Tianhai Daowu

Overall, it's pretty good. The plot, rhythm, and excitement are all above the passing mark. But there are too many typos, which affects the reading experience

There are double updates for many days, it's too strong.

I forgot to vote yesterday, so I quickly made up for it, it looks great as always!

Too strong! Another burst of updates, so cool to see!

Come support today! Finally caught up with the latest progress and started catching up~

The typo is painful to read. Does the author want to give up? This book looks okay. If the author pays more attention, the results will be better. You should be mentally prepared in advance for writing this kind of thing. I hope it will be good.

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In the previous life, his body was disabled but his will was strong. In this life, his body is strong but his will is weak 🙂

I was already invincible in wisdom in my previous life. As for being a slap in the face without thinking, don't you think this behavior is childish? It feels like a normal middle-aged man peeing in public 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅

The writing logic is not quite right. For a small island-style family like this, the more geniuses in the family, the better. When it comes to suppressing geniuses, you can at most be the owner of one family and one island. There are ancestors above you and people from different families below. When geniuses rise, you may not be the owner of an island. Several islands are divided together. Isn't it better to be a local emperor than to have a family on the same island? It is not a mainland-style family, and it is always affected by the outside world.

I clicked on it when I saw the mature and calm label. I didn't expect it to be so mindless. It's just pretentious. It's rubbish.

The whole process was pretentious, although it was not Long Aotian's type of pretentiousness, but it was also very embarrassing, and his psychological activities were unparalleled.

Accepting Yan Ruyu as a maid, is this accepting a maid or an ancestor? Even if the protagonist doesn't treat her as a maid, she has to know something about it, right? And let the protagonist coax her?

Investment road review: 5 points for each item This rating is only for personal feelings and for reference only Environment 2 points Scenario 2 points Plot 3 points Logic 3 points Investment 4 points Chasing investment 1 point Writing 3 points Characters 4 points Rare good plot, character relationships, dialogue, and personality are all very good. Don't worry about the pursuit score, because it is a new book and it will not be high. The author will continue to work hard and look forward to you.

Speechless. With the memory of the previous life, I killed someone for the first time and then vomited. In the previous life, you just practiced cultivation and didn't kill anyone? ? ?

Yan Yu'er is such a failure. Why did you write this? If your cultivation level is so low, why did you bring it into the mountains? ?

The martial arts novel also has a martial arts style. The plot is very compact and should be slow-burning. There is nothing exciting in the early stage, but it is still very interesting. It is rare to see this kind of martial arts novel without plug-ins. It depends on the author's own writing skills. Also, why can't I post this chapter? Is my network too stuck? 🤔

What is this writing about? He practices martial arts secretly and is so frustrated that even Shen Nong can't bear it. What kind of protagonist is this?

There are so many problems that it becomes annoying. I just said that one was written too childishly, and all the people in it were written quite childishly.

In fact, it's so-so. Let's not talk about typos. Since the previous life said that the protagonist's strategy was very powerful, but then he didn't show it later, I felt that the protagonist was very stupid. Most of the time, I didn't understand it at all. I'm a novice.

It's bland, there are a lot of typos, there are a lot of illogical sentences, the plot is average, in fact, there is usually nothing and you can watch it, but so many typos and incorrect sentences make it uncomfortable to watch.

There are a lot of typos, but the content is good

Just reading the introduction is so cliche that people have no desire to read it, but many people still read it, so the author will not change and there will be more and more bad books.

I watched it, although I haven't finished it yet. Let me tell you the reason why it is not popular. First point: Slow heat is not particularly attractive. It is relatively bland. Of course, many people may like this. Second Personality: I may have discouraged many people at the beginning. I love my family too much, and I don't really like it either. To put it simply, this type of writing in the Internet literature world may have been good 10 years ago, but now most people see why the parents of the family sacrifice themselves to directly persuade them to quit, and the effect is huge. The author can write about loving and being kind to his family, but stay true to yourself. You are a person, not a tool. Real people are becoming more and more realistic. Will you sacrifice yourself for your family? In fact, 99% of the time we can't solve this problem. We can hate, get angry, or take revenge, but very few people actually sacrifice themselves. This is what we call ordinary people. Otherwise, try not to write about threatening your parents. There are basically no big poison spots in the early stage. I didn't see them. Of course, it may be that I have higher poison resistance. It's good to read the book, but there are a lot of typos.

Damn it, if you don't have a system, you won't be able to write about martial arts. Every book will look dead!

The writing is poor, the dialogue is childish, and the author still has a long way to go.

The force aspect is not well written, but the management aspect is weak.

Among the protagonists and main supporting characters, there are naive ones, yandere ones, schizophrenic ones, those who do what they want, and those who do not value their own lives. This is a mental hospital, okay?

Didn't you give me the sword? How do you use the sword?

Recommend this traditional fairy tale "Cultivation of Immortality: I Have a Space for Enlightenment" Lin Fan possesses a space for enlightenment and can instantly comprehend magical powers! Penglai Water Realm, Ice Soul Cold Light, various top-notch spells are at your fingertips; Sword Qi thunder sound, sword light differentiation, all kinds of secrets of swordsmanship are at your fingertips. This book is also known as "I Know More than 100 Million Magic Techniques", "Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Sudden Enlightenment", "My Cultivation of Immortality All Relies on Comprehension"