My Alien Homestead

The whole article is too depressing, and it would be better to "explode" appropriately. I can only say that it has the potential to become a "good book", but the author does not know how to use it. I suggest you refer to the writing method of the climax of "Shuangwen".

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Once you smell a piece of cabbage, the boss will buy it at a high price. The protagonist has to forcefully pretend to sell it for a fraction of the price, and is afraid that the store will bully her. Then, without any foreshadowing, the customer is forced to be surprised. Wow, the cabbage soup tastes delicious. Wow, this is cabbage. Damn, this is cabbage. When I think of the smell of my hometown, I think of my mother. Oops! How embarrassing! Brother, I want to praise you for your good writing, but I don't know where to start.

The bad points are the social relationships of the first protagonist. It's so childishly written. A classmate robbed and killed someone, and was expelled. Well~_~it doesn't matter. Then there was the chef riot, where several chefs came from different backgrounds to cause trouble and robberies. I don't know what you want to express in these paragraphs, is it social injustice? I think the current social environment is not yet at the point where a few chefs can become rampant. Really childish.

The family is forcing a mandarin duck into a match. It just looks disgusting. Let's go, let's go!

The different world and system settings are very innovative, but the plot of the world is becoming more and more ridiculous. From the beginning, the enemies are becoming more and more cruel as they pop up, but they still carelessly let people around them wander around. When encountering danger, the protagonist goes to save it. This reminds me of the cool novels in the past with pig's feet and perfect luck. . .

The opening chapter is extremely poisonous. A better subject to write like this. It was a routine from a few years ago, right?

The previous content makes me wonder if the author is an adult?

This kind of protagonist's immortality is unreasonable!

I didn't even want to read this kind of junk book, so I just ran away.

If I had killed the people who caused the trouble and thrown their bodies into another world, it would be clean.

If today was not boring enough, I would not have read a hundred chapters. Nowadays, the society is dark, and the plot of bitterness and hatred is no longer popular. A good golden finger is completely useless. I feel uncomfortable after reading it for a day, and I don't know what the author's thinking is. I regret wasting a day on a novel that can't even make me feel refreshed and happy. Don't go back.

Being targeted at every turn, this kind of plot has no market anymore.

This way of writing is a bit immature, I can't survive at the starting point now.

I can't stand it anymore. Various supporting characters and passers-by have negative IQs.

Real estate has been developed to the alien planet. It is really a saying on the Internet. Real estate can rejuvenate the country. Buy a building in Beijing and Shanghai and buy it in the United States 😭

The subject matter has been made so low

My intelligence has dropped to zero. I have to take my time and say goodbye.

Pig's feet are used as saints and they are forced to show off. One person can carry all the sick people in China home

Mad's name is so good, why did he run into the sewer after writing it? This is a rubbish novel and only gives 2 stars.

It's really okay to open a store without a business license.