Holy War of Super Divine Time and Space

It is recommended to add the protagonist's abilities into the introduction. Your introduction sucks.

Everyone, have you watched the recent movie "Fire Sun Heavenly Way"? I think it's so so

Qq Book Club: 704337451 Anyone who is interested can come in to discuss and exchange plot deductions and develop routines. I built it a little late, don't mind.

Don't make it so sensational, as you will risk life and death at every turn. The key is, you are not the enemy, but you still write like this, don't you feel embarrassed?

I feel that there is a bit of conflict between the articles, and the conflict between the writing styles is too great. It can be read as a brainless passionate novel, but the memory of the protagonist has awakened. Even if he is from a human perspective, his thinking is still biased towards angels. Just like you said that God has God. From the perspective, you banned the protagonist because he is not a god from a human perspective. If you ban him, Ge Xiaolun is not the protagonist because Ge Xiaolun is immature and Kesha was written as too authoritarian. This was before Kesha's fall. Gentle and strict was Kesha. The conflict between the writing and the sentence is too big The problem of setting the protagonist to break up with the angels and side with humans, and then reconcile them without any reason is too big I don't have too much evaluation, I can only say that if it is not changed significantly, it will only be unfinished.

My heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys all hurt from the abuse 🤓 Wherever there is Yan, there is me, and Ollie gives 😌

Yan

Like my name, what does your protagonist have to do with the words "dawn"? Let's talk about it

How good would it be if the ultimate fear was Yak?

I feel like there's something wrong with the writing. I'm so embarrassed just reading it, I'm getting goosebumps 🙂 Author

Destruction