Once Upon a Time There Was an Uchiha

I really don't understand why the author chose Demon Slayer. It's only one movie level online. I guess it's true love. I haven't watched Demon Slayer, so I found a lot of setting errors after reading the comments. And they didn't explain why they chose Demon Slayer. Does the protagonist think Demon Slayer is miserable and wants to help, or does he like the protagonist, or is it to improve his strength. If you feel miserable, you should help improve their strength and teach them skills. If you like the protagonist, you should stay with the protagonist for a longer period of time. In order to improve your strength, you should not choose Demon Slayer, or you should let Demon Slayer become the strongest option. There is one option for demon slayers and two daily episodes. It is very logical to choose demon slayers. However, a pirate is added to the mix. Obviously, the upper limit of pirates is higher and it is easier to obtain skills.

First of all, I am worried about the author's writing skills. There are typos here and there, and the occasional inappropriate word choice. If these two points can be corrected, I believe it will improve the score a lot in the eyes of readers like us. Second point, what I am confused about is that since the first world that the protagonist can choose to travel through is Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, why is it not a priority to practice breathing techniques? Is it because the breathing method is not good enough for Uchiha or something? As far as the early stage is concerned, Demon Slayer's breathing method is the best choice among all anime worlds (as far as I know). And water breathing has no effect on you, an Uchiha who plays with fire? I was very worried when I watched it, and the reason why I continued to watch it was just because I traveled to Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba in the early stages. The third point is that I feel helpless about the author's political acumen. As far as the volume of Zhanmei is concerned, the author only sees the most obvious and easy-to-understand causes. The rottenness of the empire is only due to the control of a certain high-ranking official in the empire over the little emperor. It is helpless because the author revealed his age, and indeed most of them are political novices at this age. The fourth point is my personal reason. Maybe it's because I have a relatively weak view of emotions. I see that the protagonists in the author's works more or less protect the protagonists (or other characters who must die in the plot) at the expense of exposing themselves. In this regard, I think it is not necessary at all. Some people can't be saved even if you want to, some people can only and should only become heroes and live in the hearts of others, and some people just like to commit suicide and can't die (protagonist treatment). People grow up through setbacks. If you can't die even after trying to die once or twice, it proves that that person has a certain amount of luck and is protected by the "meaning of the world (animation author)". He doesn't need you, the main character, to worry about it. The growth of the protagonists requires the sacrifices of the supporting characters. In the end, I have been struggling between continuing to pursue the book or giving up the book directly. The only reason that supports me to continue reading is the above-the first choice is Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba World. I sincerely hope that the author can improve at least two of the points I mentioned above, otherwise I will be really worried as a reader.

My friend, your novel is generally okay, but brother, your fourth chapter talks about the protagonist being very angry when he sees ghosts eating people. This is understandable. But why does the protagonist later want to become a ghost king like Wuhan and develop subordinates in the ninja world to cope with the coming of war? To be honest, I can't understand. The protagonist will eventually become someone he hates? Can't bring in the protagonist Well, all ghosts deserve to die

The author's content is very detailed and has his own ideas. It's very good. Come on!

This ability to go to various places is really strong, but don't go to Dragon Ball, for fear of being killed.

There are so many dead nerds, so many two-dimensional movies to watch, even Naruto One Piece is skipping to watch. If you create so many niche ones, the road will only become narrower and narrower, and fewer and fewer people will watch it.

Before you know it, the new book has already reached 60,000 words. As a newbie who is not even a big fan, please stop squawking and squawk lightly! This book is a comprehensive comic, which is basically the story of Uchiha Rihuo wandering around in various Japanese comic worlds. The first world is Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, which is not finished yet, and I will definitely go back to it in the future. The Second World Tokyo Ghoul is currently being updated In addition, please don't hesitate to recommend and collect it, it will be really helpful to newcomers.

You actually chose Demon Slayer? A world was chosen that was least useful to the protagonist.

Personally, I think it would be more relaxing in the Naruto world, and it would be more fun to write more about other worlds. . .

I just read about 10 chapters. Author, are you really writing seriously? On average, there are more than ten or twenty typos in each chapter, and sometimes there are even a few missing words in a sentence, and there are almost four or five wrong sentences in every chapter. Are you really serious about writing a book?

I don't understand. It's really unnecessary to write about the world of ghoul, but the red eyes are very useful. Collecting imperial equipment and ministerial equipment as well as the production methods can greatly strengthen the strength of the family and the village after returning to Hokage, and it can also bring more variables to the battle and pattern of the ninja world. Think about the Nine-Tails Rebellion. The village ninjas restrained the Nine-Tails with the kaleidoscopic and romantic turrets. After that, several major ninja villages began to target and seize the Imperial Equipment and even the Imperial Equipment. There are a lot of things that can be written. However, in fact, the protagonist's purpose is still unclear and there is no target. The world of Red Eyes is inexplicably struggling throughout. The collision of abilities between different worlds is the most exciting thing, right? If you travel through many worlds, Naruto has not changed at all, what should have happened has happened, but there has been no change, and the pattern, power system, and events have all followed the original trajectory, then it is really unattractive. If you don't see a clear attitude toward your family or the village, then you might as well just write about a protagonist who keeps getting stronger and more transcendent. However, the protagonist's combat IQ is not online. In addition to some illusions, his biggest support has become a ghost body. However, it is not used well. The biggest advantage of infinite regeneration is not to exchange injuries for injuries? I'm really giving you a kaleidoscope for nothing. It's better to be a civilian ninja and have golden fingers in your head...

Two worlds have passed. I don't know what the use of plug-ins is. There is a breathing method in the first world. The second one doesn't seem to improve? In the end, you didn't even look to improve your physical fitness, chakra, or eye power when you completed the mission? I'm a bit confused. I feel that if I want to write about being in Naruto all the time, I feel that most of the world's abilities are not compatible or cannot be exposed and used. I don't know how the author writes it. I hope it can improve my strength, right? After all, the Third Ninja War is about to begin.

I feel that the author has not really thought about the issue of Uchiha and Konoha. The cracks that have already occurred cannot go back to the beginning. Either split or replace. When you really do that, it will add insult to injury, and there will be many people who benefit from it. This is not the case with Alibaba.

The Four Laughing Uchiha Heroes

The level of the plug-in is too low, and it's not interesting! Also, the author hasn't written out why the protagonist is fighting. I just see the protagonist walking around like a ghost. I don't know what the point of writing it is.

The three major mysteries of the ninja world. 1. Does Kakashi lack blue? Two, which escape technique is the strongest? 3. Can the Sharingan Mangekyō gain the ability to travel through time and space? Readers think that Kakashi really has no shortage of blue. Mouth Dun is the strongest. Have no idea.

Ah,,, there is no world that I want to see,,

If you, an Uchiha, go play in the water, wouldn't the will-o'-the-wisp boy be nice🤪

Can the author correct typos and omissions? Chapters 1 to 5 are full of typos, and a lot of readers have raised them, but they just won't change them. What are you thinking?

Everyone has eight skills, let's see how Kai Xiaoli trains. It is impossible for people today to persist in this self-mutilation.

The backend data of this novel is definitely getting worse as it gets written. If I hadn't taken what I said to be nonsense 😁, 60-70% of the people who read this novel would have come here because of the name, that is, to watch Naruto. The content of the first copy is well grasped, with fifty chapters, neither too long nor too short. But the contents of the subsequent dungeons were ridiculously long. The more I read them, the more I felt that they were traveling from the dungeon to Naruto, rather than from Naruto to the dungeon. The plot of Naruto World only accounts for one-third or even less than one-third.

It's so well written, it helped me cure my ten years of insomnia.

Why do you keep supporting Konoha? It is better to create an organization. It has resources, but now you are short of people.

The Forced Breeding Armor, the beast god general crystal and Kaiba unit inside, as well as the villain's biotechnology can solve the protagonist's current conflict between blood succession and ghost transformation.

After all kinds of cuts, I drank a potion that was more perfect than Wuhan's potion, and the result was that my limbs were regenerated. It's really speechless😒. There are too many typos and wrong sentences. Have you ever finished writing without reading it over first? Also, how old is the protagonist? First it was said to be 11 years old, then 9 years old. This grass... Is poisonous🙃

I just read this book and I knew the author at first glance. I didn't pay attention to Naruto. The author of Naruto wrote that ninja cells are 130 trillion, but in reality, human body cells are only 40 trillion.

The last few chapters have not connected well. Even if I open a new book, I must at least be responsible for the old one.

I want to watch Four Brothers, Beyblade Warriors, Legend of Wind and Thunder Sword, Saint Seiya, Tenya Moon Sword, and Digimon. I've watched 10 episodes of One Piece and can't stand it anymore, and I haven't watched Bleach.

Don't you think the threshold is so high now? There are countless anime worlds written about tmd. Who the hell has time to watch so many anime? Damn it, just give readers one second to bring in the time. If you can't bring it in, you'll just watch it like a snake.

What should I say? In the world of food seeds, technology should be very advanced. Didn't the protagonist want to collect it?