I'm Doing Multiple-Choice Questions in Demon Slayer

It's so messy, the dialogues are messy, the character descriptions are messy, the action descriptions are messy... After all, I'm a new author, so that's understandable! But let's revise the first few chapters. If the three golden chapters are not written well, it will easily be abandoned by readers.

Put the butterfly in your mouth. . . You are really disgusting. Say goodbye.

This introduction is very interesting, it makes me laugh to death😂😂😂

It's no surprise that All Heavens summons characters, planes, and weird abilities. There are ten eunuch books out of ten. Otherwise, it ends hastily, making it uncomfortable to write and even more uncomfortable for readers to read.

I think the title of this novel could be changed. I don't think the title is good, but the content is great.