I Became a Golden Eagle

The author should not pay attention to those elementary school students who only know how to write cool articles, write it out bit by bit according to his own ideas, and keep the current writing method.

It's great! It's great! It's a pure beast novel that I've finally come across, and the writing is super good. It's really rare! The plot development is also very good! Come on, author! I look forward to the day it ends! Also, I hope that the protagonist will not be too weak when he comes into contact with the extraordinary power in the early stage. Since it is the recovery of spiritual energy, everyone almost started together. After all, the protagonist has been training for so long (he is also the protagonist after all), so it is impossible to be too different from the first echelon. If the author has his own plan, just refer to it. After all, we still like to read more interesting articles. Of course, I am quite happy to read it now, hehe.

The idea is novel and the content is very attractive. I have invested in it. Come on.

The system came out after almost 40 chapters. A system is worse than no system at all. It doesn't make any sense. The eggshell named the protagonist at the beginning has a golden pattern that is different from others, but it doesn't make any sense. Why is it written like this? Not understand. It's another way of writing the manual mode. The plot progress is too slow and there is no plot. What I understand is that the protagonist is single-player and is evil. Generally speaking, when it is released, there is no advantage that makes people want to follow it.

Please update. Damn it, it's really beautiful＾0＾~

When reading the book, I always want to shorten the author's sentences. My questions are repeated between "the author is deliberately stupid" and "the author is of this level". I feel that it is very difficult to read. I doubt the author's personal thoughts and the plot word count are evenly split.

The author is not good at choosing a name. If he changes it to a sand sculpture, more people will see it. There is nothing wrong with the sculpture in the desert 🤭

The start is okay. Chapter 40 of the full text. I haven't left the house yet. The overall situation is relatively weak. I'll give it a try first.

Heehee

This is a book. There are so many traces of routines that you can even transform into a bird and have a sister. Is it interesting? If you have a sister, you will be invincible, but if you don't have a sister, you won't be able to write? I really can't write anymore because I can't imitate it, and I can't imitate the plot. I really have nothing to say. I don't see the use of this so-called sister at all. How do you expect an ordinary bird to have any feelings for the so-called brother of the protagonist? Can you help the protagonist sacrifice your life to save him when he encounters danger? Is it possible? Human emotions have evolved over thousands of years. It is nonsense to think that animals can have human emotions once their spiritual energy is revived.

The system has already been set up and there are various restrictions on the protagonist's acquisition of hunting points. Massacre will destroy the ecology and become a slave to power. It is really poisonous. Can't you just increase the difficulty of obtaining hunting points? Why are you talking so much?

Ask a question Has the author thought about the power system after the spiritual energy is revived? Make a suggestion The values ​​given by the system are vague and the strength level is unclear. It is recommended to add a measurement unit, otherwise the value will become larger and larger and the power system will collapse. However, it is best not to wake up and know that you can beat the past three yourself like in Chapter 116. It is best to compare the time of hunting the same prey in the past with the time of hunting the same prey in reality. Of course, the prey should change according to its own strength. For example, how long did it take the protagonist to hunt a swan in the past, but how long does it take to hunt a swan now? If you try the same prey several times, you can get the average hunting time without any surprise. The purpose is to minimize the presence of the system, otherwise it will look a bit awkward. Of course, you can also change the system values. (If there is anything wrong, tap lightly 😢) Bloodline Strength Physique Agility Psychic power (hidden attribute) Talent Hunting value Finally, can you add some spirit? This is my first time writing a long review 😏

Come on! Author, I like it!

The sister who makes no sense, and the snake that wants to eat the eagle. I can't stand it anymore. The 50 cm snake wants to eat the protagonist's seven or eight kilogram golden eagle. How dare you? I said it was poisonous and some idiots yelled at me and told me to read Animal World. There are really not many books about exotic animals that I can read.

Don't be smart for the sake of the plot. There is nothing wrong with being a native born and raised mentally retarded person. The key is that there is a lot of inner drama (one or two sentences are enough) and you can fight and that's it. Why are you so hot and spicy? Originally, I wasn't very interested in writing about animal logistics, so I strangled them to death. However, these few pieces of writing made me feel like I had been replaced by another person. Now I can only keep it

I came to see the spiritual energy recovery, and you gave me nearly 100 chapters of popular science about the Golden Eagle's career.

At first glance, the title of the book sounds like I have become a sand sculpture😅😅

Oh, come back and dig a grave. I said, what kind of spiritual energy recovery is there, all the bells and whistles, why don't you come out, why don't you collapse, let you write about the reality of daily life, how good it is, the world is so big, isn't it enough for you to wander around? Just bring your own system to be immune to human harm. The sky is vast and you can fly. There are so many inhuman novels that have killed people at the starting point of spiritual energy recovery. If you are stuck between two races and there are still people you care about in the human world, you are no longer human inside and out. Then you create some messy creatures and act as monsters to gain experience. Wouldn't it be nice for me to play a game?

I would like to give the author a few suggestions to see how the author decides on the main goal of the article 1. The author is now thinking about what to write, so he feels overwhelmed. The final height, goal, and achievement of the protagonist are determined first. Then use this goal to advance the plot, and control the progress so that the plot will not be delayed or too fast. 2 The protagonist's charm and force. What is the charm of golden eagles? Eagle shooting into the sky? Blood-stained style? It's hard to feel it from a human perspective. In addition to searching for golden eagle documentaries, the author can also imagine that he is a golden eagle flying in the sky and catching prey from a first-person perspective. No matter what, you can go bungee jumping to experience it. In terms of military force, it is best not to regard the system as the main description. If you can write down the numbers, you will not be able to write about it in the future. Since what you wrote before will focus on feather defense and body shape, the system can only be a tool and an auxiliary. 3 details Details are things that some authors often do not write about, but they are very important. The reality of the world is controlled by these details. For example, the male protagonist and another golden eagle fought to death, both sides collided head-on and fell from the air to the tree crown on the hillside. The huge wings lifted the tree. The dead branches were scattered all over the ground. The male protagonist clung to the golden eagle's wings, and the golden eagle also clenched the male protagonist's abdomen. The severe pain made both of them go crazy. From the top of the tree to the bottom of the tree, they fell onto the thick moss. Blood, feathers, and debris poured down. The two beasts were forgotten, and their eyes were fixed on each other. This is a duel between kings, the winner is king, the sky does not need a second king. The fight continued, rolling from the hillside to the river valley and hitting the rocks. The sharp rocks made the golden eagle roar in pain. Taking this opportunity, the male protagonist released the talons that clasped the wings and clasped the golden eagle's chest like lightning. The feeling of imminent death made the golden eagle struggle desperately, and kicked the male protagonist desperately with its sharp claws. The feathers were mixed with blood and scattered on the ground. The male protagonist let out a long cry and pierced the golden eagle's claws into its heart. The golden eagle instantly stood up with its feathers trembling and wide-eyed. Finally, the strength gradually faded away, the golden eagle stared at the male protagonist, and his eyelids slowly closed. This life and death battle comes to an end. Are the fights here staged? The environment from the sky to the canopy to the ground comes out. Of course, this is just a demonstration. My writing skills are very poor. The author can just learn the style. Tianshan Mountain is so beautiful that I must write about it.

I thought this book was well written at the beginning, but recently I feel a little confused. It's not that it's poisonous, it's that the author likes the role of sister very much. The male protagonist doesn't have it. He's crazy about cheating on his sister. Don't cheat on her. We're looking at the male protagonist. The sister's skills are very strong in the first one, and she can't stand it any more.

I would like to ask the brothers who have watched it, is the protagonist going to be a human pet in the later stage? Personally, I feel that the human patron saint is also a human pet, but it just protects one person and becomes the protector of all. If this is the case, it will not look good, after all, like the dragon, there will be times when it is slaughtered 😅

It's hand-drawn, so the quality may not be very good, so please bear with me.

You start with an eagle, and all upgrades depend on eating.

Either don't add a system. The purpose of the system article is to make cheating more fun. If you add a system, it will always be deliberately suppressed. It feels like hypocrisy! Being a bitch and a son at the same time building a memorial arch! Both those who dislike systematic writing and those who like systematic writing are offended. I am also speechless! ! ! This is the kind of swing that makes people jump on the streets!

This book is really good. At least it is the best among the books I have read about turning into alien beasts. Are there any similar and good-looking books?

Ah, isn't it? I just discovered The Eunuch after I ordered all the books... Does the author plan to come back to write? One thing I said was that I felt very comfortable watching it. When I was a kid, I watched Shen Shixi's Internal Odor

Why doesn't the author update?

Why is QwQ not updated?

I've done everything to death and haven't found a successor.

This book is really well written. It's a pity that the author doesn't update anymore.