and could be used to build one's own power. How could the protagonist be so stupid as to want to exchange Berries for money?

Here's my recommendation vote! Many One Piece fanfics fail because of their lack of originality in battles and their tendency to follow trends. This time, the One Piece plot is just a backdrop, which I think is pretty good. I hope the character development doesn't fall apart. Good luck!

Currently, it's acceptable; hopefully, the author will maintain this approach.

Keep it up, author! There aren't many readers for this genre, but there's a small group of us who enjoy it. It's usually hard to find something like this, so I was lucky to find one today. If it stays on track and doesn't have a bad ending, I'll definitely finish it! 🙂

It's already 440,000 words and 177 chapters and there's still no recommendation? Is the editor too laid-back, or is the author on a blacklist? I can't feel any presence in this book.

Is the protagonist not very smart or is the author deliberately writing it as not very smart? Too smart

Wouldn't it be better to directly clone the Celestial Dragons and secretly control the Navy?

After reading over sixty chapters, I felt it was too rigid, as if everything was fixed. There were no surprises in running dungeons; it was just like a monotonous account. The equipment also seemed rather useless.

Is this a game or a journey into the One Piece world? If it's a game, then focus on leveling up and learning new skills—who do you think you are?