Time and Space Ring for Mortals to Cultivation to Immortality

I really like the writing style.

What the hell, you did this right after it was put on the shelves. Pity Feihua? ? ? ?

Chapter 23: Giant Poison! If someone wants to kill you, just ask them to pay you a medium-grade spiritual stone and that's it. You're simply retarded!

Not bad, looking forward to the follow-up 👍

From the beginning of the Blood Trial, Pig's Knuckle has taken the word "mentally retarded" to the extreme. It is simply forcibly losing IQ, a huge poison! ! !

The balance is all given to you, author, don't be a eunuch!

It is full of loopholes. The author is a fake fan of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Confirmed!

Already invested! ! The writing is good~ Come on~ I love you more than anything~

The writing needs to be improved, but the writing style is good and interesting. I'll invest in it.

Can you stop writing in such a retarded tone? Isn't it outrageous that your nose bleeds when a beautiful woman smiles at you? Those who didn't know thought you were writing urban novels

Can you please stop mentioning it to future generations if you have nothing to do with it? It makes people act in an instant. When I write about Yuan Yao, I feel extremely embarrassed. I don't know how to write emotional scenes at all.

↖(^ω^)↗Come on, the writing is great 👍

Ollie, there's nothing wrong with me. I'll double-click to follow you.

The details and character are very discouraging. After just one quick look at Mortal, I just started writing. I feel like a fake fan and there are too many loopholes.

His personality is too out-of-the-box. He should be more stable. Don't be like a loser otaku. With such a character, he feeds dogs no matter how many opportunities he gets. Every time I see the protagonist laughing and joking, I have the urge to hope that he will die soon.

Write quickly, write quickly, it's not enough to read

The author must calm down and slowly outline the plot. Don't write too fast and end up losing your grip on the steering wheel and overturning. This book is still good. Come on.

I came to read this book because of the title Mortal. It was pretty good at the beginning. The more I write about it, the more I let myself go. When writing about surfing and discotheques, you shouldn't use so many modern words about mortals. You also need to shout about beauties and beauties. It's really embarrassing to watch. Moreover, the main character is too self-indulgent and has an unpleasant personality. He has been practicing immortality for hundreds of years. He is not calm at all. He is far different from model workers. The style of painting is even worse than that of ordinary people. Now it is like reading a comedy novel.

This ring's ability to travel through time and space is limited to mortals, not some immortals. According to the current number of words in one chapter, three chapters of Renlingxian are enough for you to write more than 30 million words. Come on, keep an eye on you.

I already have the Palm Heaven Vase, don't want it!

Update! ! ! ! If it's not enough, I'll put it on the shelves soon! ! Only after spending money can the author be motivated. If you dare to become a eunuch, send a razor blade to the author's house

The author said, I will update after get off work in the evening ✊✊✊

The setting has been written, an urban one and a fairy tale. I want to write something different. I will write it next year and publish it. I hope everyone will support me. The tentative name is Urban (I teach people in dreams). It is about a person nicknamed Mr. Li, who can enter other people's dreams, and after the dream, he can also reflect reality. There are two names for cultivating immortals (suddenly there are young people) (Young people in the world) I don't know which one is better. The main setting of cultivating immortals is to combine cultivating immortals with games. The realm of cultivating immortals is combined with the rank of games and the level of weapons. It can also be regarded as a self-innovation. I don't know if anyone else has written about it. I wish everyone a good New Year. I am in Shijiazhuang, and I also hope that the epidemic in Shijiazhuang will pass soon.

I can't write this Zi Ling anymore, how can I invest in it? I said at the beginning that I don't want to seize the lead role and seize the female lead. Is this how you do it?

Update! ! ! ! If the eunuch dares to enter the palace, he will send a razor blade to the author.

This protagonist is the first loser in this book. Not to mention four hundred and fifty years to level up a small level, other passers-by level up faster than him. My daughter and Li Yuanhua have been upgraded several levels over the decades. When Han Li established the foundation, he formed the alchemy in the middle stage. After the protagonist was promoted to Yuanying, he ate the Hunyuan fruit to the middle stage. Han Li's back foot was in the early stage of Yuanying.

The Immortal World of the Second World is a sequel written by a mortal. I think it has written the essence of the mortal style and completed it 😁

There are so many typos, why don't you check them?

Are there any good-looking mortals that I would like to recommend? I know of mortals who are scientifically cultivating immortality, and they are okay.

Let's write a family novel about mortals. First let the family grow up and become the Yuanying family, and then you and your wife will ascend to the spiritual world and grow up in the spiritual world.