I’m the Quartermaster of Cao Cao’s Camp

I read more than 160 chapters in one go. Judging from my 10 years of reading experience, I can only say that it is a pity. Pearl milk tea is okay, and traveling back in time to ancient times and other modern things are okay. There are mistakes in some places, but they are acceptable. We are all human beings, and mistakes are normal (except for gangsters). It's okay to let Yu Jin and other famous generals leave early. These are normal in time travel novels, and they cannot be considered poisonous points. But the setting at the beginning is time travel + history. The combat power system in the first part of the novel is based on reality. Halfway through, multiple immortal cultivators are suddenly set up, which is a big taboo. This can dissuade many people. Either the combat power system is not close to reality at the beginning, or simply don't add it. The sudden addition of the immortal combat power directly ruins the novel. It was expected to be an immortal herb, but now it has become a poisonous weed. Hey, it is rare to see a very good novel about the Three Kingdoms. It is a pity.

Could milk tea have appeared in the late Han Dynasty? First of all, the source of milk was a problem. There were no dairy cows at that time, only scalpers for farming, and the number of scalpers was still under control. There is no milk at all, and there is no research on goat milk. After all, mutton is very common. Since sheep are used for meat, goat milk probably has nothing to do with it. Starch is not realistic either. Cassava is an introduced species. I suggest the author check the information. The tea of ​​the late Han Dynasty is not the tea of ​​today. Just because you think milk tea is good does not represent everyone's opinion. I am a tea drinker, but I don't drink milk tea. As for the twist mentioned in the book, I'm sorry to the author, but I don't think it's suitable to travel through the late Han Dynasty. It's possible to travel to the late Qing Dynasty. So whether the book is good or not depends on the author.

Why do I say it is well written? It feels like a routine article from a few years ago, and the writing style is average.

I started writing well and then ended up awkward when it came to milk tea. For tea drinkers who like to drink green tea, pearl milk tea is heresy.

The wording is not careful enough. In Chapter 3, the counselor surnamed Dong commented that Cao Cao was a hero in troubled times. Is this because he didn't die quickly enough? What boss can stand such a second-rate guy?

Well, the writing was okay, but I didn't read it. On the one hand, I don't like Cao Cao, and I prefer Liu Bei. On the other hand, I feel that the character of Liu Bei in this novel is completely different from the one in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. He is completely a black Liu Bei. Finally, the protagonist's loyalty to Cao Cao is inexplicable. It feels like repaying evil with kindness. How can you repay kindness with kindness? (In addition, Liu Bei has been criticized a lot, and I don't like Liu Bei as much as I did when I was a child. It's not that I think he is bad, but that he is too kind and righteous, but he doesn't take care of his family 😥)

Everyone doesn't like milk tea, and I personally think it's acceptable, but I really don't like that the heroine is also a time traveler and has a bad personality. Oh... I don't want to read it.

When I saw Chapter 160, the battle between Lu Bu and Xia Houen, and the author's explanation, I felt like it was useless, as if it was full of passion. It was like being showered with cold water suddenly, and the passion subsided. Since there will be no plot of cultivating immortals in the follow-up, I don't understand why such a setting was written. It is very awkward, and it suddenly breaks away from the sense of substitution. This knot will always exist, and it is very jumping. Originally, I read the novel for entertainment, and it has greater entertainment value. I think it would be a good idea to remove this plot and change the writing method to make Lu Bu's death more tragic.

A teenage grain officer? ? ? ? That's the logistics minister!

Well written! 🤭