White Bone Monkey King

A brief review of Half-Dazed by an old reader of Half-Dazed When a demonic spirit is blocked, I get really angry. But there was nothing I could do, so I was very excited when I saw the new book coming out. Follow the series. This book felt very interesting at the beginning, and the various weird settings were quite interesting. The contrast between this world full of all kinds of weirdness and the crazy male protagonist makes people so happy. After all, everyone in the world is drunk and I am sober. The scarier it is, the more the male protagonist dares to do, the happier I laugh. The former Fangzheng (his name is correct, right) was the kind of female ghost who would pinch you by the neck, glare at the other person, and say "Hurry up, Auntie, be harder, Auntie" before striking out in seconds. Now in this book, it cannot be said that there is no such happy plot, but it is missing. Instead, the story of the supporting character's bitterness and hatred arouses Pig's Foot to bursting with justice. He wields the knife and howls, and kills the villain in a hand-to-hand fight. Then there are the supporting characters' thanks and Pig's Foot's thoughts. . . It's not that I'm disgusted with this kind of plot that depicts the male protagonist's character. But is that too much? (Not to mention the similar plots mentioned above, what I have watched these days is after I entered the Buddhist Kingdom.) From the Buddhist Kingdom, a miserable master came to refresh the male protagonist's outlook on life. Later, when he entered the Buddhist Kingdom, there was a miserable couple selling steamed buns, and then a miserable little girl with a ghost mother? It's uncomfortable to watch. If you insert two plots like this one with about a hundred chapters in between, I think it's okay. Are you force-feeding me now? Really looking a little tired. You said that you are so diligent in promoting the male protagonist's bright and just views because you are afraid of being harmonized in the novel. Then write something beautiful, write a bunch of supporting characters who are miserable in various ways, to set off the character of the male protagonist. If you write those tragic stories, who will be banned if you don't ban them? This is just my personal opinion as an amateur reader. There are so many plots like this that it makes me uncomfortable anyway. Then I will make a little complaint about the settings. When I first started watching it, it looked like ghosts and ghosts, but it looked okay, but from the Dragon King's Tomb, it started to move towards tomb robbing. There were small levels one after another in the tomb, and then the Tomb of Immortals and the Kingdom of the Undead. . . I don't know if this counts as tomb robbing, but it looks almost the same as a certain treasure protection note. The male protagonist is called a Taoist priest on the surface, and he doesn't have any interesting spells. He mainly relies on fists, kicks and knives to fight, and he fights with the opponent. Maybe the setting is to defeat all magic with one force. But I get tired of watching it too much. (I also think of the Immortal Emperor Shi's surname in the perfect world. In the finale, he had a fight with the villain that shattered the void with punches and kicks. It was an embarrassing comparison.) The setting of your world is mythical ghosts. Most of the time, it looks like martial arts. Anyway, from the time I started writing this book to now, I feel like I am getting more and more stuck as I write. This book may have seemed great a few years ago, but after reading The Demonic Spirit and reading The Bone Monkey King again, I was really disappointed. Maybe it's my obsession with the book that contains evil spirits. I just want to find someone in the Great Sage of Bones who lives as heartlessly as Fang Zheng. In a scary and weird world, although he is burdened with everyone's expectations and has the responsibility to protect all the good things in the world, he can still go his own way and have his own personality, instead of becoming a Bodhisattva as everyone hopes. The above are my incomplete thoughts on the recent plot of Kingdom of the Immortal God. They are purely personal complaints and have no reference value.

I went straight to the evil author without reading the comments, but after looking at it, I really couldn't stand it. I persisted until I entered the Ghost Mother Sun Bureau. I couldn't keep up with logic or anything. The world in my mind was blurry. After browsing in Changxian, I felt that many things made no sense and were a bit too subjective. But next Looking at the different plots, there is always a feeling of somehow reaching the final goal and starting the next plot. I think there should be something missing in the description of certain points in the middle. I didn't look back at the specifics. It wasn't until the Sun Bureau that I came back to my thoughts. I am looking forward to the author's next book. I have been here with you for a while.

It can feel that the author wants to break away from the white text of killing monsters and upgrading. But the author could never grasp the ethereal and traceless feeling, so it felt strange to read it. Secondly, the sense of immersion is really poor. I want to write one human tragedy after another to highlight the male protagonist's true temperament in troubled times. The direction is right, but the character of the male protagonist is not outstanding at all. After reading it, you feel that the male protagonist has no recallable characteristics, except that the embarrassment of being a middle school student will not dissipate for a long time. The interaction of other characters is even more blunt. Each character has no sense of flesh and blood, has no characteristics, and is just a template. Villains are also a template. I am just a person who has read novels for many years, and I am not qualified to give advice to other authors. Just treat it as a water post with no nutrition.

Forget about one copy a day and copy various scriptures. When using the Golden Light Curse in battle, I should copy the full text of the Golden Light Curse. When using the thunder method, I should copy the full text of the Taishang Three Cave Divine Curse. The author of these battles has restrained himself. I should copy the full text of the Golden Light Curse, the Taishang Three Cave Divine Curse Scroll, the Buddha Mother's Great Peacock Mingwang Sutra, and the Erlang Shenbao Gao. I might as well go directly and see the scriptures of Taoism and Buddhism directly. Why should I spend money to read novels at your place?

It was fun to watch at the beginning, but I found it quite boring as I watched it. The plot was too compact, with cases one after another and people dying in a small county. It was like watching ghost stories one after another.

The book is a good book, but even your little story is too dense, right? This copy has just been completed and that copy has come again. The protagonist has no motivation and no goals. He is pushed by various supernatural events and jumps up and down here and there just for a bunch of messy things. It is really tiring to watch. The training system is in a mess, and the protagonist has no time to practice at all, so he relies on cheating to defeat the enemy. This is a book that is not well written. The first one called Changxian is wonderfully written with more than 8 stars, and the second one is at most 3 stars, which is like a piece of cake.

Alas, I gave up. I have been pursuing it for several years. I started with Youqi. At that time, I was waiting for you to update every day. Now I see more and more chapters piling up, and I have slowly given up. I no longer have that feeling. I feel that the author's high-spirited energy a few years ago is no longer there, and I am gradually disappointed as I read.

This book is quite good, but it's a bit verbose, and then it suppresses the protagonist's strength. The route the author wants to take is Emperor Zhenwu's dual cultivation of Taoism and Martial Arts, which then leads to a waste of the protagonist's golden fingers, and a lot of negative virtues that have no place to use. From the protagonist's cultivation so quickly, it can be seen that the protagonist has extraordinary talents. I can learn everything quickly, and with the help of golden fingers, I think it is perfectly possible to be an all-around person. In the early stage, when Yin De is low, I don't say omnipotence. It is perfectly fine to learn some Talismans, Feng Shui and the like. However, the protagonist has too few martial arts, so he can enrich himself and become a hexagonal warrior. It's a pity that the author's protagonist is destined not to do this. Because in this case, the other supporting characters written by the author will have no use. Also, I have read too many other Yakuza novels. As for the author's description, how can I put it, you may think that the three views are correct, but I think there is a little bit of Madonna. If the protagonist hadn't decisively killed the enemy and left no consequences, I wouldn't have been able to watch it for so long. This book is quite good, with passion and pure justice. Most of it is tomb robbing suspense and reasoning. It is a good book. I just feel that the protagonist can be more awesome and Goldfinger can play more roles. However, if this were the case, the book would not be as long as it is. It might be completed at more than two million words, and it would not be able to write the more than four million words it is now...

Can I add more essence?

Being able to gather with fellow Taoists here fully demonstrates the lethality of this "golden alliance", which is invincible 😃😃😃

The feeling of evil is very good. For this book, the early chapters feel very attractive. Later, I feel that the protagonist is a bit forced to show off. For example, I dare not look directly into the eyes of the protagonist several times. I always feel that the protagonist is superior to others. When encountering difficulties, he will not say anything about the five thunders. I feel that the five thunders are a little bit spoiling the rhythm. It always feels like it doesn't match the character of the protagonist in the early stage. ——Purely personal opinions and for reference only. . .

I just saw this book and the comments section was filled with bad reviews. How is it going? Can you watch it?

Damn it, only over 30 tickets have been signed.

Dear author, I would like to make a small comment... I like the story line and plot in the book very much, and the plot is slowly unfolding very well... However, every time when I read the fighting scene, the people other than the protagonist are okay. Every time when the protagonist takes action, there is always a description method-write a move first, and give the move a name first: "Twelve-Style Yi-Xing Fist" xx Kick! Then there are onomatopoeias like bang... I know that the author wants to give the protagonist some momentum, but every time I read such a description, I have a black question mark expression, and then I get tired while reading. What move? How did you do it? Who was hit? What's going on with this sound? A landslide? It feels a bit like a signal, forcing readers to cheer up - look, the protagonist is about to take action, his move is xxx, so powerful! It's a bit dry, and because the author doesn't provide buffering, this kind of writing appears frequently, which extremely consumes the reader's (me) interest. The author might as well change the way of writing, for example: the protagonist moves the xx kick, and the kick whip is like the wind, and the enemy is shocked and takes a few steps back. So. Every time xx moves, and then a few onomatopoeias are written, I really can't get what the power of this move is, and then I see the enemy retreat... I feel uncomfortable watching it 😐 I hope I can modify it slightly in the future, and I also hope that I can write better and better. Thank you for reading these words, cheers!

Don't understand? What's the point of writing this Ye Niang? To be honest, I would rather watch You Qi again than watch The Bone Monkey King again It doesn't feel like it was written by one person

Every character, every action, and every operation had to be explained with a lot of modifiers. In the end, the combination was so unreasonable, and then they had to be explained forcefully. There was no novel that made people want to read the next chapter.

It's a pity that there is evil spirit here😭😭😭

I think the protagonist is not the Virgin. The author is actually writing a very idealistic heroic legend. He uses Jin'an to express his inner desire for beauty. He hopes to have the same ability as Jin'an to sweep away the darkness. For example, when liberating serfs, some people say it is too much. I just think you are pathetic. Don't you have any beautiful ideals in your life? The novel is originally a fantasy. You have to compare it with reality. Reality is obviously hard enough. Why can't you spare yourself in the fantasy world and make your fantasy more complete? The title says "Great Sage", I think it's very well written. The male protagonist can barely bear the title of Saint

I feel that the author's writing style is like that of a primary school student, and the overall narrative is also very false and empty, making it hard to read.

Cut it off and write a new book, or re-open it. I really can't stand this book anymore. Goodbye.

It's so eloquent. It can explain something clearly in one sentence. It takes a chapter to explain it clearly.

How can I put it in a 20-year-old book? It talks about ancient supervision and strict rules. Civilian gunpowder is a big deal and a gambler with nothing can get it. After the scene at the beginning, the status of the protagonist and the money on his body are inexplicable. The old Taoist priest can see some destiny or ghost energy. It's not like the protagonist has never seen ghosts. I am afraid that a powerful Taoist priest disappears for so long, but the protagonist only thinks that they are destined. Forget it, if the book was written by one person, it would not be able to take care of so much.

I've read more than twenty chapters, why can't I watch it anymore?

The update at ten o'clock every day is still full of water. I really can't write anything and just stop it 😒

The author took advantage of the popularity of Black Mythology and probably had to fit an entire volume of Journey to the West into the book.

I recently read a novel called "The Principle of Poverty Alleviation", the plot content is exactly the same, I wonder if the author changed the book and wrote it 🤔

Why hasn't it been updated yet

Is it only Friday? What happened? Why did it stop?

Fast update

The update is so slow, can you please update it more quickly, two chapters a day, five chapters a day, ten chapters a day, etc. Some parts of the plot were more exciting in the past, but now it feels like it is in transition, with 1000+ chapters, the whole plot has only begun to unfold partially. The previous content is well written, including supernatural, martial arts, fantasy, immortality, suspense, tomb robbing, adventure, and various elements. The colors are gorgeous and relatively delicate, which is commendable. From a visual inspection, there are still many follow-ups. However, either it will be updated quickly, or it may be unfinished, or readers will lose after the update. There are many excellent works that have this situation. I hope the author will be vigilant. In addition, although the spiritual energy is revived and the plot is quickly promoted, I still hope that the force value will be controlled to prevent it from falling apart.