Zhu Xian Luoxia Peak

I didn't understand that the protagonist of the swordsman sect in the world of Xian Xia has to use a gun, which is very weird. The second point is too bland and doesn't have any fun.

Fans are not fans, and daily life is not daily life. It was renamed: "My Paddling Days in Zhu Xian". Political power comes from the barrel of a gun, and power comes from one's own strength. Not to mention the Ghost King, Poison God and Beast God, you will burp in the Ten Thousand Bat Cave after going down the mountain! If I want to see the emotional entanglement between Xiaofan and Baguio Xueqi, I might as well just read the original work! !

As a time traveler, the protagonist has no golden fingers, no outstanding talents, and no amazing adventures. He has a lot of face-saving psychological activities, and he also likes to pretend. The problem is that he is good at it and loves to pretend. An educated time-traveler, after practicing Taoism, must at least cultivate his moral character and behave calmly. As a result, he pays attention to his external image to save face. If his clothes are torn and his back is exposed at most, he can't run as fast as others, as if he has never been to a swimming pool? A time-traveler has read the original work and keeps saying that he wants to change his regrets, but in the end he has been watching things develop naturally like a bystander. What is the difference between this and a native in the original work who changed his name? Why did he say that he had flapped his butterfly wings many times without any effect, so he went to the corner of the corner to pick up a thunderwood that no one had ever picked up in the original book (did you cut a lonely Hu?) When practicing his natal magic weapon. The regrets in the original book were basically all about Zhang Xiaofan. Originally, there was a lack of care, and Tian Linger was abducted and attacked by Qi Hao, a scheming man. Since the protagonist did not change, how could he be so lonely? Zhang Xiaofan was ignored because he was not on the same mountain peak, and Tian Linger was snatched away without help from Zhumai Martial Arts. So what is the difference between this plot and copying a book?

Is there anyone who is from Tianyin Temple? Fa Hai, Faxiang's senior brother, has the kind of tattoo on the body of the mighty Tianlong. After Puzhi killed Caomiao Village and came back to explain the matter, he identified Tianyin Temple and then built Leiyin Temple?

The heroine Lu Xueqi! ! Must her

I support the author, but I also have to say something bad. It seems that people who are purely Zhu Xian fans cannot sign contracts. Many previous authors have been such eunuchs. If you change it slightly and make it infinite, or not just a Zhu Xian background, it should be possible. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

The protagonist is too selfless, and Luoxia Peak is so poor. Shouldn't he give the things to Taoist Tianyun first, and then Taoist Tianyun hand them over to the leader, so as to increase Luoxia Peak's say in Tianyun Sect? And not just anyone can practice the Heavenly Book, right? Wouldn't Qi Hao be able to do it after learning from Cangsong, who rebelled against his family?

Um, no, I remember the original article seemed to say that it doesn't matter what weapons the disciples use at Dazhu Peak. In other channels, they all use swords, or don't they? There are also Divine Sword Controlling Thunder True Techniques, Demon-Slaying Ghosts and Gods, Seven-Star Sword Technique, etc. Does this mean that the protagonist has given up on those offensive techniques? There are also many times in the original text where the hand pinch sword technique appears. Even if it's not a sword art, I thought about that scene, holding a spear in one hand, a magic weapon in the other hand, and wearing a Taoist robe... Uh-huh, uh, uh, uh, it's so embarrassing. To be honest, the whole wheel, sieve, fire stick and other smaller images are better than guns, long weapons like spears, and then holding the magic weapon with the other hand, it's really a bit overwhelming. I didn't think it was anything at first, but then I saw the discussion, and then I thought about the scene. Standing in the sky, with a long gun flying above my head or chest, I felt a bit inconsistent. At that time I would rather be a sieve or a fire stick...

Come on, author! ! !

Why do you hate Qi Hao? Not to mention the Zhuxian world, even in reality, there are too few men and women who are not scheming, and even the mainstream despises such honest people. If Tian Linger follows Qi Hao, at least her life will be secure and she will live a good life. If she follows Zhang Xiaofan, what can she do? Besides, Qi Hao didn't force Tian Linger, he fell in love with an upright person, let alone a scumbag. Qi Hao may not be a good person, but he is not a bad person either, let alone he may become an excellent leader in the future. As a leader, can you simply evaluate him as an honest person or whether he is scheming?

It felt unreasonable for the protagonist to give the Mountain and River Fan to No. 7 And take it back to the leader. It was a bit too much. The Heavenly Book was shared with the whole sect. As long as it can be controlled, it didn't matter. It was okay to give the Albizia Bell to Lu Xueqi. After all, he was greedy for his body, but it was unreasonable to hand over a treasure like the Mountain and River Fan directly to the leader. After all, Luoxia Peak did not have a decent family background. , There is no mention of Luoxia Peak's magic weapon that is on the market in the whole book of Zhu Xian. I finally got one that is pretty good. Isn't it good that I don't need the one given to this peak? To lead the sect out of poverty, you must first settle down around yourself, otherwise you will definitely get people in the whole peak to isolate you. Qingyun Sect is not a harmonious group, and each peak is a The small group is friendly on the surface but secretly still scheming. The right to speak throughout the book has always been between the peaks of Tongtian, Big and Small Bamboo, and Dragon Head, because these lines all have Nine Heavens Divine Weapons. Suru has a Moxue Seal that he doesn't use and doesn't give to others. And I remember that when Xiaofan put the stick away, Daoxuan wanted to be greedy, because Tian Buyi kept chasing him. And besides him, it is true that no one can use the talent to return it to him. Bringing Shanhe Fan back to Luoxia Peak can fully equip a talented person to come out, and the right to speak comes. The peak you are at does not have the right to speak and still wants to do things. It is impossible to let your master know that you have treasures. If you don't first increase the foundation of your poor peak, hand it over to Tongtian Peak without vomiting three liters of blood.

Will Baguio win the love of Zhang Xiaofan? Zhang Xiaofan clearly knew that Baguio had deceived him, and that Baguio had obtained the Book of Heaven from him, and Zhang Xiaofan did not fall out with his fellow disciples. Under such circumstances, Zhang Xiaofan betrayed his disciples for Baguio and killed many people. This kind of love is too terrible! ! !

If I were the protagonist's master, I would be furious. Not only did I give half of the credit to others, but I also handed over the treasure. Are we not from the Qingyun Sect at Luoxia Peak?

Where is the essence of Zhu Xian? Many authors fail to understand this. In terms of magic weapons, Zhu Xian's magic weapons are mediocre, let alone compared to the Legend of Shushan Swordsman. Even Legend of Sword and Fairy is much better than him. In terms of characters, the heroine back then was really amazing. Refreshing. But now, it is no longer unusual. As for the exercises, they are even more simple and crude. The plot is also relatively ordinary. The only thing that people still remember is his ordinary training days in the early days. It seems to take people back to the age of innocence. However, the author brushed off a few pictures in the early stage and started inserting his own story directly from the end of Lu Ma. In fact, many fans can hardly continue writing after the end of Liumai. Because the plot behind it is actually not very popular.

No heroine? What's so interesting about slowly upgrading and slowly following the plot without grabbing the heroine?

By the way, can you tell what the protagonist's personality is? I have read more than 80 chapters. When I look back, I think that apart from the good talent of the protagonist, I feel that there is nothing outstanding, just like the background board 😅😅😅

When I saw the Book of Heaven being shared with others, I couldn't stand it anymore.

For me, who wants to read Zhu Xian's novels, this book is tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to discard. After reading more than 50 chapters, I still have no desire to continue. Withdraw

Nowadays, the book is not well-known. I would like to ask all book friends to recommend it. The more people read it, the more motivated I will be to write.

When writing about Zhu Xian, the main character's magic weapon is actually a gun...

Apart from anything else, the author's personality is quite good. After reading it, this image came to mind. The protagonist pointed a spear into the sky and shouted loudly: Jiutian Xuansha turned into divine thunder, and the brilliant power of heaven was used to attract it with the spear. . . Take my magic spear and thunder control technique!

🤫 It's rare to see people like Zhu Xian, come on! Let's talk about an old man who is almost 100 years old, Qi Mouzi, how do you think and dislike him when he fucks an 18-year-old Tian Linger?

I saw that the weapon was a long gun, forget it, it definitely doesn't suit my taste, so I said goodbye.

Being able to write Zhu Xian fans in a mediocre way is also a means

😰 I found that many fan novels are written to compete for the heroine, but why are they not competing for the heroine at the critical moment? If Zhang Xiaofan hadn't saved Lu Xueqi's life during the martial arts competition, it would have been impossible to do so later. Sometimes people's hearts are really very small, and they are still cultivating immortals. Since there is someone in their hearts, there is no way they can get in later...

If you choose a gun as a magic weapon, you will be drunk and it will affect your reading mood You can make a dice magic weapon, which is better than a gun.

I don't know why the world of cultivating immortals must be about swords, especially the world of killing immortals, where there are so many magic weapons. Zhang Xiaofan is not a sword, and Baguio is not a sword. To be handsome requires creativity in magic weapons and spells. I can still accept the bad writing, just because it's not a sword? Xiao Ding may have been so angry that he couldn't finish writing "Zhu Xian"

If the protagonist uses a gun, the author will give him the skills to practice the path of fighting immortals. Is the author serious about letting a mage do close attacks? The writing is bland and not exciting.

The sense of immersion is extremely poor! The series that ruined the original work, and what's even weirder is that in order to show that this book is not a supporting character's brainless wit, the author went crazy and made pig's feet smart? ? ? ? ? ? ? Especially after it was put on the shelves, the quality was not as good as before~~Goodbye~

It started out okay, then got worse and worse! In the end it was almost impossible to watch it! So I can't continue writing until Qingyun is in chaos.