The Myriad Worlds Begin with the Three Kingdoms

I don't read anything that doesn't make basic sense. Politicians will keep power in their own hands. What makes you think you can cooperate with the government? They can call you in, and if you don't cooperate, they'll take you down. Do you think this is child's play? Cooperation is only possible when two groups are of similar strength. You, a nobody, think you can cooperate with the state? It's simply impossible. At least you can make up a story that you can keep a lie.

This is terrifying! It's only been a few months, and he's already written so many words.

I don't understand why the author wrote it this way. The protagonist is fawning over Fang Ying like she's shit, wanting to sleep with her but too cowardly to dare object to anything. What's the point of having an author if you're just going to write about Fang Ying directly?

I just want to ask, what's the reason for the protagonist's rebirth? It just suddenly happened out of nowhere. What's the difference between the protagonist's diamond village-building token and the bronze one? What are the advantages?

Over 1.8 Million words and only level 1... The author should really think about what the problem is.

This synopsis has completely killed my interest in reading it. I don't know what your novel is about. Even if you update 100 million words a day, nobody will read it.

The guy next door, who posts 20,000 words a day, didn't say anything. Yours isn't good enough.

The author got carried away while writing, and the protagonist felt weak. A lord who spends all his time mingling with his subordinates lacks authority and is practically a goofball. And the Foundation Establishment weapon—he chose a soul-based one; if he was going to choose, he should have chosen an all-powerful one. And instead of a cauldron or a bell, he chose a ship. I don't know what the author was thinking; many of the settings are flawed.

Even after being reborn, I'm still just like Xiaobai. The village-building order is so powerful, yet I can't see any difference.

After reading the first five chapters, I'm completely lost and have no idea what the story is about. Rebirth? What's going on with the game? And a girlfriend? Why don't you write a suspense novel?