Endure the Heavens

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is basically hopeless. Shen Nong wanted to curse after reading it. I suggest the eunuch, or make a big decision to rectify it. The author probably has no outline, or at least no outline. The problem is not writing about the Yuan Dynasty as mentioned in other reviews, but the problem with the pacing of this book after the emergence of Chu. If you had carefully described how Da Chu resisted, and added details to illustrate it, maybe there would have been a way to save it. But in the end, you forced the destiny to be arranged, and then it was gone in a few chapters. . . The struggle was basically brushed aside. Then why are you doing so much preparation in the early stage? Decades of planning? I guess he wanted to learn from "The Poor Man's Five Thousand Years" but didn't have the writing skills of others. Then use various little characters that the protagonist ignores as little villains to do all kinds of troublesome things and force them to do it. Brother, who is the protagonist here? What's even more impressive is that these little villains are all useless and will be gone after a few moves. There is almost no interesting part in the description of the battle. The plot is simply too boring. After the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, I suddenly jumped into "Love Through Time and Space", emmm okay, I will continue to read, but it disappeared after a few chapters. I didn't see the use of this plot. The characters in it seemed to be a guest appearance. I thought this was enough of a trap. Poison resistance was okay anyway, and I was too lazy to find a new book. I planned to read it before talking about it. As a result, the one with the broken leg is still behind, and "Super Seminary" breaks in. It's normal for the ancient dragon plane in front of me to break in. At least the timeline of "Love Through Time and Space" can be matched. What the hell is "Super Seminary"? The style of painting is completely wrong! How is this national style? There is no foreshadowing at all. The author really doesn't take subscriptions seriously. Then the protagonist suddenly licked the angel. . . That's right, the protagonist who hasn't had a heart for hundreds of years is tempted. Emmmm, strictly speaking, it can't be considered licking, but I just fell in love with it for no reason. Really, I really can't bear it anymore. You can read it in the early stage, but in the later stage, you are really writing randomly, and the author's three views are not normal. The subscription of this thing should be miserable. The author probably let himself go, after all, he started to collapse before it was put on the shelves. . . I hope the author has learned his lesson, and I hope you are all right and don't fall into the trap.

Come on, author😊Continue to write according to your outline and ignore these people. Then your mother will know that you are successful. You are the newest author on the Internet, and you are all working against the readers and the society. Then you will get a 404 in two days and you will be successful. You are not anti-social anymore, you are anti-human 🙂

It's disgusting and full of poisonous points. Is the editor of this book really following this book? Is it because he received money?

The protagonist is indeed a younger brother. The protagonist has never accomplished everything he can do. It seems that he just casually established the Great Chu without much effort. He just used his reputation as the best in the world to fool around. There was a natural disaster when the Great Chu was established. I guess it was God's will. He didn't want to do something quickly. Instead, people from the country of Da Chu are used to prove that God's will is unbreakable. The character of such a protagonist is too disgusting. If Da Chu puts military control on Mongolia in the first year of the natural disaster, even if they lose in the end, then it is really God's will. In writing, the soldiers regard death as if they are at home, and the feelings of family and country can make a lot of money. The reader's sympathy can also change the protagonist's character. He or she may first not believe in God's will, do things that go against God's will a few times, and then find that no matter what, he can't go against God's will. ) A young man who has been severely beaten turns into a black man who is living a life of salted fish. This is a helpless way that can earn a wave of sympathy and empathy from today's working people. In the later stage, whether it is to keep on surviving or to write a scene where he joins in if he can't be beaten, just to keep on surviving is the literal meaning of "Enduring the Heavens". If you can't beat them, you can join. You can understand the way of heaven and then merge with it. Then after you understand the way of heaven, you can destroy the order of heaven, or even the world, and then change the map naturally and then write a few cycles, which is another "Death to the Death of the Heavens". Or after understanding the way of heaven, you find that this world cannot be changed and you have no choice but to find a way to leave this prison, or you are sad, and then go to another world to "survive the gods". I can see that you are thinking about becoming more and more powerful and there are no signs of time travel, but how can you write "All Heavens" in this case? You want to write World Devouring? Or world fusion? Or is it not the time yet? It's okay if the protagonist has been wearing it in this world. You can write that after the protagonist understands everything about heaven, he cannot change it but can "see" other worlds. But other video worlds will be destroyed because of changes. Only this world will not be destroyed because it is destined, just like the protagonist of a novel is destined to have an unchangeable trajectory, and the destruction of other worlds will enhance the "aura" or "level" of the protagonist's world. So the protagonist has two options. One is to destroy other worlds, or project to live in other worlds. You can even write that all the worlds are immutable and then you write until the plot is completed. For example, Jin Yong's novels were destroyed after they were written, and then go to Gu Long's novels. Gu Long's novels are another world. . But, but, if you didn't start well, the protagonist is a younger brother, a younger brother within a younger brother, a mutilated younger brother! ! !

After reading the last chapter, it is really too poisonous. First of all, the author's thinking is not clear enough. It is natural for a martial arts genius who traveled through time and became immortal to become the best in the world in such a low-level or medium-level martial arts world. Then they keep forcing extra drama. In a world like this, when the protagonist is a bit invincible, more awesome geniuses keep appearing to cause trouble, which makes me vomit blood in frustration. Then it is to forcefully join the way of heaven and prevent the protagonist from achieving his goal. It's so uncomfortable. It would have been nice if, when the protagonist was invincible, it would have taken dozens of chapters to transition to the next world, but in the end, there was a martial arts melee that spanned multiple novels, and the protagonist who was so awesome at once felt less powerful. You said it would be great if you unified China and then started martial arts training for all people to upgrade the world.

67 I collapsed, now I just want to read book reviews and have fun 🙂

The writing was okay at first, but then it became more and more confusing. I couldn't understand it anymore, and I couldn't figure out what the author was thinking. The protagonist has lived for almost 100 years, but he couldn't defeat a newly appointed palace master. Was his practice in vain? What's the point of living for more than 100 years? What kind of immortality will he be in the future? The plot link is not smooth at all. It makes you confused. Give it up and give it up. It's too poisonous.

Can this be recommended in a new book? Looks like I need to change the APP

It took 3 years for the protagonist to be resurrected after death, and another year for wandering around the country. There was no way to grow food for a total of 4 years. Sure enough, the Central Plains is powerful. People all over the country are alive without eating a bite. It turns out that people can go without food for 4 years. Don't tell me about eating people. There is nothing wrong with eating children. In the first year, there is nothing wrong with national food reserves. In the second year, eating children and women. There are no children in the world anymore. In the third year, the entire country is a beast. Where are there people? Man's natural enemy has become a human being. Trees, grass, etc. Have all been eaten up. I just want to know. The Mongols conquered the Central Plains just to be happy. Why didn't they conquer the Sahara Desert? No one resisted. Why do they keep attacking such a broken place? Are the obsessions so deep?

I feel like this book has already been written. Most people won't be able to read it if I don't change much at the beginning.

I admire the author for daring to write. It reminds me of Yang Kang in another fan. Yang Kang is stronger, and even the martial arts in the Central Plains can't tolerate him. He was good in the early stage, but in an instant he became the public enemy of the martial arts. Of course, he seems to have handled the general trend well, but I can't remember. Anyway, unlike this book, where Mongolia is in control, other things are suppressed. Author, you are stepping on the wrong, at least you can turn the contradiction around Whether it's Huang Yaoshi, someone else, or even the protagonist, the author, you have to take it upon yourself... But I still have to complain Seeing the subsequent development, with hindsight, it is better to let Guo Jing stay in Mongolia, marry Hua Zheng and become the Khan King. If there is a destiny, it will not be reserved for Temujin's family, even for the children of Guo Jing and Hua Zheng, right? Well. The position of the protagonist is too vague, and his position is even less firm. He wants to kill Temujin but is too busy to wait for Temujin for a few more days. He also gives Hua Zheng random instructions. Later, he establishes a subjugated country. After being resurrected once, he sees natural disasters and relies on his intuition to let him perish... Give up when you say give up... It's just qhen jgdgmptpjqhmn There are actually more than ten years before the country is destroyed. What did the protagonist do? He raised Wang Lin to become a waste, and the maid who was born in the dust became a strong woman, while Guo Jing and Yang Kang ignored him in the early stage, and when the plot was about to develop, a little plot was added... Of course Wu Lin people can also understand. After all, the Seven Heroes of the original world can go to Mongolia to teach Guo Jing and live in harmony with the Mongols. The Quanzhen Seven Sons can also discuss Taoism with the Khan, and can also go to the Jin Kingdom to teach the princes... It is the fault of the world (to be honest, such a world is as awkward as Aunt Qiong) If this setting is It would be great if other books could learn from it. It starts with a story about time travel and becoming a famous person. You haven't done anything yet and haven't even started yet. It just talks about how miserable and unfair the future is for a few chapters. In fact, the rest of the book is smooth sailing. Once you have read too many novels like that, reading this one will be particularly refreshing (well, the taste may be too strong)

I can really say goodbye! Where have we arrived now? Not to mention that it is just a low-level martial arts, but also that the time traveler is still alive and will not fight? Don't want to grab it? Don't know how big the earth is? Don't understand national migration? It has been more than 40 years since the founding of the People's Republic of China without any expansion of territory, yet it has survived for a hundred years. Now that it has become a prostitute, is it destined to be destroyed? If you write like this, you will definitely fall for GAI! ! 🤝 What I said

The author is great and the early writing is very smooth! The logic is also smooth, but the jumps in the recent chapters are a bit too obvious! There should be a section skipped in the middle, and the skipped section should be when the protagonist survives until he reaches the Super Seminary! It must have been influenced by the comment section! Don't let other people influence your writing. After all, the strength and structure of a work are very important! Just like Naruto, the frame span is too big and collapsed. Finally, I hope the author can calm down! Rest for a while

Nowadays, all Wuliu novels are about Tianlong, Shooting the Condor, Yitian, and Swordsman. I'm tired of reading them now. When I see this kind of novels, all of them are photoshopped.

I finally understand why this book has such poor performance. I paid the IQ tax.

The last few chapters have been jumping too fast, the Super Seminary has come out

The part about the Super Seminary looked confused.

The front is fine, but why is the back so messy?

The feeling of being raped is really getting more and more angry the more I think about it.

This book, to put it simply, gave me a mediocre feeling. The protagonist has an endless lifespan, but human beings cannot The following The glazed canopy conceals the heavenly auspiciousness, The unfathomable Taoist heart bears Jingxiang. Preaching to the world of Jiuzhou, but cold to relatives and cold Fuyao.

The first poisonous point is God's will. What is God's will? Xunzi said that God's behavior is always constant. It will not exist for Yao and will not perish for Jie. Lao Tzu said that the world is unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs. The protagonist obviously wants to follow God's will, but in fact he is just afraid of the plot. Second, the author said that all races are equal, which is no problem, but please do not substitute modern concepts into ancient times. No one can forgive others for others. Can the hatred of the country and the family be cleared away in one sentence? Ridiculous. Third, the protagonist's character is capricious and hesitant. He may be called "Shun Tian" but actually harms others, and he may be called "Submissive to God's Will" but actually he will harm the people around him. Compared with the Tang Dynasty's dual control, everyone is cheating. At least Li Shimin still wants to save face, and looks good on the surface. Fourth, I can't help it anymore. Damn it, I also have Mongolian friends, but if the Mongolian government goes along with the trend, civilization will go backwards. That's bullshit. The order of civilizations of nomadism-agriculture-industry has long been determined. If you insist on saying that this is just the way it is, go back to the primitive times. Also, if you want to help Mongolia, you can subtly change Temujin, or become a national teacher. As a result, every time you want to kill Temujin, you hesitate, because you are fine, and Temujin vents to the people, and the people suffer. Living in the same world as you, the people are really unlucky. Don't talk about ethnic equality, Temujin is an Outer Mongolian, and he has the ability to be equal to the Jie people. The most important thing is, are the Mongols now the same as the Mongols before? Temujin's revolution destroyed Arab civilization, killed other caliphs, and burned down other universities. At that time, Arab civilization was very good, let alone the poison of Chinese civilization. Any nomadic invasion is a regression of civilization. Capricious, hesitant, contradictory, harmful to others and himself, hypocritical and pretentious, the character setting of this protagonist is a complete failure. He is still practicing Taoism, but he doesn't even understand the basic knowledge of Taoism.

After going to the desert to kill Temujin, he actually taught his daughter martial arts and tried to show off.

The general who killed him was let go, and he was a general who killed the enemy with passion. The two killers were created by the protagonist. The most important thing is that the god you created has ruined your affairs many times, and you still let him go so easily! How cold-blooded and ruthless the protagonist must be to do this! I asked the author how you would whitewash the protagonist's behavior.

This is the first time I have reported a book in ten years, traitor, traitor, tui😤

There is no system, which is a good beginning; the failure is that the author made too many assumptions and lost touch with the masses. When you read novels, you just read a fantasy. You always write some articles where the protagonist has a high starting point, and there is no sense of immersion! In reality, who among you is not working hard to live step by step? Well, you have all kinds of tricks as soon as you start. How can you ask the spectators to have the patience to watch it? Generally speaking, your trick gives people the feeling that everyone can succeed and can guess the ending and process. What's the point?

If I were the best in the world in martial arts and still have endless life, and my remaining limbs could be severed and regenerated, I could kill all the creatures in Mongolia, including ants and insects, God's will is bullshit. He slaughtered my city and I slaughtered his country. It was simple.

Let me tell you, many people say that the protagonist has no choice but why? God's will! God willing! God willing! That is to say, God's will must allow the Yuan Dynasty to rise, and history cannot be changed, right? Then the question is, since God's will cannot be changed, why did the Song Dynasty's national destiny disappear for decades? Was the Chu State, which was established by the protagonist, destroyed in this way? Why didn't God's will pop up when the protagonist destroyed the Song Dynasty? When it was the turn of the Yuan Dynasty, God's will suddenly appeared! When the protagonist destroyed the Song Dynasty, he almost started from scratch. He destroyed the Song Dynasty smoothly. It was the turn of the Yuan Dynasty. At that time, the situation in Chu State, the original text said, "almost reached the extreme of the feudal era." Not to mention that the nomadic Yuan Dynasty could at least have the upper hand, right? But! I am afraid of everything, but the author let God's will jump out at this time, saying that God's will cannot be violated, the Yuan Dynasty is about to rise, I will give you all kinds of natural disasters in Chu State, see if you surrender! Ha, so funny! At this time, we are talking about God's will. Why don't you say that the protagonist will destroy Song Dynasty? Others say that it is because the Song Dynasty will soon be destroyed in a few decades, and it will be the same no matter who destroys it. -Bi-Hey, then the Yuan Dynasty's national destiny was less than a hundred years old, so why couldn't the Chu State destroy it instead of the Ming Dynasty. Oh! Is it possible that this God's Will is still a double-labeled dog, with the Yuan Dynasty being his biological son and the Song Dynasty being a motherless doll? Let's not talk about these, just look at the protagonist. He single-handedly instigated the Quanzhen Sect to establish the Chu Kingdom and put the master's son on the throne. Then he said that God's will cannot be violated, instilled in the minds of the Chu people a plan to comply with God's will, pat their butts and leave! The Quanzhen Sect was still alive in the Yuan Dynasty in its original history, but what about now? The protagonist is really like a book review said, like a green tea bitch. Two people build a happy family together, and then leave with a slap on the butt. Before leaving, you have to give someone a bowl of chicken soup. This makes your protagonist great. Those who don't surrender don't know the current affairs, right? 🐷

I thought of this book again today, and the more I thought about it, the more angry I became, so I will report it again. Anyway, I'm bored now, so I'm going to spend half a day reporting through all the reporting channels. The mobile version is troublesome and has to be read chapter by chapter, but there is plenty of time.

The super nuclear bomb is extremely poisonous. This book is about the Chu State that was established by the Song Dynasty. Then the protagonist pretended to be a coward to die. The Chu State was destroyed again. Finally, it was beaten to pieces by Kublai Khan. He also begged others not to sit around and kill evildoers. The nuclear bomb was really poisonous. He slapped himself in the face. I really accepted this kind of plot.

I have been reading books for almost 20 years, and if I were to say that this book was the worst, this book would not be said to be number one, but at least it would be among the top few! The author is afraid that his views are not upright! Calling him a green tea bitch, I believe all comrades who saw the demise of Dachu would agree! There are all kinds of waves with the wind, and all kinds of investment against the wind. Selling teammates away...