Starting from Douluo and Becoming a God

What kind of thing is it written? There is only one good setting (zombie martial arts), but there are a bunch of other poisonous points, which is disgusting to death. Inexplicably, I didn't enter the Wuhun Palace at the beginning because I thought Tang Hao might kill you, but shit, the protagonist didn't think of this at all, and he didn't want to join the protagonist Tang San. If I hadn't read the comments about the addition of Wuhundian at the end, I wouldn't have wanted to bear to eat it💩 and I would have continued reading. Why do you have to have a sand dollar plot like Su Yuntao being raped? Also, Mathieu Nuo conceals the truth and fails to report the protagonist. He wants to assassinate the protagonist without any injustice or grudge. If a branch leader discovers a good young talent with full soul power and reports it to him, will he get no benefit or something? After reading the comments that there was a clone of myself in the future, I gave up decisively.

Overall, I feel that this series always gives people a feeling like "If God doesn't allow me, I will defy heaven." Or the feeling that Nezha said in "The Devil Boy Comes to the World", "It's up to me to decide whether it's a devil or a fairy!" Of course, this is just my personal opinion and does not rule out other people's thoughts, but I feel that the author can still write the protagonist more vividly. (Of course, I don't mean to ask the author to be too specific. After all, the author worked hard on coding the book, right!) Well~well~. Overall, I feel that the author's book is quite good. The author will continue to work hard and cheer for you! Come on! Come on!

Jiang Chen? General? The author has ideas 😰😰😰

It's still very good. I hope it won't be too tight in the future. Among the fans, this one and Douluo Zhilong Jingshi are two books that I have always been very optimistic about. I wish you a successful completion of the book. Don't be a eunuch.

Generally speaking, there are some key points where the protagonist is forced to lose his wits. Giving opportunities again and again is just like playing two waves of death in a game, and it feels a bit different. In the early stage, he beats people like a cool article without releasing his martial spirit. In the later stage, it goes up the difficulty like crazy. Otherwise, it will be fun to the end, or else it will be more fun to write plots and plots. It is not completely cool, and there is no calculation. It is a bit disgusting.

666 Looks great. Keep updating.

I hope the author can see some comments. Because the ancient novel you, the author, arranged for the protagonist to be a zombie, he himself is a zombie. According to the routine of most novels, he will encounter inner demons, especially like the protagonist. See if you can save Bibi Dong and kill the master. I was very unhappy when I read the original novel, he was just a scumbag. So I strongly requested to see if Bibi Dong could kill him.

To be honest, I feel like there are only two real villains in the original novel. One is Qian Xunji and the other is Yu Xiaogang.

I have an idea: Tang San was fucking killed by Qian Xunji, and Bibi Dong killed Qian Xunji again. Is it a kindness to Tang San? Is it because Tang San destroyed the Wuhun Palace and killed Bibi Dong later to repay a kindness with revenge (please don't comment on your personal opinion)

I think if the protagonist's daughter is captured by Tang San, then this book should be abandoned! First of all, the protagonist clearly knows that Tang San is in the monthly magazine, but still puts his children into other people's homes to study. What is this called? Putting your daughter in front of the enemy? And then bet on the enemy's noble sentiments? If the protagonist can still get through it if he doesn't show up, it's because Tang San doesn't know that your daughter is here But it's obvious that Tang San has seen the protagonist's back and is almost sure of your identity. It would be funny if he still has no idea about the protagonist's daughter. To be honest in this book, I don't recommend that the protagonist becomes a villain, but I also hope that he can have some brains, okay? If a villain doesn't kill decisively and shows mercy in all kinds of ways, he is mentally retarded.    ，?， If the next plot is that Tang San kidnapped Xuening and I would give up the book, because the protagonist's wife is stupid.

For the first time, I felt that the protagonist was a waste. He had so many opportunities to kill the seven monsters in the past. He thought he was in control of everything, so he gave others the opportunity to become stronger. He was put into desperate situations twice, and now he is out of control at the critical moment. He knew that Poseidon was cheating Tang San, and he felt that his soul power was higher than Tang San's, so he didn't rush to practice his soul power and went to refine Pangu's skull. However, Tang San came and he was dumbfounded again. What the hell?

Cow, cow! Chapter 341: I am practicing my avatar and playing with women. I am practicing my avatar and am aware that my avatar is playing with women and it makes him noisy. I am cutting off my avatar's perception.

I show my cards, I just follow the five senses in my three views, Douluo Continent animation, the moment I saw Bibi Dong, the Shrek Seven Devils, Qian Renxue, go to hell!

Haha, be green yourself. N. B.

The content in the later chapters is too retarded. The avatar does whatever he does to his wife, and he cultivates himself. Hehe.

The protagonist is a zombie, but you think sucking blood is unconscionable? Childish, it can improve strength and has no side effects, no need? Woman's kindness

I saw the comments and opened a harem! I'm coming! Why not have a harem time travel? Isn't time traveling just for pretense and having a harem? Otherwise, wouldn't it be nice to make tens of millions in reality?

Create a special group of books called the trash can and put some poisonous weeds in it.

The current Douluo fanfic, don't follow the protagonist ✔ Join the Spirit Hall ✔, the single innate awakened martial spirit is not enough ✔ satisfy the above three, I don't know if it is a popular book, but there must be many old bookworms reading it, I personally dislike brainless and invincible stories

You're a time traveler, why are you like a child and don't understand anything?

To be honest, after Tang San became a god, he should be able to evolve Yu Xiaogang's martial spirit into a holy dragon of light, at least become a priest, and he could at least do well if he had a disciple of the God King as his backer. However, in the end, he didn't become a god. Why do these fan fiction protagonists think that they will definitely become gods by following Tang San? ?

Can the author, the heroine, add Zhu Zhuqing?

Which photo did Yu Xiaogang get fucked with...

I only saw a loser who was overturned even though he had all the advantages. Even if I picked a random native and gave him such a big trick, he would have done better than him, let alone a time traveler who knew the plot.

Don't you know how poisonous you are? My martial soul in Douluo is the soul ring. I killed Tang San, destroyed the Haotian Sect, and all kinds of Tang San's black spots. It's fun to see, but I just turned around and opened Douluo Continent. What the hell?

A strange beast appears in the Douluo community, and I call him an expert

The protagonist seems to have no brains 🙂

In Douluo, there is no one who is bad or good. Yu Xiaogang is actually a very good person. He was spurned by the most proud family of Douluo with his useless talent but refused to give up. He gave up martial arts and followed literature. There are two dragons and Boss Fu to travel around the world together. Only his brain can create the trinity. In the eyes of some readers, he is a scumbag because of his lack of responsibility and his lack of responsibility, which caused Bibi Dong to lose her virginity and become incompetent. He is not responsible enough to dare to marry Erlong's cousin. He said that Tang San's rise has nothing to do with Yu Xiaogang. All of this is completely wrong! Not to mention that he summarized the adaptation of soul rings and the top ten competitions for martial arts. Just because he dared to lose face for him and find Boss Fu who didn't dare to see him again, and to be with Erlong, whose ethics and talent were impossible to be together, was almost all because of Tang San. He treated Tang San as a son even more than Tang Hao, but all he got in return was the scolding of the readers' trashy view. He came to Shrek to formulate excellent growth policies for the children, and summarized plans for them during the game to achieve the seven-in-one soul skill fusion. It can almost be said that in the early stage, without him, the Shrek Seven Devils would not have been able to participate in the mainland competition and win the competition. Without him accepting Erlong to break the shackles of ethics, there would be no Shrek Academy. He is the one who can truly do great things with a mortal body. Bibi Dong cannot compare to him. She fell into the devil's path because she lost her virginity. This is no wonder Master. It is the evil idea of ​​the Pope. It would not work for anyone below level 99. Tang San couldn't compare to him. He could hurt his loved ones even if they were slightly injured. He had an extreme personality and couldn't compare to the master in every aspect except his talent. Tang Hao's wife became decadent just after returning to her original form, but as for the master, the sect that hated him was destroyed. He was very sad, but he was bent on revenge and did not give up. This is equivalent to pitting mortals against the Spirit Hall. Tang Hao only dared to save Tang San but did not dare to truly defeat Wuhun Palace. From this point of view, Xiaogang is a Chinese figure, affectionate, righteous, and ethical. Although he has been decadent, he dares to fight hard and sacrifice his face to find Bibi Dong for Tang San. If he has talent, the one who achieves great things must be Yu Xiaogang.

They are written by many authors who don't have enough brains and have no IQ. Before you have the strength or the rights, you go to Shrek, provoke Tang San, and kidnap Xiao Wu. Do you think Tang Hao won't kill you? I'm still reluctant to kill you, or I don't dare to kill you. Before you grew up, you went to Tang San, and you were more talented and more awesome than him. Do you think Tang Hao wouldn't kill you? Even Zhao Wuji was beaten to death by Tang Hao just to test Tang San and give him some injuries. Are you sure that Tang Hao is a holy mother and won't attack you?

I admire you for being able to make the main character even more disgusting than Tang San.