League of Legends Millennium Warlord

I was really speechless after seeing it, and I couldn't hold it any longer. I really had to use my trumpet account to buy the book again, and I wouldn't be happy if I did it again! The plot after arriving in Ionia really made me dizzy! I have never seen a harem novel that could write to death a woman who has an emotional entanglement with the protagonist! Even if you say that woman can be reincarnated, will she still be the same person after reincarnation? ? If we don't write down a few women who make the protagonist attracted, won't the protagonist understand the preciousness of feelings? ? ? It's not enough to kill one, do you need another one? ? ? Don't know if you thought I was watching nm Korean drama here? ? ? Do you have to write a tragedy to make the characters in the plot profound? To be honest, reading novels online is just for the sake of relaxation and happiness. It really brings a bad mood... People who read it are really speechless.

To be honest, the author, your writing is a bit deviated from the title of your book. The adventure takes up more than half of the chapter. I feel that your emphasis is putting the cart before the horse. You write the adventure in detail, and you briefly write about the development of the warlord territory. To be honest, the protagonist is not a warlord to me, but an explorer like ez. I am a little disappointed for someone like me who risked the title of the book. I already wanted to see the development of the Emerald Territory affect the grand background process of the entire lol, thus changing and leading the plot. But what I saw was a person... Playing alone... I didn't realize that I was a lord. This is completely different from my definition of a warlord. Maybe the author is suppressing the plot or transition. That's all...

Author, you won and successfully persuaded me to quit. From the beginning of more than 300 chapters to Chapter 400 of fighting the Haitians, it became more and more uncomfortable to read. Goodbye👍👍👍

The plot is written loosely and slowly. If you follow it up, it will feel like you haven't watched it yet. Just wait and see when I remember to read it again.

Let me give you some personal opinions. Comments are not welcome: I also have a lol-type book on my bookshelf: xxx method of wearing a stick. That book is based on official game events (+ author's ideas). The main core character is a female character, so I won't say the specific evaluation, but I feel that the score should be better than this one About the book: In my opinion, under the political correctness trend of Qidian Official: Criticism of post-official documents, it is inevitable that the book's score is unsatisfactory. Has the author considered changing the main line (from my perspective: the main line of the book is the female characters, although there are other heroes described, but the protagonist's fundamental intention is to go for the female characters). Would it be better to change the main line to territorial development (farming)?

Why does this book feel more and more wrong after 300 chapters? Is it because the protagonist's brain is confused by the runes or is the author Wen Qing suffering from an illness? First it was the dead girl, then Vastaya's sister-killing testimony, and the emotional line became more and more strange. The junior sister Xiyue, if you like it, you like it, if you don't like it, you don't like it. After flirting with her, she ran away and then came back to flirt with her again. The plot of Qian Jue is fun to watch, but why Feng Nu ran away is hard to figure out. In the next volume, the plot is about a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. At one moment, it is about a war in my own territory. At another moment, the protagonist is walking around with his big bird. I wonder if the protagonist is not a lord? Don't you care about the territory? If you want to pit man against God, you must first have a good foundation! Furthermore, is there another fight with Ryze at the end of the plot, and amnesia after the fight? If that is the case, it would be boring. I can guarantee that your subscription will continue to decrease. Alas, this book is getting more and more confusing, and it is becoming more and more difficult to understand.

I won't post some pictures this time, otherwise this building will be swallowed up again

I have only read more than 300 chapters. The first part is acceptable, but it is a hurdle to reach more than 300 chapters. Let me briefly summarize: 1. Although my wife was cut into two parts with a knife, and her upper body was sucked by the enemy, but in the lower body, I blended her and other corpses into four soldiers to fight against the enemy, in order to completely destroy the corpse and eliminate all traces. 2. Zhenmo hacked my wife to death. I was very sad and angry. Although I said I would avenge my wife, I would not torture Zhenmo's soul just to have a relationship with Qian Jue. Although my wife just died tragically, I just want to hang out with Qian Jue now. 3. Although my wife is dead, Qian Jue said that she can mark her to let you know that no matter how miserably your wife dies now, she will be reincarnated in dozens or hundreds of years. Then it will be fine, even if the real devil hacks me to death. Wife, now he has followed Qian Jue to reincarnate, and he has also solved the knot of more than 20 years. He has been forgiven by the master who accidentally killed him, and he has a good death. It doesn't matter. Anyway, my wife will be reincarnated, so there is no need for revenge. 4. Although this knife cuts my wife in half, I still want to take this knife. Holding this knife and imagining the scene of cutting my wife in half is really hot while fighting. The whole thing can be summarized in one sentence: When a female cousin has to erect a monument to visit

The previous article was quite good, but starting from the Ionia chapter, the more I read it, the more uncomfortable I became. The goal was to find a way to live forever, to fight in the spiritual world and come back. I had to set up a situation where I couldn't come back immediately, and there was danger in the physical body. One of the heroines, Yue Xi, died to buy time for the protagonist, and then to In the garden section, another heroine, Elena, died inexplicably for the protagonist. In the end, she went to find a way to live forever, and a plot of giant ruins that had nothing to do with the main plot was forced and watered down. In the end, the main plot did not have a way to live forever, and it wasted another three years of other people's youth. In the War of Valoran chapter, we fought a few mediocre battles. Later, we forced the protagonist to lose his wits and asked an angel to deliver him even though he knew there was danger. Is this worthy of the caution of a top killer in his previous life? It was said that the arrow had to be fired when it was on the string. It was so difficult to fight in the front, but he slaughtered the city by himself in the back. Then when he played with the Mother of Masks, he lost his memory. When he played with the star spirit, the two angels were still separated, and the protagonist's strength was blocked. What the hell was it written? The more I wrote, the more frustrated I became. From the time the protagonist traveled to the present, in general nothing has changed. Except for sleeping with women, what has changed in the main plot? It's written with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. It's dead and divided. Author, you write a hammer. I saw chapter 448 and pre-ordered chapter 535. I won't read these. The more I read, the more frustrated I am. I'm sorry.

The plot threads are a bit scattered, and some of the plots are a bit unclear, but this one is passable. In this case, the author should be familiar with the story of the Alliance universe in order to write this book, but the author needs to consider that the readers do not know, such as the original names of the major heroes and some key node events, many things need to be explained more comprehensively. The more important problem is that many things about the protagonist are not explained clearly, such as the dragonborn in Chapter 63, and where the put away equipment came from. . There is also the protagonist's magical ability. After testing it, there is no further explanation. How the protagonist is going to develop it is explained. When it cannot be used, it is only mentioned in a few strokes. For novels with extraordinary powers, the growth of the protagonist's power must be a core thread and needs to be clear enough. There is another problem. What fan fiction needs is the main characters other than the protagonist, so that readers can correspond to the original work. But in the book, for example, the barbarian girl sisters are very confusing, and neither the origin nor the relationship with the protagonist is clear. It's still the same problem. What the author knows, but the readers actually don't know, so we can't just talk about part of it.

I've been reading it for so long, and I just wanted to enjoy it, but I couldn't stand it anymore. What's next? I'm going to read a book about war in a long way. Just write it, as if it has no theme. I write a little bit here and a little bit there. There is no main character or anything. It feels very verbose. There are too many useless things.

The more I write, the more messy I am. There is a vague meaning here and there. I have a serious problem with literary youth.

Well, I read it as a cool article at first, but the more I read it, the more tired I became, the more I read it, the more annoyed I became, and the more I read it, the more unhappy I became. Goodbye.

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If you feel confused, it should be better to read with reference to this picture

You are one of the most arrogant authors I have ever seen, even if you write the characters to death. After that, you still want to say something about the transformation of the protagonist, and then say that some readers don't understand your idea and so on. And then I have to harp on every time I write a character to death. No matter what the plot requires, the characters all serve the plot. Arrogant to the point of disgusting😄😄😄

Rather than saying that this book is about dead girls, it's better to say that this book didn't think about how to write it at all in the early stage. There were too many ambiguous female characters in the early stage, and some of their attributes were repeated, and they were not well described. They were hammering here and there, and it was very confusing. Moreover, they were all created by the author and lacked characterization. Later, time flies and the characters die after they die. Do you know who you are? If you ask me, just do it less and fast forward more. Lol There are so many female characters that you have created yourself. Not to mention that it takes a lot of brain cells to create characters, right? And I was very confused a thousand years ago. You said it was a layout, but not much. No, it seems that there is something if you think about it carefully. But if you look closely, you can only see the male protagonist being chased by Ryze all over the place. Hurry up and forward to the lol time period.

To be honest, literary youth is a disease that needs to be cured

Can there be a yordle in the heroine 🙂 For example, Stay Up Late Poppy, Hammer Cannon, Cannon Poppy, Garlic Poppy

Starting from reading novels, I have read a lot of League of Legends fan fiction, but I have only finished one. I don't know why I couldn't get into most of the fan fiction after reading it halfway through. This book is quite good so far, the writing is also very detailed, and the characters are very three-dimensional. As long as I maintain my current level, I think I can continue to follow it.         And I also like the background story of League of Legends, I hope the author can stick to it, come on😊

Is there any other part of this book that I can read besides the first 200 chapters?

I always feel that the author's writing style is a bit strange and uncomfortable to read, and there are many places where it is not coherent. The characters on the stage are also very messy

After a year, I came back and saw that it was still cold...

There are really not many League of Legends fanfics with 4 million words. I just started reading it, and I can see that the author wavered midway but still insisted on writing. The author is quite perseverant. I think the current writing style is pretty good, and the protagonist's personality and outlook are relatively close to my taste, so I can accept it. It's just that driving is a bit too secretive. I suggest you study this aspect in depth (I recommend another book I like, "Proof of the Sun King", about Warhammer, but the focus of this book is just three words: Warhammer, harem, and stockings). It doesn't have to be a large scale. More descriptions of appearance and clothing can be used to visualize the characters and make them three-dimensional. After readers finish reading, they will have a specific image to attract more readers. Finally, all 15 monthly tickets for this month are given to you. I hope the author will work hard. I hope the author's writing skills and income will get better and better.

When I saw the title, I thought it was a hegemony story, but it turned out to be a harem story disguised as a hegemony story. Why did you write so many women so carefully? Am I here to see you accepting women? I came here because of the title of your book Thousand Years Warlord. I want to read Rivers of Blood instead of Qing Qing. I have written a lot. If I want to read the harem, will I read it on this software?

Does it start with crossing the river in white clothes? 😥

He looked at the messengers in front of him who claimed to be the Mother of Masks, the Lord of the Underworld, the Mask Twins, whose compassion was beyond the so-called mortals. Be patient with yourself. There is a reason for this. Because since the so-called ghosts of the underworld came down from the mortal world, the peace of the underworld no longer exists. It uses the evil magic it learned during its lifetime, as well as the terrible dark magic that enslaves souls. And the tyrant-like dark thoughts came to launch the evil conspiracy against the Mother of Masks, who may have known nothing at the time. What happened next, as you can see now, was that we were faced with his evil and powerful power. This is for the sake of the peace of the entire underworld. After hearing what it said, Lester had basically determined the current situation and indeed traveled through the past. Is there still too much risk? I was still too reckless. But after this experience, I will figure it out one day. So what happened to the time-travel accident? But now. He looked at the two spirits who looked arrogant but not arrogant at the same time. Perhaps my strength has been compromised. But my country is still doing well. Maybe I can do something? Get caught and study the secrets of the so-called Star Spirit and Star God. When the heaven is erected, it may be possible to travel through time, but it will be longer. Maybe the Human Emperor's foreshadowing can be buried in Ionia? But I don't like the name Ionia very much. Look again. .