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To be honest, is this person born again? His vision, technical ability, and character have not improved.

Why did you write the protagonist's father as a 250-year-old? He beats his own son because he doesn't understand shit, he's a typical clown.

Books that don't respect readers are bound to be written down. When writing online novels, you have to position yourself as a reader. After being reborn, you still stick to your own selves. My parents and girlfriends are all written in a vicious way. It is suitable for domestic hot chicken TV series. There is no conflict and there is no conflict.

What does it mean to forcefully create difficulties at the beginning and have multiple difficulties in a row? What do you think? Platinum author? Bring your own readers?

Who told you that books written with care will be read? If you really think so, why don't you write a physical book? Good game novels have the ultimate logic running through them, that is, hard work will be rewarded. And how to make the novel real? That is to reverse this logic. This book can be read, but it is difficult to read. The biggest problem is the protagonist The protagonist is reborn, but as soon as he goes back to the past, he disappears into oblivion and everyone cannot tell that he is a reborn person. This brings about a lack of sense of substitution. How can we bring in people who seem to be indigenous people? In other words, it doesn't matter if your book is not reborn. Then there is no fun. You have to give the reader a carrot. You can't just do whatever you think. Just letting the reader make up their mind is not enough. Finally, I personally hate the protagonist's approach to life. It is an adult's approach to life. He is sullen, depressed and cunning. I would not have expected such a person to be the protagonist.

What kind of shit did you write?

No one who reads online novels wants to read this kind of cruel, forced plot! ! , With the way you write it, you probably won't be able to insist on putting it on the shelves.

I saw that the author said many times in the book that the book was not good enough. In fact, I can reflect on it. Many of the plots in this book are like bloody dramas, and some of the plots are disgusting. For example, in a family that can cultivate students from Tsinghua University, the father cannot be the kind of person who smashes ashtrays at every turn. If this is the case since childhood, the child will not be able to grow up healthily. If you want to write about reality and write something of your own, then don't ask for big sales first. If you want to ask for big sales, you might as well risk a swollen face and learn how to arrange the plot to make people feel comfortable, and how to make it comfortable. I will always support and read it. I don't want the author to be cool. Come on.

What the hell is Ma De? He was beaten several times after reading just a few chapters. He was hospitalized twice. How could he not be beaten to death for hundreds of chapters? And how old are others when they are reborn? Teenagers. You are almost 30.

This novel feels like a TV series, with too many forced dramatic conflicts. I don't like this style.

Write a hammer, go home and sleep

Those who are reborn are all looking for ways to make their first pot of gold by working alone. The protagonist will be the director of some kind of factory when he gets there. Isn't this an attempt to take a political path? The reborn ones are not domineering at all! La 🐔. . . . . . Farewell🙏

It's so frustrating to watch, and I'm sure my grades will be bad. In a novel, if you don't avoid these plots but instead amplify them, that's awesome. Powered by love. You can avoid the poisonous point of your girlfriend. If you don't write it down, just let it go and let it go. If you don't want her to give birth to a child and slap her in the face, isn't it your own pleasure? You can avoid it no matter what you pay, right? If you can't avoid it, you can't hug him all the time, right? Interesting? And the most poisonous thing is the embezzlement of public funds. What the hell is this? I admit that it may happen in reality. You can't avoid it. It's a waste of effort if you insist on writing. You can play it by yourself. If you are interested in more poisonous points, you can read it yourself.

Alas, arranging a cuckold right from the start is poisonous. Since the author wants to write something fresh and refined, he shouldn't resort to such old routines. It's really discouraging. In addition, to be honest, if you don't open the game after rebirth, you won't be able to beat those old guys. Since they are all about rebirth, why should you be too rigid in reality? This will actually be a constraint. Reality is already so difficult, so it's better to read novels. After all, why should I read novels if I want reality?

It's not good-looking. There are too many gems in the rebirth novel. You can't even reach the average level. It doesn't have the flavor of that era at all.

I feel that the book is quite good, but it is not as enjoyable as the brainless novel. Maybe good writing does not necessarily mean that it sells well (expecting to be slapped in the face). Internet novels are better to be a little more enjoyable. Although many best-selling novels are read with a brain, there are many unreasonable things, but if you read online novels, you will be satisfied.

It's also more realistic, but I couldn't even pass the contract 😭. I thought that after so many years, I would be more experienced and would be able to read some Internet articles that are not mindless and cool articles. It was too difficult. I felt even more chilled when I saw the author's huge acceptance speech. No matter what, let's count the few literati at least. Even if they have no commercial value, they are still our spiritual sustenance. I would like to encourage you all!

The book is very interesting, but some of the characters are annoying.

Here I come Brother Zhi! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🙂🙂🙂🙂

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that it was written as a drama about Qiong Yao's abuse. Moreover, he is a Qingbei college student who is willing to be a cuckold after his rebirth. Author, you should post your books on female channels. Not many Chinese people are willing to cuckold themselves. Forcibly instilling intelligence in the characters, and convincing the readers with strength. Thoughts after reading more than fifty chapters

The author has written a total of three books, all of which are highly toxic. No one in the comments likes them except for the trumpet, who is also a talented person.

Why don't I have chapters 1-17?

The function is that you can use it to find other books in the same category. What are they about?

The protagonist has gone to his own death. You are a young man who still wants to be the commander-in-chief. Are you still awake?

While others are going overseas to start their own businesses, you just sit in the factory.

Pretty good-looking, right? Why the eunuch again?

After reading a few chapters, I was reincarnated and returned to work as a staff maker. What's the point of reality? If reality were all like this, I would have gotten rich a long time ago and my IQ would be crushed.

Book lovers, the author is about to start a new book. Internal information is about to be prepared, and the investment has begun, waiting for approval

This author cheated us of money and stopped updating after seeing half of it

Are top students from Tsinghua University reborn? Not so good