Nonsensical Entertainment

The writing is alright, but the plot control is terrible. Don't overthink things. Do what's appropriate for your position. The worst part is the so-called time travel incident. Even a novice author shouldn't make this mistake. It's the most basic flaw. The two biggest flaws in online novels are giving away women and having two time travelers. Everything else is acceptable.

I dropped the book as soon as I saw the appearance of another time traveler and the gift of the girl. Isn't the appearance of a second time traveler a bad thing for both the protagonist and the readers? So why did you continue writing about him? I just want to know why. Where's your outline? You didn't just write whatever came to mind, did you?

In the tenth or so chapter, they started getting entangled with the short, big guy. I tried to keep watching, but then I realized how annoying these public intellectuals are in real life. Sorry, I can't keep going, so I'm giving up.

I decided to quit after reading 24 chapters. It's unclear if it's a single female lead, but Liu Yifei is confirmed as the female lead, and the protagonist's groveling attitude is obvious, with all sorts of subservient behavior. They started by cashing in on catchy pop songs, but the lyrics to "Mice Love Rice" were repeated countless times in just a few chapters, which is unbearable.

I've been following your books for two years now. They're good, but the updates are slow, and I'm getting impatient. So I wrote my own book, "The Unfamous Movie Star." If you like it, please recommend it to me!

There's a reason it's not taking off; the poison isn't fed that way.

Since you can't use real names when writing entertainment novels, at least use nicknames and aliases—anything the general public knows! Reading entertainment novels relies entirely on the celebrities involved, and now I have to guess who it is? And the protagonist's name is truly indescribable; it's so awkward to read.

It's very well written and I really like it. I just saw it was published. Just a little bit about the plot and dialogue of a TV series, please don't write so much about it, I've already seen it all. There are already few good domestic dramas, so why not plagiarize less and instead plagiarize more good foreign dramas to develop our own careers? Wouldn't that be better?

This book is good except for its slow updates. It also drags out the plot quite a bit; after so many chapters, it's only reached 2005, the year of the movie *Crazy Stone*. Basically, other novels would have already started at that point.

Personally, I believe Han Sanping has made significant contributions to Chinese cinema! He supported and nurtured many young directors! For example, Guo Fan and Wuershan received funding from China Film Group to study in the United States for an extended period! I don't understand why you portrayed him as a villain; of all the managers of China Film Group, he is the only one who has left a lasting impression.