My Girlfriend Ran Away Again

When I saw that the editor wanted to cut the book, I couldn't help but say a few words. I hope the editor can read it, and I also hope the author can write this book well. Book friends are here to cheer the author on. Since the epidemic in February, I have read "Beauty's Apartment" from the captain's period to "Dating with Dad" and "Ex-Girlfriend" in one go, and then caught up to the starting point to read the current "Girlfriend Ran Away". After reading these three or four books, Coke's progress is obvious to all. Although "The Apartment" during the captain's period can still feel a lot of urban cool novel routines, the emotional description of Xia Qing and Taobao in the middle is very delicate. Although each of the subsequent books has its own shortcomings, the advantage of expressing daily emotions in each work has been maintained, and the writing style has completely got rid of the refreshing style and transformed into the relaxed and happy style that I like very much now. I personally think there are very few authors who can do this in boys' novels (I don't read much, so please forgive me for any imperfections. I respect every friend's views, opinions, and comments about the author, and please respect me, thank you). As an ordinary reader, I sincerely hope that the editor can give the author some support when necessary. Book friends also have high hopes for this book, and the recommendation votes far exceed the data of the two previous works at the same time. I personally also think that this book is really better than the previous books in terms of framework structure, and I have more hope of writing it to 2 million+ or even 3 million+. And there is a characteristic of Coke's books. Starting from "Beauty Apartment", the mid-term data was not good, but when it started to wrap up the ending, it suddenly became popular, and "Ex-Girlfriend" also became popular. Come on, Cola, I hope there will be more bb machines in the future, more sisters who are not related by blood, and more sisters-in-law with facial paralysis and bugs! Finally, after writing so much, let me talk about "Girlfriend Ran Away" with data. Looking at it, the data is better than Coke's two previous books. "Date on a Blind Date" has 345 recommendation votes per 10,000 words "Ex-Girlfriend" has 1,392 recommendation votes per 10,000 words "My Girlfriend Ran" has 1,649 recommendation votes per 10,000 words What's more, "My Girlfriend Ran" has not yet been completed, so there is huge potential for subsequent growth! Looking at it horizontally, comparing the starting point with works of the same type, at the same time, and of the same size are also excellent enough. In the same category, with the same order of words, the collection is ranked 9th, and the recommendation vote is ranked 11th. The data fed back by these book friends undoubtedly does not prove the excellence of this book. For such a top 10-level work, I hope the editor can pay more attention to it and give the work more patience. Thank you!

I support Xia Tian and Lin Yiren to be together, the reasons are: 1: Wen Liang currently has no normal feelings, pass 2: Wen Nuan has scruples about Xia Tian showing his feelings, pass 3: Xia Tian's sister gave him a child, but she didn't tell him in the end, pass 4: The eldest sister next door teased Xia Tian but didn't show her feelings, pass 5: Because he put out a fire and then kissed her in college Female classmate, prejudiced against Xia Tian, pass 6: The female classmate who jumped off the building after being repeatedly rejected by Xia Tian, pass 7: Ye Qingcheng likes Lin Yiren now, pass 8: Lin Yiren's first kiss and Xia Tian's first kiss were each other. Although they don't remember the past when they grow up, they still have a warm feeling for each other, and Lin Yiren helps Xia Tian make wishes and kisses him repeatedly. This is the reason why I support Lin Yiren.

I have read a few of the author's books, and I have read too much about Business Hegemony, and I think the daily writing is quite good. I think the person who loves Yang Xiaoguang the most is Yun Ziwei. The person who loves Tao Bao the most is Xia Xue. The person who loves the flamboyant Su Nuanbai the most. The person who loves Lin Xiaochuan the most is Yi Le.

Among boys' romances (my own genre of novels), the characteristics of this book are that there are no regrets (that is, the harem) and dialogues with relatively funny characters. The plot is not much, and it is a plot that can be guessed at a glance. The emotions of the supporting characters are too confusing (this is definitely the fault of some readers. Gay friends put hats on the protagonist? I'm sorry that the protagonist does not have that meaning for warmth at all). The emotional scenes between the reporter and the protagonist are okay, but the logic of others is too poor. I think the author can learn from Tank's writing style (but don't imitate the style of killing someone who can't be punished). In summary, this book has many flaws, but I am optimistic about this author. There are really few people who can write romance articles in boys' channels and get good results. He is considered a rising star in boys' romance.

I just want to say, I'm very disappointed! ! ! Depending on the situation, we may have to see you again forever!

The author's novels are really good-looking, interesting and touching. Although they are harem novels, which some people don't like, the emotional lines are very rich. It would be a shame not to accept them, and you don't have to worry about cuckolds, dead girls, gifted girls, etc. It feels safe to read. In the past, I would say that the writing will fail later, but these few books are very well written and have that flavor. I will always support the author!

I used to feel happy, now I feel like I am a scumbag for teasing too many girls😱 Especially after interacting closely with the main female protagonists, I immediately went to interact with one of the harems who had very few scenes, I would feel guilty 😰 Two high school classmates from Uemoto forced their way into the harem I felt a little lost! After all, it's not the emperor's palace. If you want to enter the palace, it's best to give it more of a role. . .

Although it feels a bit nonsense, it smells so good

I just started reading it. It's a harem-oriented novel. The big plot is okay. Some of the characters are well written, but some of them are a bit silly and awkward. The character descriptions are okay. I don't like Lin Yiren a little. Daily life is too chaotic, with all kinds of forced meals, which are embarrassing. The timeline is also confusing, and the plot is too tight, but overall the subject matter is very good, and the author's writing is also very strong. Maybe it's different from my rhythm. I can read it and subscribe to it, but I may not get votes because I follow too many books.

The update time is not accurate either.

The logic of the plot development between Xiao Wenliang and Yang Yi is too outrageous and poisonous. I'd better read the author's previous novels first.

Want to add some sperm? Handsome author. I've read several of your books. There's no point in changing your waistcoat. Captain, hold on, don't add too many heroines. Pan Tao is the same as in the last book. Long live You Yu.

What do you say about this kind of book? Six female protagonists in the character column, starting a harem? It's vulgar and rubbish. I can't refuse it at all.

Tear, did you hear it? The sound of recommendation votes was gone! What? Ask me why I didn't vote for you? Did you check your update? Do you still have the nerve to ask this? 🙂

I just read back from Chapter 40. Qin Zhe said that he is not gay, but he said that he has been dressing up as a boy since he was a child. . . . (ಡωಡ)

Has the author also watched "Lucky Cook" 😁? It's a very interesting movie. The boy, a good boy, was cursed by a carnivorous goth lolita. He will never find true love, and all the girlfriends who break up with him will soon meet their real name, the Emperor...

Blind guess: I slept with more than one person five years ago

I came in and took a look at the editor's recommendations, but I really felt that it was too light and simple. What was recommended on the current recommendation list? It was said to be a light novel, but it turned out that it was a light novel, and it slipped away 😵

Um... I'm sorry, although it's quite interesting, but when I think about the fact that my sister may have given birth to a child for the protagonist, the protagonist doesn't know how to date other people, and then the setting of a bunch of women liking a bunch of childhood sweethearts... This setting is too scumbag...

It can only be said that it is difficult to reconcile the opinions of others. It is becoming more and more difficult to write harem novels. There are too many restrictions. You should also practice some moral ethics while reading. Don't scold at every turn. It is not easy. If you don't like it, just leave. Don't affect the new book friends in the future.

I don't know which book this is, but I'm thinking that it doesn't happen overnight for a person to become popular. I know that this book may not be very popular in the early stage, but you have to believe that many people are discerning. I really like your writing style. There are not many harem novels that can be written with such joy. Persistence in everything, believe us readers, you can talk about your results in the article, I believe many people who watch pirated copies will definitely come for you. Eunuchs are really not a good habit. They will make the author look bad. Please hold on a little longer. Writing a book is not easy, but please believe that as long as you can hold on, keep the weight, and are not too eunuchs, you will definitely become popular. Even if you change your waistcoat, old eunuch, you will still hurt the readers' feelings. Do you have a readership? Haha, many people want to send razor blades Everyone who likes this book, please sign it and let Coke see it . 🙂🙂🙂

I really don't understand why some people get angry when they see a harem novel and they like to read single female protagonists so much. Why don't you read those romance novels that have to torture you to make you happy? It's a fiction in the first place, and the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is natural. Could it be that when I read a novel, the male and female protagonists have to separate? Besides, boys reading about harems are the same as girls reading about overbearing presidents. Aren't they both the same type of novel? You don't have to like it, but don't ruin the atmosphere of the book review section.

Your health and family should come first, we are waiting for you

The writing is very good, but it's always ambiguous. It's a typical scumbag. Even though he's in a harem, I want to hack him to death after reading it.

I invested 2,000 and must last for 30 days (╥╯^╰╥)

Why can I still appear in the daily guide when I'm already a eunuch? Editor's question? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

If the captain feels tired, take a good rest for a few days. Don't listen to those ncs. Many of our readers still like this book very much, and the more critical ones are mostly those who read pirated copies. Don't care what he does. Come on, look forward to more exciting plots in this book.

After holding it back for a long time, I always wanted to say that this warmth always smells like green tea. I like summer and I miss Qin Zhe. Unlike Yiren, she has two childhood sweethearts, but they don't flirt with each other. This warm feeling is that she is waiting for Xia Tian to marry someone else, and she will turn Qin Zhe into a permanent partner.