Start with Nezha

Let me first talk about the reasons why this book was dismissed from the beginning You can delete mine, but I am speaking out of conscience and from the perspective of a reader, and I am not the only one who thinks this is very poisonous I hope the author can take it into consideration. Yin Shiniang is a character in the TV series that cannot be described in words for me in my childhood, if nothing else. In addition, the actors are very good. I really like it very much. But at least the first 30 chapters of the book feel a bit pity about its marginalization. Maybe it's the protagonist's personality, but it's still watchable. The pace is really fast at the beginning, and the portrayal of other characters is very shallow. For example, the Huang family has no interaction with the protagonist at all. It all depends on them saving the protagonist and then the protagonist will be nice to them. This can be understood as the protagonist has a loyal character, but he can be said to be indifferent to the Li family even though he says otherwise. If the protagonist only cares about what is good to him now and the past has nothing to do with him, then there is no problem in doing so, but it is not the case for Yang Lianhua. Isn't this a bit of a double standard? The Li family could hide away because Yin Shiniang's love was too heavy and they were afraid of owing too much. However, Lotus had done a good job in the past, but when it came to the competition to recruit a bride, it was extremely vicious. It gave people the feeling that the parents were indifferent to the beauty and I wanted them all. The character has collapsed. You say you don't want to have anything to do with Lianhua, but you still go out to hook up with her. Is it really bad for her to marry the Dragon Prince? It's just that you can't be with the person you like, and it's just love at first sight, and it may not go deep into your bones. He also went to forcefully beat up Prince Long. On the other hand, since you like someone who has vowed before that you don't like a beauty who only cares for the world and then can be hard-hearted towards a girl without meeting her biological mother, then why not? Don't say that you don't want to see the person who has sacrificed so much for you in your previous life unhappy. Then you have the three views of hooking up but not marrying her, and not letting her get married? ? It was so poisonous that my stomach hurt for more than an hour. I didn't want to comment at first, but I'm really addicted to it. Let me remind you. Not every book is written according to the readers' wishes, but you can't write something that destroys people and destroys three views. I just feel it's a pity that a character I like is marginalized, but it's still watchable. I'm also looking forward to the future development, but suddenly the character collapses, it's like poisoning, it's really uncomfortable😭. You can go and read Chapter 30 of Chapter 30. I'm not the only one who found it poisonous. One person may be a special case and two people are an accident, but what about ten hundred? It's not like we're full and looking for you to be unhappy. I don't know about others, but I really am not a person who likes to talk blindly. After all, you write a book for the public to read. Come on. I stopped at chapter 30.

When I first started watching, the sense of immersion disappeared immediately, it was a time-travel in the local area. ? And what the hell is this plot?

The more I write, the more I stretch my legs. The protagonist repeatedly jumps between indecision and ruthlessness, no different from a severe mental patient. This chapter is as tender as water, and the next chapter wants to hack the girl to death. I directly suspect that several people are writing this book, so the protagonist's personality and principles of dealing with things change repeatedly. The protagonist's ability to survive until now and become a quasi-sage depends entirely on God's will, and he has no plans or long-term plans of his own.

You have to know that even in modern times, if a child is abandoned by his parents when he is just born and is adopted by his adoptive parents, his feelings are for his adoptive parents and not for his biological parents. Therefore, when a time traveler travels through his body, it is almost like being adopted. He has no relationship with his original parents.

How did Nezha become a hero?

This book is really poisonous, not ordinary poison. I saw that he couldn't stand it when he changed worlds. Three souls and seven souls, the earth soul stayed in the world of Fengshenbang to repay the cause and effect. The finished world gave him a memory of Pangu's creation of the sky. He was so scared that the remaining 9 souls were all scattered in different worlds. Damn it, I really had enough. What the hell was written? Three souls and seven souls were scattered and they were not in the same world. How could he survive? Just write it down? I really can't stand it anymore. It's very toxic at the beginning. The male protagonist's double standard comparison is illogical. I thought it would be better in another world, but it turns out that I thought too much 🙂

The author's writing style is really good, and he vividly describes a patient with severe schizophrenia. It says "Zhongjun is patriotic" at the front, and immediately after. Rebellion and founding of a country. In the front, it says to stay away from the heroine, but in the back, it immediately goes on stage to compete in martial arts to find a bride. In the front, it says that he and Daji are in love with each other, but in the back, he immediately wants to kill Daji. In the front, it says that we are not in conflict with Dashang, but in the back, we want to dominate the world. The author makes the main character say things that sound like farts.

You always say you owe others too much, and you owe me nothing for things that didn't happen. You are not a reborn person, you just gained the memory of a time traveler, why are you sentimental! ! !

Md, this Nezha chapter is so disturbing and poisonous, this trap is completely unreasonable, Nezha owes Nezha so much, he is self-righteous, understands, and fully shows it But the pig's foot who has traveled through the past is completely unreasonable. If you have any feelings, it would be ridiculous to have to worry about the emotions of cause and effect! The protagonist helped once or twice, but still struggled with Nezha. This is such a bitch. If ordinary people traveled through time and were still like this, they would have killed her long ago. It's still weird! And destiny marriage is nothing more than a shackles given to you by heaven and earth. You don't want to wade into this muddy water. I understand. In the end, I still write it down. Maybe I need someone to pave the way for the following. This paragraph alone seems to be really rooting. I am cultivating immortality but not cultivating my heart. I am a time traveler! Everything is lacking in the world, but there is no shortage of women. A time traveler does not want her, but sympathizes with her and is afraid that she will bring unnecessary consequences to him, and the consequences are very serious. If you put yourself in someone else's shoes, and you are a time traveler, you must have read novels and movies such as time travel and rebirth. In this case, even if you sympathize with the other person, you don't like her. Besides, you also wrote it. For marriages that are deliberately guided by others, most time-travelers will think that they are not strong enough and are secretly planning something according to the development of the plot. If your strength can be improved quickly, you can be free, but your love is too bad! (Travelers are all self-centered people. If a woman dies, you can find her again, but if you die, you will get nothing. I don't understand this truth.) It is written as if the protagonist is Nezha's rebirth. I can't help but complain 1. Your protagonist's personality is very conflicting. The details of the time traveler are not shown. He is not so self-centered as to be like the rebirth of the original plot character. 2 Can you learn from the infinite flow of other worlds, just keep growing, or wander around casually? You are completely a plot character who is reborn and starts another life. Brother, time traveler, you have to know the meaning of this word 3 The routine for you to become stronger is also written drunk, don't People have not yet obtained their original weapons, but you have them at your fingertips, and they are not bad. Where are you chatting and gibbering? Cultivation is not about competing with heaven, earth, and people. If you don't have a wealth, law, and earth companion, how can you fight for it? How can you practice? It seems that there is no time traveler's attitude of maximizing his own interests. That's it, this book is too dead. I don't have that kind of spirit, let's go I hope the author will take a look at it. Travelers are all self-centered people, people who maximize all interests. Anyone who has watched Dou Po Douluo knows that Xiao Yan needs strength to be prolific, and Tang San also needs strength to be prolific, all for yourself, you,,,,,

The level of cultivation is not very clear. I personally think that no matter which cultivation system it is, it pursues the transformation of life in the early stage in order to achieve immortality. In the middle stage, it is free from dependence on the material energy of the world and becomes self-contained and self-sufficient. The goal in the later stage is to create the world, create the universe, and become the creator god. Its own brilliance runs through the timeline, transcending the constraints of time and space logic. It is the ancestor of the Tao, the source of Tao.

I don't understand that Nuwa would suppress Nezha. Logically speaking, Nuwa is the Holy Mother of Humanity. The more talents emerge in the human race, the greater the luck she can enjoy with the prosperity of humanity. And Nezha is also a human race. Even if Nezha becomes a Daoluo, it is impossible to deal with her. After all, Nezha is the mother of the human race. There is no reason for Nezha to join forces with Yuanshi Tianzun to deal with her. At most, they will not help each other.

My mother, this book should be renamed - Nezha's Courtship in the Heavens Every time I say I don't like it, but the descriptions of seeing girls are all about panic, excitement, moving hands and feet, touching heads, and pinching faces very skillfully You are Yang Jian, you didn't even let Yang Chan go, and you married a Seven Immortal inexplicably Girl, didn't you want to prevent the Seven Fairies from violating the rules of heaven? You turned into a mortal and became husband and wife. Or you made it clear after you went to heaven, but you also asked the Jade Emperor to marry the Seven Fairies. I beg you, don't repay your kindness. The more you repay your benefactor, the worse it will be. Every time you go to a new world, there are always a few heroines you don't like. You say you don't like them and don't want to be together, but in the end, you win them all before leaving the world And I often lick some people without thinking. I don't know why. I was really confused about the Madonna of Yaochi in Zongyue. You licked this world from beginning to end, but before you left, because of an eternal kingdom, you instantly became a saint like a Buddha I vomited

No wonder there are no recommendation votes. The version you posted is a non-mainstream version. We are all old bookworms who have been influenced by the list of gods for many years. Who will buy your non-mainstream version?

I found out that few science fiction books are science fiction, and all of them are fantasy. Damn it.

I couldn't read more than 30 pictures. I told a book friend, what do you owe a time traveler? You don't follow me at all. You are a modern person and you owe someone a favor.

Ten Brothers, The Legend of the Dragon and the Dragon, Journey to the East, The Legend of the Gods, The Legend of Jigong, The Legend of the White Snake, The Legend of the Fish and the Beauty of Heaven and Earth, The Brilliant Spring, Pig Bajie, The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, Celestial Master Zhong Kui, Pawn Shop No. 8, The One Who Conquers Demons. These are basically written by no one. Many other people have written badly and don't want to read them.

You can't watch it. I could barely watch it if it wasn't like this before. Now I have changed my name and changed it inexplicably. It almost poisoned me to death...

The more I read, the less I understand 😥

Spicy chicken, spicy chicken, spicy chicken. All the novels I have read combined are not as poisonous as this. For example, Yang Lianhua, the protagonist does not want, but ruins her marriage. The author explained that he did not want to give away a daughter. But in Chapter 50, in order to kill an enemy, he even risked his fiancée's life. And he admitted it directly without explaining it. Not to mention the careless Holy Mother, she can even understand her own enemies, which is really enough.

To be honest, it was a bit disgusting. I felt uncomfortable for several days after watching it.

I couldn't bear to see 72, and I really didn't want to say anything. What happened to Nuwa? Do you really think saints just have high martial arts? So why is Confucius called a saint? Why is Lao Tzu a saint? It is because of their thoughts and practices that they are called saints.

It's good that the heroine is not Lotus. When I watched the TV series, I thought this woman was a rip off. She was largely responsible for Nezha's misery in the early stages. In the original plot, I think Nezha didn't like Lianhua in the early stages, but more because of the loyalty between friends. Later in the plot, I think he fell in love with Lianhua only because he was moved.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is too poor, and the writing is too stiff and embarrassing. I feel that the author (⊙o⊙)... The writing technique started ten years ago. Of course, it's my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

A saint is a fruition status, not a cultivation level. The three souls and seven souls are human beings. The immortal is the soul. The real big man is the incarnation, the corresponding body, and the projection appears everywhere. The author's writing is too low-limited and inconsistent.

It feels outrageous to have inherited memories and bring the original protagonist into it.

The new chapter of Fairy Sword is really disgusting. They won't let them go or be defeated because of Nightshade in the end. They threaten to kill them all.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a stupid protagonist. He didn't destroy, put away or hide the weapons that he knew would cause trouble for him, but actually let Xiao Jian hang out. This is the most poisonous thing. Book friends, if you think you can resist this wave of poison, then fall into this trap.

Just because I don't like it doesn't mean that others don't like it. Why are there so many poisonous comments under every book in Qidian? It's really tiring to see the books I like being called poisonous.

Why do authors always slap themselves in the face? If the outline is better and more detailed, it must be a god-like book. After you finish writing it, you should imagine the coherence and conflicts in your own mind. Make bold suggestions and reflect more on the plot you wrote

From chapter 25 onwards, the author feels like he is disgusting the readers. . . ,