Dark Continent: Mobile Fortress

Not to mention anything else, I have read about 73 chapters, and the protagonist is still wandering around outside, and has not gone back to take revenge. He is considered his predecessor. What do you think? ? ? ? So I let go of the antagonistic protagonist. I don't know if the protagonist will go back and give me some spoilers after watching it.

The First System of Chaos, come and watch, this book is really good!

Why does it feel like... Dark Fortress is the protagonist? ? ?

I don't understand, so I start by saying that my fiancée has been snatched away by someone else, and I don't want to take it back. When I see it later, I guess she is someone else's wife, and I want to be cuckolded at the beginning. The next step is even more confusing. I haven't reached level 30 yet. I picked up a fortress and then went to practice the mental path. Didn't it say that I need to be at level 30 to practice the mental path?

What you wrote has nothing to do with Diablo 2, and you used the banner of Diablo 2 to deceive us Diablo players.

Okay. There are too few dark novels. They look pretty good.

No wonder it's a crime, the protagonist is a bit naive, and modern people don't treat employees so well, right?

Isn't it a good idea to start mediocrely? He cuckolded the natives, and then wanted to be cuckolded by the natives. Did the author have that idea in reality? The novel was arranged as a cuckold novel. The protagonist's character is a bit stiff, and there are many things that are unpleasant to people at the beginning. It would be much better if the beginning could be changed.

This book reveals that the protagonist is just a puppet arranged by others? Maybe the author wrote it like this on purpose, but I just felt depressed and unhappy. I believe the protagonist Ye feels this way. With this kind of emotion, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. So I went to read this refreshing article.

I want to complain about the author. In Chapter 188, your own summoned beasts cannot enter. Are you out of your mind? That person's summoner will only die! Such a big loophole, so you have no choice but to throw yourself into the street

The ten or so chapters before the protagonist's awakening are simply superfluous. His writing skills are mediocre to begin with, but he's still trying to kill himself. The three golden chapters have been written as mere prose.

Single heroine? What happened to Sister Alina? It's not easy to find a book that suits my taste. Although it has some shortcomings, I still want to read it and hope that the protagonist will become stronger. In this kind of book, the heroine is essentially dispensable. But you wildly hinted at the identity of the four sisters as the heroine, and then suddenly said that there is a single heroine? I don't want to curse, really! Blood contract? Various hints? What is the difference between this and a cuckold story? ? ? Don't make crazy hints about the identity of Alina's sisters if you are a single heroine. If the author doesn't give an explanation, I will scold you! Ban me and change my account.

It is natural for a strong man to have more spouses. I don't like stallion stories, but I also don't like single female protagonists. If the country allows two wives, how many men will insist on only having one wife if their financial conditions permit? Generally speaking, two women or three are just right. They don't look like a stud, nor are they too thin. Of course, it's better to have no heroine, especially in dark novels, it's better to have no heroine.

The protagonist is just a chess piece, being manipulated casually behind the scenes, and I have no interest in it after watching it.

The concept, world background setting, and career background setting of this book are all in line with my taste. There is always a foodie, cute, shy, and then the Holy Mother will persuade me to quit if nothing happens. How about being in a sinister world? That's not good. In a world like Diablo, classes certainly exist and must exist. To control many abilities and unite all available forces to expand the living space, you must have a strong leader. The more chaos there is, the more careerists will exist. If you blindly show kindness, you will put the cart before the horse, and it will appear that everyone can be bullied. Another perspective of a female character. That is not a peaceful social environment, and the attributes of women in a peaceful society should not be improved. They are cute, cute, shy, and worthless in front of monsters!

What follows is a bloody plot.

The growth of the giant wolf is high enough, it should be a cool article

Not bad, a very good dark series, worth reading.

After reading a few chapters, they were all written about indigenous people, and then I slipped away. I slipped away.

What is the third golden chapter about?

The protagonist only appeared in Chapter 10, and it was terribly slow. Mainly because I felt that it was perfectly fine to read Chapter 9-10 directly after reading the first chapter. What's even more fatal is that the protagonist actually changed his name, and he was convinced! And I haven't seen the title of your book at all.

I'm less than halfway through the first chapter and I'm almost addicted! A series of tasks that have been done for 3 years? No matter what the purpose is, I suspect that there is something wrong with the person who did this task! What else is there? The latest expansion pack for this update? Why do you have old and new versions of your game for you to choose from? ! !

I just glanced at the first chapter. Thirteen paragraphs, the system "ding" is very old-fashioned, it's not that it's bad, it affects reading. At the end of paragraph 13, there is a contradiction between "the system sounds sweet" and "without any emotion". It is recommended to remove "sweet". Fifteen-paragraph system announcement, it is recommended to include double quotes. Twenty-two paragraphs with punctuation errors Thirty-two to thirty-six paragraphs can be placed in relevant parts of the work. It will look very fancy and too hard-core, which will affect the reading of the work. Forty and forty-two paragraphs, repeated. I didn't read much later General advice, it's best to speak in a separate paragraph so it doesn't affect reading. Remember to use quotation marks. The first chapter was too fast-paced and I didn't catch any particularly important points. It is best not to "say", "talk" and "vomit" too much when the characters speak, as it will look very low-level. Let's talk about the good parts. The background of the previous game is relatively clear, and the description of the environment is in place. The first to eighth paragraphs feel good. As I said before, I tried my best to tell you where the problem is in as tactful a way as possible. After all, I only read the first chapter, which can be seen as trolling, so don't say I'm ugly. At least from the perspective of a reader who has never been exposed to this kind of game and is telling you what is wrong with it as another author, you can listen or not, so I will just click here. Finally, I wish you to become a god soon——

It's only a few chapters to see if I can survive 😜

Don't expect the protagonist to go back only after they get married?

It's okay to skip the first few chapters, but what you write after it's on the shelves doesn't even count! Dark is not dark, alien is not alien! Always in a state of confusion! I advise the author that even if he can't write a plot, he can keep defeating monsters and upgrading to obtain resources! But we haven't been squandering the real world all the time! Plug-ins are useless because they are not used at all!

Come on, come on, keep at it!

After reading the introduction, I became curious. Without angels, are humans the descendants of Lilith and the Ironhide Bastard?

As long as we sleep together, this book can survive

Dark text is difficult to write, and it tends to jump out later in the writing.