The Blood-Cursed Martial Artist of Hogwarts

What should I say, I hate people like James Potter.

This... I always feel like there's too much going on, which makes me lose track of the previous plot as I watch it.

There are too many things that have nothing to do with the plot For example, when discussing the magic part, the author not only wrote down his own conjecture settings, but also wrote survey data and calculation formulas, a whole page, my God! The main character was not touched for most of the chapter, just the setting. Then we discussed political economy, from Eastern and Western Europe to North America and South Africa, from ancient times to the future. The problem is, a lot of it is private conjecture Then in the third grade, the author used half a chapter to write the original plot. I almost thought that the third grade was fast-forwarded, but it was a free chapter, you wrote too much It doesn't make money either I'm not saying that the setting is not good, the author is very rigorous. The complete and detailed world setting is good for the article and will reduce a lot of bugs, but it is not possible from the reader's point of view, because then your book will not be so good-looking, and it will not be able to attract more people to like it I think the private setting can be reduced appropriately, and don't put too much data and repeated words. Also, if you want to mention the original plot, it is best to only write it when the story develops to a relevant stage, without sending it out together. This makes me feel that the author posted his own auxiliary memo and forgot to delete it In short, the setting is complete, the plot is quite good, and the content is a bit chatty. The above, that's it

Regarding your writing of history, I think the barbarians are right when they say, "You can't wake up a person who is pretending to sleep." We no longer need to find confidence in history, and history is written by the victors. The stars and the sea are our goals.

I can't stand it until chapter 3, I'm really speechless

After watching the beginning, I was so confused by the setting😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵

It's a nice book, but why is it not available? Also, why is this book all free? The author is not a good person.

I really don't understand how no one reads such a beautiful fanfic.

What are you doing writing so many traditional Chinese characters? It's so hard to read.

There are too many emoticons, and the protagonist is inexplicably happy