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Popular science: (As we all know, cells will continue to divide, and the process of division is called metabolism. When the number of divisions reaches the upper limit, it will die, which represents lifespan) Then it is as follows: Longevity: It means that the number of cell divisions increases, and the speed will become very slow, so the lifespan is long, but you will still age, get sick, get injured, and die. (Note: It means that the immortal race, the juvenile stage, the growth stage and the aging stage, without external interference, will also be much larger than the ordinary race) Eternal life: It means that the number of cell divisions is infinite, and the division speed is equal to static, so the life span is endless, but they will still age, get sick, get injured and die. (Note: It means the immortal race, the juvenile stage, the growth stage and the aging stage. Without external interference, because the cell division speed is equal to stasis, they are all indefinite and infinitely long) Immortality: It means that cells no longer have the function of division and abandon the metabolic function. Therefore, how many cells you have initially will remain the same forever and will not age, but you will still get sick, injured and die. (Note: It means immortality, without external interference, no infancy, growth, aging, and will always remain the same) Immortality: It means that cells maintain their original division speed, can divide infinitely, and have the characteristics of immortality. (Note: It means the undead. Since the cells are immortal and dividing, the size will increase infinitely, and they have the characteristics of the immortals. However, the only difference from the immortals is that the immortals can be disturbed by external forces and die, but the undead cannot)

First of all, for those who are impatient to read multi-text, give a summary of "it's worth reading" and why it's worth reading? 1. At the beginning of Yitian, I gave up the book, but it was too boring, so I read it again. Well, it was not contrived, it did not follow the plot, and it traveled early enough (very early). 2. It involves spoilers, does the princess know? He used a trick to injure the protagonist's junior brother, and then the protagonist led all the masters of the sect to save people and destroy the sect. The princess simply clicked without even showing up. 3. It was also the latest chapter that made me decide to read it. The protagonist was simply discussing martial arts with someone, but the woman fell in love with the protagonist for a long time. I thought it would be bloody, but then the protagonist saw it, and I thought it would be even more bloody. In the end, the protagonist cut the mess quickly and decisively refused. The protagonist here did not take the initiative to flirt with girls, and cut off the signs when he saw them, which is a good deal. (Someone commented that he was a scumbag. I want to ask him if he knows what a scumbag is.) 4. The protagonist's setting is okay. He is not too impetuous, and he does not say all kinds of words that are not in line with the times. But let me remind the author that the protagonist has lived seventy or eighty years in his previous life + this life, right? (It should be there), so in the future, you should pay attention to the protagonist's mentality and so on. 5, fifty cents a piece, remember to delete the brackets. (Joke🔪) My fairy grass is his poisonous weed. Up to the 5.14 Update, I liked this book. If latecomers find it unreadable, they can abandon it. If you see that the chapters after today are poisonous, don't blame me for recommending the book. Maybe I abandoned it at that time. Come on, author.

When I read the first two volumes, I felt that the original plot was not borrowed. Come on.

Zhutian had better not write Doupo, the polarization is too serious. I won't say much about wrong and right. Save yourself from being sprayed

I really like the style of the main story, please support the author ✊

To be honest, what I wrote at the beginning was really good, like the time of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. So what will I say next about the country I wrote? It's getting a bit biased, especially under that one person, the world really can't understand this feeling, nonsense, you, you know? In fact, I couldn't stand it anymore from that world where I was the best in the world. The next one, it's true. I fucking died Zhang Dan, and he was reincarnated in other worlds. I can only say that living in it is a bit far-fetched. I agree, it's the opposite of when I first started writing. I don't know if it was stolen. Anyway, eating is getting further and further away. No, it just started to smell like that. How do you live in the first 20 years? How do you spend 70 years practicing in your forties and fifties? You are getting worse and worse now

In the author's last book, the protagonist first destroyed the Song Dynasty and then surrendered to the Mongols, euphemistically saying that God's will cannot be violated. In fact, doesn't it all depend on the author whether the plot can be changed? Isn't the Providence behind a book the author himself? If the protagonist is allowed to travel through time in a novel, but the plot cannot be changed, what's the point of this time travel? He also destroyed the Song Dynasty and surrendered to Mongolia. Shame on this author forever. Seeing that the protagonist of this book is this kind of salty fish who is greedy for life and afraid of death, he probably has the same moral character as the protagonist of this book. I really don't know what the point of this kind of author writing this kind of book is. It won't be popular for a hundred years. It's better to get out of the circle as soon as possible to avoid polluting the readers' eyes.

No matter how good the writing is, 99% of readers will be wiped out if you write about Yi Tian at the beginning.

Alas, why write a golden book? The author has never read the novel, at least not understood it. Fortunately, I don't know whether it was due to good luck or knowing this hidden clumsiness, so I didn't pay too much attention to the plot. But for true martial arts fans, it is still full of loopholes. Other than this, the connection between volumes one and two is even more of a joke. The world of Swordsman is an extension of the previous world. It is still the same as the original book. Even the names of the supporting characters have not changed? Never heard of the butterfly effect? This is not because I don't understand the original work, but because I don't have common sense. And Dongfang Bai, well, he is so brave. He just watched a TV series and then wrote a novel about the world of Golden Book. Moreover, the worst TV series was chosen. Yu Zheng's adaptation was originally illogical. The author's approach is like writing a Three Kingdoms novel after watching John Woo's bad movie Red Cliff~~~

Personal comments: In the beginning, it was an old-fashioned martial arts world of relying on heaven and slaying dragons. To be honest, there was basically nothing wrong with the handling (nothing wrong, the major poison points are already very good. Reading more poison books will increase drug resistance), which made people want to continue reading. In the end, the second world is proud of the world? ? ? ? I wonder if your writing was not bad at first? Didn't do your homework? Why can't I stop thinking about writing Swordsman? Swordsman is a magical world where you can write nine and a half out of ten books. Anyone who has done a little homework knows that the silly and silly author who just copied and pasted it is also a bad money maker. Swordsman World can be very straightforward and say that no one writes well. Some people like Linghu Chong, some hate Linghu Chong, some like to watch the destruction, and some don't want to be disrupted in the future. The polarization is the most serious. See clearly that it is polarization. It is not a thousand people with a thousand tastes. If you prefer one part, you will inevitably lose the other part. If you try to balance it, if you please both sides, you will end up not pleasing both sides. If you do a little homework, you won't be able to write "Swordsman". If you still write after doing it, I can only say that the author is stubborn. Final conclusion: From my current point of view, this book has begun to have a different character design. If the author is not strong enough in writing later, he will not be able to change the negative impact of Swordsman, and it will only become a little bit boring, and in all likelihood it will end up on the street.

What the hell is it about? Ximen Chuixue sharpened his sword for seven years and became invincible. The protagonist has been sharpening his sword for decades. A minion can fight with the protagonist for a long time. The protagonist is too piggy. Immortality is of no use. If you live for a long time, you will live like a dog. The author is really bad. Look at the characteristics of those masters with swords. Jing Ke kills with ten steps and seeks defeat alone. The grass and trees connect swords, Ye Gucheng's Flying Immortal from Heaven, Ximen Chuixue's sword blows blood, Yan Shisan's Fifteen Swords of Death, The Nameless Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Clan, and Dugu Jian's Twenty-Three Swords. When I look at the protagonist, he still practices swordsmanship. I think the author only practices swordsmanship. If you don't draw a tiger, you'll become a dog. Even Zhao Min, the most outstanding and the first heroine in Yitian, is directly given a box lunch? So what does the protagonist do when he travels across Yitian? Blind writers don't even know what they're writing about, right? If you don't have writing skills, just write out the outline first.

Xiaoao is really bad. Seeing that the Demonic Cult unified the Jianghu and refused to allow Wudang to stop it, I don't believe that the Demonic Cult can unite the Jianghu and not oppress the people? No burning, killing and looting? Also, Dongfang Invincible was taught by the protagonist to have the strength and not stop him. There is also some cause and effect for the demon sect harming the protagonist.

Copy your own and write it once, it's easy to make money

Kneeling down and licking Manqing basically makes them cold, no exceptions

Is the author giving up? You can write whatever is poisonous to you. Xiaoao is extremely poisonous. Are you Emperor Shitian? Playing with the world, do you know how Emperor Shakten died? That's a joke.

It's so poisonous. Zhang Sanfeng asked you to practice, but you thought it was too fast. You have never practiced martial arts. Are your theoretical knowledge better than Zhang Sanfeng's?

The Swordsman Chapter is really poisonous, and the Sun Moon God Sect is not a good thing. They played a double standard with Dongfang Bubai and got slapped in the face. You are the founder of Wudang, so you should stand on Wudang's side. If you stand on the side of the Sun Moon God Sect and persuade Wudang to be a turtle son, you are really embarrassed in the first world. Either you don't recognize the current Wudang, or you should stand with Wudang's position.

Why not go to Japan and kill the emperor?

I haven't read much, so far I've only watched Yitian Scroll. I don't know what's going to happen next. Anyway, the more I watch it, the more awkward it becomes. The protagonist likes to interfere in other people's lives under the guise of being good for you. He himself can live forever, so it doesn't matter if he can continue to live in peace, but he has always asked his brothers to be like him, go out less when there is nothing to do, and don't meddle in other people's business when they go out. There is no need to be chivalrous and righteous. I really vomited. , They are all like you. I have only a few decades of life, and I have learned powerful martial arts, but I am afraid of this and that, and can't do anything. Then what do I live for? When I die, I will remember my life as nothing. With the three views of this protagonist, he is really out of place on Wudang Mountain. For a grandmaster like Zhang Sanfeng, death is not terrible. As the saying goes, righteousness lies, even if he died nine times, he still has no regrets! Where does Pig's Knot get the confidence to impose his own ideas on others? There are many people who have different views and turn against each other, not to mention brothers, even father and son.

What has been saved after sixty years of suffering? Isn't it still the original plot? !

Damn it, when I read the book review, it seemed like the author's previous book was Surrender to Mongolia? Damn it, is it true? 😰 This Xiaoao's butt is sitting so crooked, does he really have a criminal record? . .

The original intention is gone and he lives in the heavens. The protagonist gradually loses the original mentality of enjoying loneliness and becomes impetuous. In the later worlds, he studies everything. In fact, in essence, he is chasing everything. He loses the original simplicity and simplicity and the original concentration. His original intention changes and he wants to get involved in everything. The man himself has lost his initial caution. I don't know where his unscrupulous confidence came from. He actually went to save the world and participated in a whirlpool that had nothing to do with him. Later, he actually got involved with his apprentice. Did he become inflated when he became invincible? His original intention is easy to change. Is he still the pure little Taoist priest in Wudang Mountain?

It is recommended that the author delete or permanently ban some chapters from ordinary members, or pirated readers who have never ordered a book. Anyway, it will not affect their grades if they are reading pirated copies, but keeping them will affect the reading experience of genuine readers... Especially if your style is different from ordinary cool books.

Seeing Zhu Yuanzhang become emperor, abandon the book! ! ! Either way, the author, don't arrange the fate of the characters, and just be a quiet passerby in history. Once the arrangements are made, you should write reasonably. Is it fun to insult readers' intelligence? In the world background of "Eternal Dragon Sword", not to mention Zhang Wuji's insistence on letting go, Zhu Yuanzhang has no chance at all, not to mention that there is now Song Qingshu who has replaced Chen Youliang's position to cooperate. This is completely a death difficulty. How can Zhu Yuanzhang make a comeback? It is impossible to reincarnate and travel through time and give him the individual martial arts to form an army. PS: I understand that you, the author, want to write down your own ideas, but your writing style is too poor, so you can't just copy it mechanically! We readers are not retarded, we have brains, and we can tolerate the poisonous points, confusing logic, and frequent bugs. I really can't love it anymore!

After reading a few chapters, the author seems to want to write the kind of indifferent and quiet bystander style, but it gives me the impression that he is selfish, has no firm belief, has a swinging mentality, and the character is not distinctive enough.

I don't like it, but I feel like it's not a scam. It always feels like it's hypocritical and a little selfish.

After seeing the charge, he also released poison, the protagonist's three views changed, and the author himself was an angry young man who was enjoying himself

After reading the comments from fellow book friends, I realized that there is no need to read this book.

In this life I don't plan to live too old Send away my parents and have children to start a family I just quit the team Life is not very interesting Living is just for a responsibility I won't come back in the future

This guy who pulls his hips. Take the initiative to surrender like the enemy. I also found a reason. Even when writing novels, there is no spirit at all. No wonder it's such a rush. Permanently blocked