My Life of Exorcism in Japan

It's okay to have more female protagonists. The author's writing is good and the content is interesting, but can you please not overly write about little girls? Although there must be gentlemen who like to watch it, for me, a mortal who only likes Nako, it is very awkward to watch, as if I am watching a bad attitude to emphasize how bad I am. Unless the timeline at the end of this book is extended to more than 10 years later, is a harem full of little girls thinking 404?

It's quite well written, and it still has that charm, come on

Abnormal, most of them are junior high school students, even elementary school students, young girls

Looking at the first twenty chapters, I feel that the author has a hidden chuuni, but I don't think chuuni is a derogatory term, it should be a neutral term. Personally, I feel that middle school is a way for teenagers to pursue their own meaning and respect from others, but what they do is very childish because of their immature worldview. But the starting point is good, just like the author wrote that the protagonist always thinks about some philosophical issues, so he is different. In fact, in reality, basically everyone has this stage, but it is because they receive too much information and are bored with only studying when they were students. Of course I started to think of some lofty ideas to make myself stop studying. In fact, the lack of ideological foundation is not enough for us to think about such a grand topic. The information we usually receive is just general talk. In the end, even if we think about the answer, it is extreme. This is why many middle school students tend to go to extremes. In fact, the reason why the second graders will disappear is also very simple. As time goes by, the second graders all understand that they are not special, they are just ordinary people. But what I want to say is that this kind of passive acceptance of being an ordinary person will only harm people, because there is still unwillingness in the heart, but this unwillingness will not accomplish anything. In the end, we can only shrink back and remain indifferent. True bravery is either to proactively admit your own insignificance and then slowly start to change, or to continue to become a middle schooler and immerse yourself in fantasy, that's all. Alas, I have said so much, but I have gone off topic. In fact, I just wanted to comfort the author, because the article will reveal his own thoughts, so I will say a few more words.

I felt pretty good at the beginning, at least the author wouldn't follow the same routine all the time, but the more I read, the more problematic it became. Could it be that the author's own rebellious character was put into the book. When I saw Chapter 41, I wanted to complain. If you ask a little girl to make a decision, are you going to let her get a slap? Okay, since you decided to let an 11-year-old girl face it on her own, why couldn't you help it when her father wanted to beat her again? It's strange, okay, you slapped her in vain and then denied what you did before. Even if you didn't want to follow the routine, couldn't you have stopped the slap from the beginning and continued to let the father and daughter communicate? There is really something wrong with this approach. If you want to be different from others and slap yourself in the face, you might as well write the correct approach from the beginning. This is not a classic rebellion.

Give a suggestion Something. . For example, in order to protect their loved ones, they ignore most things to complete tasks, such as interpersonal relationships that have nothing to do with themselves. . These are easy to be criticized and written as poisonous points. It's better not to write it down or just write it off in one stroke. . . Don't show up all the time 😢

I've only read about a hundred chapters. The main character is clearly a straight man, but the way the female characters are tied together makes me feel uncomfortable every time. The writing style is a bit immature due to the word count.

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Are they all lolita? I haven't watched it yet. I just have a question, is it really not going to bleed to death?

What's the matter? I don't want to say much about the plot behind it. The author has eaten up all the settings. How can he spend three points on the total skill to triple the advanced level? It hurts me to spend my own skill points, but I spend all my energy on others. And what's the character of the male protagonist? Otherwise, if the author changed the title of the book to "Chinese Lolita Controls Raising Wife in Japan", it would make me angry if I didn't want to complain.

After reading four chapters, the author's plot is dragging, the writing is poor, and the reader is tired.

The height of 179cm is considered slightly tall in Japan but not too tall? Why do you like Tim? Or is the author a walking 500 thousand?

The plot of taking in a younger sister is a bit sudden, but that's okay, as it's just a branch plot, and it doesn't look like the usual light novel routine of picking someone up as an offering. I'm holding out hope. But the part about the underworld lady,,, I was really speechless. In fact, I haven't seen this kind of forced intellectualization in many years. That kind of novel usually persuades me to quit at the beginning. The problem is this book. The previous writing is quite good, and I feel that the dialogue between the squad leader and the male protagonist is quite three-dimensional. When you meet an unknown victim, you make compensation, and then you don't want others to bother you, but you show your face and tell your name. Isn't this very contradictory? If she is seriously injured and you are still unable to make amends, and you show your true face and tell her your name out of subconscious guilt, yes, it makes sense logically. If you were to pave the way and think that the traffic accident was serious, and you still felt that the victim was involved, so you disclosed your identity to pave the way for future compensation, then yes, it is reasonable, although this is also old Asashi's routine. In the situation shown in the article, I can only say that the male protagonist lost control of his mind for a moment. Subjectively, I don't want to get involved with her, but objectively, I tell her her true identity, and the character is torn apart instantly. Obviously you can use reasonable logic to make things develop to this point, but it turns into a "I don't care, I just want to pick you up". This is a trick to get people's mentality. It's not considered toxic at the moment, it's just a bit intellectually depressing. I will continue to watch it. I hope my poison resistance can last until the latest chapter.

After reading dozens of chapters, the writing style is very typical of sleepwalking. I am afraid that the author himself does not know what story he is writing. The level of word choice and sentence making needs to be improved. The transition between sentences and chapters is very loose. The overall impression I have after reading it is that of a dilapidated house without a foundation.

I think this book is okay. Why are there so many trolls? This book is so bad. I give recommendations every day recently.

Let's fight more monsters and run away events. . . If I write any more, there will be no more people. . Behind them are all young female animals and idiots who want Shura field. . The old copper smelter. . . . You take pills like this. . The characters are basically the same. . . 😰

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Instead of writing so many messy beautiful girls, with one popping up every now and then, why not just write one or two, and portray the characters more vividly, with personality and soul, rather than writing all the girls to look the same, which is not interesting at all. The most important thing in most novels is the interesting soul of the characters rather than the same plot and dull and boring NPCs.

The old holy lady said, slipped away

After reading the free chapters, I was persuaded to quit. I just accepted every one I saved, which was a bit disappointing. . And I usually listen to books, Mizukawao, this name sounds awkward no matter how I hear it The younger sister I adopted at first was raised in someone else's home, but the younger sister I adopted later was raised directly in my own home. The younger sister I took in at the beginning didn't teach anything, but later the younger sister I took in was able to work on her own. How do I get back?

How to play without a sword to remove spirits

I want to criticize books like this. Since there are monsters and monsters, there must be confrontation. Not most authors these days.

It's not that it's bad, I can only say that this novel is not to my taste. It follows the light novel style. Come on, author.

Analysis of Poisonous Points Look directly at the author's description of loneliness in Chapter 9, the second time it explodes

I have read more than a dozen chapters. How can I put it? It's okay, but it gives me the feeling that there is no main line and a hammer here and there.

It's not over whether there's a mistake or not.

I went and found that three of the author's four books had been deleted.

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After writing a few chapters, some beautiful girl appears. Your new character appears too quickly. The name alone makes you look big, and you can't tell the difference when you look at the back. You can just pass by the supporting characters. If you write too much, it will look messy. The protagonist also needs to have a clear or semi-clear goal, otherwise you will wander around without a goal, and it will feel too confusing, and the more you read later, the less you can stand it. I can't stand it anymore, so I slipped away

I guess the protagonist is not a diaosi. I used to like novels about traveling through Japan, but now I feel confused about life. The meaning of life is to grasp the rules and cultivate morality. If these are not the case, then what is the meaning of life? There were monks in our world in ancient times, but in modern times I heard that they no longer live in seclusion 🙂