I Brought the Mysterious Down Upon the Heavens

Coming from Zhihu, Toad's high evaluation

He is actually a thief. Now I think the protagonist is going to have a headache. To become a god, you have to steal the god's throne when someone becomes a god. I hope the author will not write it down!

It's very interesting. I hope the author keeps writing.

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It's well written but too short.

It's not bad, I'll book it all if it doesn't crash in the future.

Is it just talk? There are gains and losses, and it depends on your own decision to choose which readers to target. At present, the last comments are all for fans, but I don't know if there is a survivor bias. I can't tell whether more people want to read independent works or more fans want to read, but aside from this, the two Works of different natures are also different in difficulty. It will definitely be more difficult to work as an independent work. When they said that they wanted to give up when they saw the emergence of fan fiction, it was just their thoughts at the time. Whether your quality can support the entire work in the future is another matter. Maybe if you left the independent work at that time, you would regret it in the end. It would be better if you wrote fan fiction at that time. So come on, your writing style is a type that I like very much. The first few chapters are indeed very good, but they are obviously immature. As far as I read, the combination of the funny part and the main text is not very organic, and the character creation also lacks some strength. The specific manifestation is that I think the character of Alice is a bit of a tool. She only speaks a few words when she wants to be funny, and she is always invisible at ordinary times. Is it really invisible? Then there is a chapter that says I don't know if you saw it, but I saved the mother and daughter and then gave them a gauntlet. I think this is too "gamified" and looks very strange. The reason why the branch line is played like this in the game is because the sense of substitution in the game is much deeper than that in the novel. After all, the novel is still reading other people's stories. Using this kind of plot is too deliberate and will cause drama. Finally, I look forward to your next work.

After reading the first 20 chapters, I feel that the author's storytelling ability is OK, but the mysterious setting is not used well. You can completely create a new setting for your story. Why use someone else's? For someone like me who has never read Mysterious, it will make reading more difficult, and it doesn't fit well with your original story. I still hope to sum up my experience well and strive to accumulate more experience in the next book.

It's pretty good, but I feel like the plot of Afterglow is a bit fast

Toad's highly rated novel, it's not easy to read it once, I have collected it