Naruto Loot System

What the author writes is messy and confusing to readers. I haven't finished reading the first three chapters. As a soul piercer who accepted all of Neji's memories. There was no emotion at all about what happened. With a dog mark on your forehead, you are full of joy and want to please your master? ? ? As an adult in modern society, where do you have such weak thoughts and childish mentality? The whole persona has collapsed.

Tiantian is so cute 😆 Please let Tiantian be the female protagonist in a Naruto work

Too fake? A skill has 5 cards per second. With these 5 cards, Kakashi could knock Obito to the ground. . . Speechless

I came from daoban software, and I prefer Ningji Tiantian. It is rare to see novels with this theme. When I got to the starting point, I found that the author's performance is not good. I will give you two recommendation votes to support you. 😁 I hope that the author will be happy, his writing will get better and better, his life will go smoothly, and he will be happy. I also hope that you can persevere in writing online articles.

It doesn't feel any better, so I suggest the author to read Tsangshengan.

Blind dick writes garbage.

I don't understand what pig's feet are doing. At his level, he can defeat Konoha by himself. If he is imprisoned for two years, he can just hit Konoha with a horizontal bar and that's it.

I kind of don't understand that the protagonist is already strong enough to defeat Konoha alone, but he still has to hide his strength.

The protagonist licked Hinata like this, and actually gave up Hinata generously, and even pretended that Naruto was her brother-in-law. . . Damn it, in the world of Naruto that emphasizes blood inheritance, it is normal for close relatives to get married. The protagonist licks Hinata like this.

What is the difference between the protagonist and the Teeth of Traveler Yi Xiaochuan? You still don't want to change the plot, are you sick? If you don't change the plot, you will die. .

The writing was too messy and I couldn't stand it, so I gave it up.

The protagonist can completely study his own ninjutsu. The author is completely limiting Neji's strength. He knows that ninjutsu is useful and he is a genius, but he just doesn't want to learn it. He has the ancestral slaughtering knife technique, which is also an advantage, but he doesn't study it. Now it feels like I have finished the old work left by Hizashi and has nothing to do and hopes for a system that I know is a scam, and I don't want to. If you study and research down-to-earth, you are completely a person with high ambitions and low abilities. Even Hinata in the original book knows how to develop ninjutsu that suits him, but the protagonist does not. He is still afraid that his strength will be exposed and cause the plot to be distorted. Then you can just hate the clan and look down on other people like the original work. It is already different from the original work and you still don't know what to worry about. It's really poisonous to watch.

Chapter 91: He died of poison. Anyone passing by can take a look.

Just because I didn't want to change the plot in the first chapter made me want to quit...

It feels like a book that can be thrown off the street at any time

Tell a joke and use tailed beast-like chakra to amplify your fist👊

If you write more about Ning Ci Tiantian, you will be rewarded greatly 🤭

It was a pain in the ass to charge money in the early stage. A lifetime's savings would be worth three A-level missions in one day. The wealth of the entire Uchiha clan was less than 20 million. I suspect the Uchiha clan was starved to death.

The author's writing is bad, and I can't relate to it at all. After reading the 13-year-old novel, I feel suffocated and can't relate to it. The character of the protagonist is not good, and the system is not good. The people in the first dozen or so are probably less than 13 years old and sometimes wander around in the teens. The time of Naruto has not changed much after so many years, and it is the same as the stereotype. Recommended: ★★"Bad" and "Full of Five Stars"

I feel so bad that you just lost it for me after watching something wonderful.

Update, please improve 😁

Now that you can use soft fists at close range, why can't you use weapons and have to fight the enemy with bare hands? Originally, this was a big loophole, and there was also the problem of the white eyes. The 359-degree white eyes have a blind spot. Wouldn't it change according to the direction of the human eye? To use an analogy, if the direction of the blind spot is east, does the blind spot fix the east corner? Is it possible that I can't make up for this blind spot even if I roll my eyes while facing the east? If this is the case, if everyone in the Hyuga clan has the same blind spot, it will be easy for people to restrain themselves! If you know the direction of your blind spot, you're dead!

Is the author here? The protagonist's strength has increased too fast, and it may collapse later In short, come on, author

Well written, author! Step on it and leave a footprint...