Scarlet Lord

I feel like it's well written. Come on, big brother

The author has great ideas! Admire! Collected and learned, please update! Welcome to visit us again!

I have collected it a long time ago, and I'm sorry that I haven't commented yet~ The big brain is quite big, and the book is also my favorite type~ The big chapter sometimes has too many words, but the rhythm is very steady. No matter what, I will keep chasing 😁 The support is huge~

Congratulations, the tenth chapter of Si Jin Gong is finally online, although it has been changed beyond recognition. 😭

First of all, I would like to thank a reader for putting forward some opinions for Xiaoye This reader raised some issues in Xiaoye's works, and I hope everyone can discuss them. This reader said that in the first volume, Xiaoye's writing was inappropriately detailed. Xiaoye quickly touched on some plots that should have been written in detail, but Xiaoye was long-winded about some plots that should have been omitted. The result was a very poor reading experience for readers This reader also did not give specific examples of inappropriate details, which made it impossible for Xiaoye to find suitable reference points for failure I hope there are other readers reading. If you feel this way in the article, you can mark it for Xiaoye, or provide evidence here, so that Xiaoye can think about whether the details are really inappropriate, and then improve it and continue to make progress Xiaoye hereby hopes that readers can provide some valuable suggestions, let us make progress and grow together Honglin Yeshuang 2020.5.10

Here, everyone can share any character that they like, hate, or have feelings for. You can share your own views and opinions based on the plot of the story, or your words and actions. You can also vote for your favorite characters here. If Xiaoye sees it, it may add more plots and scenes to your favorite characters (๑Ő௰Ő๑) Honglin Night Frost

If you have any good plot ideas, golden ideas, or interesting characters, you can tell them here. Xiaoye will select some interesting ideas that can be added to the plot and write them down in the article. Honglin Night Frost

If you are impressed by a certain plot, or feel that a certain plot moved you, you can extract it and share it with everyone here. Xiaoye hopes to write better and better articles. At this point, it is inseparable from everyone's support, so if you think there is any plot that makes you feel worth mentioning, please select it here! Honglin Night Frost

Come on, come on together, create a group, and let's discuss it together!

Three taboos in the opening of online articles: description of the big scene (setting) at the beginning, no protagonist halfway through the chapter, and too many characters at the beginning. You have two. It may indeed be a work with a grand setting, but it also needs to start well. It is better to start with the small and then expand the grand settings later. A small suggestion.

Big brother, big brother, don't worry about being popular. If you are popular, help your brothers 😃😃

All that needs to be said is in the comments under your post above. Stay calm and don't collapse. I have added your book to my bookshelf and will read it when I have time. Come on!