Hogwarts Blood Curse Martial Arts

Finally listened to it, thank you very much. It turns out that I regretted that Harry and Hermione were not together in the original book. Many thanks to the author. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

What should I say, I hate people like James Potter.

This... I always feel like there's too much going on, which makes me lose track of the previous plot as I watch it.

There are too many things that have nothing to do with the plot For example, when discussing the magic part, the author not only wrote down his own conjecture settings, but also wrote survey data and calculation formulas, a whole page, my God! The main character was not touched for most of the chapter, just the setting. Then we discussed political economy, from Eastern and Western Europe to North America and South Africa, from ancient times to the future. The problem is, a lot of it is private conjecture Then in the third grade, the author used half a chapter to write the original plot. I almost thought that the third grade was fast-forwarded, but it was a free chapter, you wrote too much It doesn't make money either I'm not saying that the setting is not good, the author is very rigorous. The complete and detailed world setting is good for the article and will reduce a lot of bugs, but it is not possible from the reader's point of view, because then your book will not be so good-looking, and it will not be able to attract more people to like it I think the private setting can be reduced appropriately, and don't put too much data and repeated words. Also, if you want to mention the original plot, it is best to only write it when the story develops to a relevant stage, without sending it out together. This makes me feel that the author posted his own auxiliary memo and forgot to delete it In short, the setting is complete, the plot is quite good, and the content is a bit chatty. The above, that's it

Regarding your writing of history, I think the barbarians are right when they say, "You can't wake up a person who is pretending to sleep." We no longer need to find confidence in history, and history is written by the victors. The stars and the sea are our goals.

After watching the beginning, I was so confused by the setting😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵

I can't stand it until chapter 3, I'm really speechless

I really don't understand how no one reads such a beautiful fanfic.

It's a nice book, but why is it not available? Also, why is this book all free? The author is not a good person.

What are you doing writing so many traditional Chinese characters? It's so hard to read.

How can I put it this way? I can still read Chapter 3 without reading it.

It's not easy hp novel come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on!

There are too many emoticons, and the protagonist is inexplicably happy

Collected, keep it first, author, cheers

Don't give up, at least write more than 200 chapters before giving up.

It's pretty, why isn't it popular?

I'm very annoyed that there are other time travelers like you with this setting.

Come on, come on! You will be on fire! The only vote today is for you!

It's very beautiful. Come on, author.

Finished with flowers. Does the author have a group?

Are there any novels about Snape's rise as a student?

I just realized that I didn't send it out last time... The author, please reply to me! Your fans!

It's a very good fanfic for my taste, but the emojis mixed in the book are hard for me to accept... Although online writing does not have to be as rigorous as college Chinese department students' homework, you must pay attention to the writing standards And the setting is placed directly on the text, it is easy to forget the previous plot, and I made the most common mistake for novices. What I need to write is to show the content rather than describe the settings And there are a lot of plot spaces that can be filled, but the protagonist upgrades at a too fast pace, so I can slow down the pace. Many plots are a bit toxic to me because of the fast pace That's it, over