Primitive Tribal Era

Come on Oli, if you do what you want to do wrong it's mine.

Congratulations on signing the contract, Su Xin has a trumpet, please give me a reward! Come on!

The introduction is very attractive. I have collected the book. I don't see any problems with the writing. The plot is compact, neither procrastinating nor abrupt. The number of words is too few at the moment, and other aspects cannot be seen. Once the number of words increases, the popularity will increase. Good luck!

The brother upstairs and I share the same view. We don't think there is any problem with Dada. The story is very good, but let's pick a thorn. The punctuation mark when characters talk is: "Conversation content". I find that Dada generally omits:.

Come and sign in. . . Ouch ouch. . .

I like it so much. Please keep it up, I will support it to the end. . . Come on Ollie!