I Have a Game Boy Advance

Please write a stand-alone game! Top notch ideas! The interactions between the top-notch characters are like playing house~

I came here after seeing the chapter "The Protagonist Must Die", butcher, come on.

The imagination is good, and although the character interaction is flawed, it is not unsightly. To compare it to playing Werewolf, Player A: I am a good person, but I suspect No. 2 Is a wolf. Player B: I am not a wolf, the protagonist is zz. Protagonist: You dare to scold me? I want revenge. (￢_￢) This is the feeling. You can say that the logic is fine, but it looks weird. The key is that the author is quite willful. The comment section has pointed out that the interaction between reincarnations affects the perception. It is recommended to play alone. The author said that since the character interaction seems awkward, then increase efforts to write more character interactions. The meaning of this sentence has two levels. How can the opinions of readers be as important as my writing? Also, if the character interaction is awkward, then use this book to practice writing. If you are not crazy about it, I can only say that you should work hard, the author. The character interaction in this book is not ninth-rate, and the imagination is far from first-rate. There are many non-human genes of the World Dream Master and so on that are bigger than this imagination. This book can be considered second-rate at best in terms of imagination.

The genre is not bad, I came here just for GBA, but the things written have little to do with GBA, and they are not attractive enough to give people a desire to read. Read about 50 chapters? However, there are several sections in the middle that are skipped 😤 After seeing Yakuza, I can't stand it anymore, it feels too empty 😅

I don't think there's anything wrong with this author's character interactions. It's not the so-called "first-class imaginative interaction". In fact, there are simply too many interactions between Xiao Bailong Aotian in the starting point. Even some so-called quasi-first-line masters are nothing more than this. For example, that one and that one from Mr. D. They have all been complained about in videos posted on station B. It's exactly the same plot routine from 10 years ago. If you are a gangster, just be a gangster. What kind of immortality is this? I think the advantage of this author is that he has a good imagination and a humorous writing style. The disadvantage is that the main line is not clear enough and the conflict is not enough to be antagonistic. Of course, his writing has always been in this light-hearted and humorous way. So even if there is a conflict, it cannot be written too intensely or too seriously. This can be regarded as success or failure. I hope the author can read more about the styles of other authors from Qidian. Some people just want to be relaxed and happy. You can also write articles that are very attractive. Another reason why I say that he is not the so-called "first-class imaginative interaction" is actually that he has no problem writing the interaction between the protagonist and the NPC. Because everyone knows this setting. Therefore, some dialogue processes are basically mentioned in the past and people will not look into them in detail. But the reincarnation is different. Although it is also a character in the book, it is different from the NPC in the script. The author obviously did not write enough when describing the dialogue of the real characters in the book. Some dialogues have to be carefully considered for the transition of the plot (this is also related to the consistent sense of humor in the article. I have mentioned this issue before). I think this is my personal understanding of the phrase "nine-flow interaction".

I don't know if this book can be finished without being a mess.

Extremely poisonous. It is not affected by the comment area. If you try hard to read 30 chapters, you will be poisoned and die. If you don't believe in evil, come and try it.

The setting of attribute points is too painful, isn't it? Kirby's speed is at the same level as ordinary people (○ﾟεﾟ○), and judging from the success rate of his specialties, the highest attribute cannot exceed ten points? Otherwise, the success rate is meaningless, and it will also cause a large number of worlds to be completely unplayable, and the attributes will directly crush them.

That hypnosis technique is too ridiculous. It's just like the hypnosis technique in pornographic novels.

I saw it written about GBA, so I watched it. It made me depressed. I really couldn't watch it. The protagonist is really speechless and the character's character is speechless. Whoever watches it will know it. If you are in a bad mood, don't read it.