I Practice Martial Arts Really Well

It looked okay at first. As a result, when I saw that I was controlled by the will of my original body, I didn't want to look anymore.

I ordered all five chapters, but after reading three and a half chapters I regretted it. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, don't really think of yourself as a pig, okay? Watching the grinding and chirping is very annoying, and I am no longer in the mood to read. Have the strength to kill everyone present, no matter what the conspiracy is. In Chapter 4, the protagonist asks them to bb a few sentences and just kill them. Don't be a bit of a walk-on, it will only make readers think you are in trouble. It is recommended to read the novel "Go away" and never follow the nonsense. If you can beat him, you'll beat him to death; if you can't beat him, you'll just stay there. The novel style of Get Out is also about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, but the pig will never really think of itself as a pig. A boss should have the domineering attitude of a boss, be vigorous, decisive and straightforward

I read three chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. For online novels, the first thing is to have fun. If the writing is not good enough, please come up with it. The three golden chapters are written in a mess. If you don't have the writing skills, you shouldn't arrange this kind of plot at the beginning. . At least write down the superpowers of pig's feet first, so that people will be motivated to read on.

I like it so much. I beg for more, I will support it to the end, come on, Oli, give it to me,

I vomited, please don't let that dead man come out again, okay? He was mentally retarded before she traveled back in time. She didn't see him when she killed people in the sect, and she didn't see him when she killed people in the city. There was no foreshadowing at all. And now you use it to disgust people. It doesn't matter if it makes you sick. Quickly solve it. You still have to disgust me every time before you hit someone. This book is not fun to kill, and your layout is not good. What else can you use to attract people?

It's a good food! Come on

I like it so much,,, please continue to do more! ! ! I will like it to the end! ! Come on, Ollie. .

I hope the author will start adding inherited memories, otherwise a time-travelling person can directly understand the speech, understand the text, and can also read the secrets and practice without inheriting the memory. I am too unreasonable. It makes me uncomfortable to read. Although the novel does not need to be too realistic, it is still a little more reasonable and everyone seems comfortable, right? Don't you ignore this?

Writing martial arts novels as suspense novels requires very high writing skills. The author ended up writing in a mess. After watching a few martial arts novels, it was not satisfying, the suspense was not attractive, and the process was sluggish... I felt very messy

When I saw Chapter 15, the battle of life and death, there was so much nonsense. I stopped to say something for a while, and took medicine for a while. Is this a battle? Not even a gangster fighting, like a child,

It's not good-looking and has many poisonous points. I'm trying to persuade you to quit.

It's a bit messy! And dig holes as hard as you can without burying them. You have to understand that most readers don't understand your writing style yet. Don't dig so many holes and still not fill them in after a few chapters. You don't have that much patience.

I think this book is average, mainly because of the early deductions. What's written at the end is actually pretty good. Overall, it's worth watching. Ignore the previous ones, the rest are just fine.

The writing is okay, and the subject matter is good, but it's messy and draggy, and there's no climax.

I don't know why. It's obviously okay when I look at the author's writing, but it just feels very slow and strange. Maybe it's because the author's writing style isn't very good, and the overall layout and rhythm seem a little bit...

It's a confusing mess and I have no idea what the author is writing about.

It's very messy, and the golden finger is not good enough