Tokyo Manga Master

Speechless, I have to write about orphans when writing comics.

It's inexplicable. I am depressed for the sake of being depressed. If you write slowly, don't write poisonous things. Everyone's time is limited, and self-impression is the most fatal. If you don't want to make money by writing novels, just say so.

Not only is it a chapter a day, but it is also very good at reading. . . .

The protagonist is too smart and too short-sighted. Even though he has a golden finger, why does he look down on other original characters because he just relies on copying? When I see someone mocking someone inwardly and still smiling on the outside, are you, the author, underage?

I'm a little curious how you managed to read 4 chapters for 10 minutes?

🤫🤫🤫 The protagonist has traveled through time and was dozens of years old in his previous life. From the description in the article, I infer that his mental age is 14 years old, and he is extremely middle school. Suddenly I remembered the lyrics "You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, poisonous, poisonous!" Goodbye

You wrote a novel about comics, from chapter 42 to chapter 51, you included 10 plot chapters that have nothing to do with comics. Although this may be your own consideration, it is considered the main plot, but couldn't you condense it and end it in three chapters? People who watched it said you were stupid because you didn't give what the readers wanted to see, and you just wrote some plots that the readers were not interested in.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist was a successful person in his previous life, because the current protagonist does not understand the world, likes to fantasize, is often in a daze, and is a sensitive and middle-aged boy. He does not have the caution, calmness and high emotional intelligence of an adult at all. So why not write a time traveler who graduates from high school and is still doing nothing in his twenties? And what I've written now doesn't inspire me to want to read it. I wanted to see how the author successfully adapted the comics and improved his abilities. Unfortunately, there was very little written about it, and I gradually lost interest. I hope the author will work hard!

Whether you copied it and no one knows about it or something else The counterattack of Long Aotian, which has nothing to do with the main plot, is really low. It felt like I had a good start, but then I couldn't continue writing in the middle, and finally I started piecing together things that didn't make sense.

The male protagonist's character is extremely real. The civil servant plan has not even begun yet, and he has imagined that he will be a great success. His proud and swollen look makes people have a weird and shameful feeling of being exposed in the dark history. Where? The camera was removed? But it is indeed easy to offend people. He is so naive that he seems to be overturned in the next second, planting flags everywhere. But I think it's still acceptable. After reading it for a long time, everyone seems to have a pretty face.

I haven't understood the chapters in the past two days. Why do these plots suddenly appear? Are they meant to be a misfortune? Or what?

Recently, I feel like more and more people are talking about water. I have read about it in several books.

You are still so stupid after two days and one chapter, please drop the eunuch and stop writing books. You are completely sorry for any readers who are following this book. You are such an irresponsible author. You cannot afford the career of an author.

Don't write about this kind of child. You're here for fun, not for misfortune.

Pu Pu, there is too much nonsense. The description of chuuni YY will dissuade many people. Although I like to read manga or anime fans, it just feels okay.

Why can't we update quickly? Find a small black room and lock the author up. If he doesn't write 200,000-300,000 words a day, he won't give him food.

Does the content of the last 10 chapters have anything to do with the comics? Just for an assistant, write down the assistant's background and life experience in detail? The plot is lagging and updates are slow, so now I can only say that I am looking forward to the next one.

If this book is not popular, God cannot tolerate it.

I hope that the single heroine will not be ambiguous. Although I have always liked watching harems, this kind of... Well, you know, it can easily cause nausea.

I think the beginning of this novel should be to sell the studio's initial works and then write it by myself, otherwise the front and back would be two novels.

This is a copy type, right? I just read several pictures, why is it that most of the content is in yy, but the description of the copy is only two simple sentences? You don't have any sense of empathy when you write like this. It will make people think that who is this person? He is lusting after her all day long. I don't know this person. It's better to stay away from her!

It's just embarrassing. It's really weird to think that the protagonist was a promising adult in his previous life, and then he is so average after being reborn.

What should you do when you put it on the shelves? I feel like I'm worried about you. It's true that the eunuch is not in a hurry, but the emperor is. Your update is really hopeless.

I wonder what the author is thinking? An unknown young lady asks for a bunch of yy just to highlight that he doesn't deserve to have a name. If there's only one, forget it, and then there's... Just to highlight that she doesn't deserve to have a name? ? ?

Three books, two palaces. The themes are pretty good

I just came from Time Traveling to Gu Aotian, but both books ended up in the palace... So embarrassing. Who can tell me why this book came to the palace? !

The emotional scene is too awkward, why not write it?

It's well written, and I'll give you all the recommendation votes.

Very nice, please update more (~￣▽￣)~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~