Traveling to Gu Aotian

I read dozens of chapters. The protagonist is not very independent and follows the original protagonist. The painting style of the self-created characters is unique, and the 4 wives are self-created. The wives set at the time of creation are not CPor heroines. I won't say much about the last two. The names of the first two are Hatsune and Luo Tianyi. Please note, this is not a fan of the V family. Although the world description is not important because it is related to humanities, there is indeed a problem with the description. Generally speaking, it is more like a bystander. The protagonist is not deeply involved in the plot, and there is no so-called "another perspective" in fan fiction. It follows the original plot and there are no changes. If you accept the style issues of self-created characters and the extraordinary self-created wife, this is a fanfic that you can read.

In fact, the books are pretty good. "Nazarick" and "Naxramas" seem to be intentional in distinguishing the original works from the fan fiction, which is a great point. And when I read the original work, I felt ambivalent about which side's absolute victory would make me feel uncomfortable. Having a time traveler as a synthesis is very good, and it can be regarded as making up for the regrets of those bad interpersonal relationships. The protagonist has been a young man for two lives. In the third life, he still crushes it with absolute power. The transformation of growth becomes crucial. The love that cannot be let down and the responsibility as a creator are both factors and motivation for growth. Coupled with the exploration of the unknown world, just thinking about it is very exciting. It is wonderful, but the hazy creativity and thoughts in our minds can easily make us pursue perfection too much and dare not write. I still suggest the author to write down. No matter which direction, the Luo Feng you write will definitely become more and more three-dimensional, and it will make him closer and closer to becoming a real character. Finally, and what I am more curious about, I want to ask the author for his opinion Luo Feng will become a "god"? Or "people"?

Although I know that the original name of Bone King is Momonga, I have only read the manga and not the original novel. I still feel that the name Momonga is a bit confusing. It would be great if it could be changed to Momonga.

One day, with the knife in hand, I can kill the eunuch dogs in the world!

It's a very interesting book. I have a question. Isn't the evil princess supposed to be very strong? Or did I remember it wrong?

The plot is pretty good, but some of the descriptions are a bit confusing and the sentences don't make sense.

If you traveled back in time before Gu Aotian traveled through time, and you were a rich second generation, what would you do? I will join the Great Tomb. One month before closing the server, I will start preparing for the acquisition, contact the game executives (spend money), and create game races, skills, props, such as skills: make a game that can use magic to manifest anything! ! ! Of course, don't spend all the money, at least keep some, and have a backup plan if you don't travel through time! 😍

The ecological environment has completely collapsed. Ordinary people like flying squirrels need to wear goggles and gas masks when going out. The air is filled with toxic gases, the ozone layer is completely destroyed, and harmful radiation is scorching the earth. The sky was shrouded in black poisonous clouds, and there was very little or no time to directly see the sun and celestial bodies (that's why the beautiful starry sky was set in the sixth sky, and Momonga saw the real night sky for the first time in another world) The chaebols have completely taken control of the world, education for all has been cancelled, and elementary schools are not affordable for most ordinary people. Ulbert hates this society. Both of his parents died at work. They are consumables that are thrown away in the eyes of capitalists, so Demiurge was created. Momonga's parents died of overwork in order for Momonga to attend elementary school, and there was no pension or very little, and civilians were just consumables. Although Momonga works hard and earns a meager income, he can still play games without any other expenses. Momonga's daily food consists of nutritious drinks, pills and meat-flavored liquid processed foods. Natural foods are too expensive, and Momonga can't afford to eat them even once (so Momonga has never eaten natural food in his life, and has no chance of becoming a skeleton after traveling through time). After the external environment was polluted, the huge complex company took refuge in an ecological city called Arcology. Arcology can be said to be a country, and there are also wars between Arcology.

After seeing this book, I can only say that I don't even want to read the anime anymore, I just want it to be updated soon.

Choosing a race is really embarrassing. Are dark elves bad? Or wouldn't it be better to form a trade union on your own? Just choose an immortal race. At least he could eat, drink, poop, and sleep. He chose a Stitch Monster, a race that didn't have a penis. The most precious thing in the Gu Aotian world is that you can travel through the server on the last day. Start your own union and build your own NPC. Do something with the setting and you can get a bunch of Einsteins, Edisons, and Darwins. 😐Isn't this the most precious? The King of Bones doesn't dare to do this or that when he comes to another world. It's not because the technology tree is low and he can't investigate the level of the other world at all. It wasn't until the second animation that the hamster learned martial arts.

Read Chapter 25! The first few chapters were okay until 4 self-made characters came out. Poison has basically started. The names of the four characters are awkward. Even characters like Remram are casual, but several singers have problems with their style of painting. Then the most poisonous part is the one who said he wanted to save the girl who broke into the underground tomb in the original work, huh? Save, you really think you are an outsider, this is the guild you created! Don't you know what will happen if you break into the underground tomb in the game? The most important thing is to save it. Anyway, you are basically coveting someone else's body, but what are you talking about about filial piety? Traditional Chinese virtues do not include stealing other people's things to support the family, and there is injustice all over the world all the time. So what should the protagonist do? A character who dies when he dies makes a lot of people unhappy. He is very good and powerful.

By the way, why do so many people like the evil camp? Why not be lawful? Why not be neutral? How miserable must it be to think about the evil camp all day long in reality?

Let me make a suggestion. The writing style needs to be improved. The description of character interaction is very embarrassing. If you can't write humorous scenes, don't write it. Pay more attention to other details. It's okay if the characters complain about the two-dimensional point in the dialogue, but don't write it in such an embarrassing way. If you can't get rid of the baggage, you can't get rid of it. Because there are not many authors who know how to shed their burdens, and even fewer who do it well. The dozens of chapters I have read are all embarrassing and humorless complaints. Some of them are understandable, but the whole chapter is abnormal. What are the names of the protagonist's wives? I remember there seemed to be a Hatsune? Or what, I can't remember. This is a big poisonous point, not only because many people are Miku fans. Just giving it this name makes people feel embarrassed. It feels like a book written by a typical two-dimensional junior high school student. Very... Two-dimensional, very immature...

Has the author read Kino's Journey? In that article, Old Bones is really cool. Without the props reserves of the big tomb, without the help of the guardians, he rules the world by himself for a girl, and finally has a child. It is said that Lao Gu decreed that he would never be able to have any offspring. In Journey to Kino, he also relied on the skills of the heroine to achieve this.

At the beginning of the time-travel game, you have been a dog-licker for more than ten years, and you will have to be a dog-licker for the rest of your life. The essence of this book is to teach you how to be a qualified dog-licker. No matter how funny you make the content, it will still make people laugh.

Shennong passed by, a rare fan of Overlord, but the level is really not good

Is Gu Aotian good-looking? Anyway, I can't stand it

Since the protagonist knows that the original plot sets up the game's race that will affect the player's mind after time travel, he also creates an undead race called Stitch Monster. He is not afraid that the undead's hatred of life will affect him. Or is this the author's bad taste, since there are so many race choices. Why don't you choose the strongest race and profession if you know the advantages of the plot?

Why does this time traveler go out of his way to please the Bone King? Wouldn't it be nice to open his own guild and be the president? It's a game anyway, there's no need to go out of your way to please Japan.

I traveled back in time and knew how to reach the sky in one step, but I still acted like a dog licker. Is this my destiny to be a dog licker? You can add races, professions, abilities, props... Whatever you want, just add it yourself when the game is about to shut down the server. You actually have to rely on licking the original protagonist (especially when the original protagonist is anti-human)? If it is really the so-called salted fish, then why do you still want to travel through time? Wouldn't it be better to just enjoy the life of a rich person in the original world? Since you want to travel through the past and experience a different world, why do you want to be someone else's little brother (especially when the protagonist can easily have the power to surpass the person being licked by the protagonist)? ? ? It's just the author's licking and some readers' licking. A group of elementary school students who are black and disabled in the second grade of middle school.

I finally got to see what it means to be an NC fan. It's pitiful to have such a bad bone. -_-||This is a rhythm that makes me want to offer chrysanthemums. T_T

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage it was all about digging holes, and then it suddenly ended in a rush without filling the holes. What's the difference between it and a bad ending? For example, the Six Great Gods and the Eight Desire Kings~there are obviously players appearing in the middle, but they just end it as if nothing happened.

I felt inexplicably angry. When I saw the four counselors in the 300th chapter, I felt that the protagonist was trying to put everything into his base camp and let go just because he liked the four counselors? That Arche wasn't even punished. She even took her sister and mother to the big tomb. I just want to say: Has the protagonist invested his own feelings in the game for twelve years? Who would let others trample on his hard work? You want to say that Arche's sentiments are really noble, but the author didn't write it very well. Is it just based on appearance? It's okay to admit that Arche and she were not written into the big tomb, but why her mother? The author made the protagonist lustful, ruthless, and a villain. Here, the Holy Mother rises again. Are you tmnc? I'm so angry that my stomach hurts. If you want to say that the protagonist looks good, there is no shortage of beauties in the big tomb. As long as the protagonist has any brains, he shouldn't put so many "bugs" into the big tomb at once. It's really no wonder that the supporting actors think that the protagonist has a sperm in his body and is completely in love with each other - he is so awesome. Is it okay to learn from other people's original Bone King? You can put your talents anywhere, but not at home. To put it bluntly - aren't you afraid that your base camp will be stolen? Of course, it might be necessary to highlight the humanity of the protagonist, right? But if that's the case, I just want to ask: Why, when other Bone Kings were born at the bottom, and their humanity was wiped out because they became undead, and your protagonist has enjoyed all the glory, how can you have a deeper understanding than the Bone King? Or just a whim? Then the main character is a pure nt.

After reading the latest two chapters, I have a feeling of excitement that is hard to express in words. Every time Lao Gu is alone, there are always people showing love to empty nesters in anime. Although the reunion of the Supreme Beings is fake now, it satisfies the loneliness of a single-parent family since the thirteen volumes (manual comedy). Moreover, these two chapters express a sense of empathy. I am particularly looking forward to the reunion of my friends because of my health. When I read it, I was particularly moved by the reunion of old friends. Thank you to the author.

. . After reading about 50 chapters, I felt that it was very long-winded I kept saying some jokes, but I felt that the number of words was not funny at all I also kept emphasizing that I spent too much money and could not control my own power, so I only used three tricks.

The Anshi Rebellion...... If you understand it, please like it

When you take off your pants and fart, why do you still build a memorial arch? It's disgusting. It's disgusting! Nausea! I turned off the lights! Disgusting!

It still looks good, I might take it out and read it every few years.

Has the author never read the original novel? I don't understand many settings. First of all, there is no Newton's law in the world of Bone King. When a stone falls from the sky, there is no air resistance, and it will fall directly and faster, faster and faster. The laws of this world are completely dominated by magic laws, and technology cannot develop at all.

It's much better written than the original work, and it suits my taste very well. I'm going to go to Twitter and tell the Japanese side that the original author asked him to look at what is called Gu Aotian, and the manual work is funny.