Senior Brother Is a Mortal but Very Strong

There were all kinds of problems on the way to the Fairy and Demon Conference. Not only did he predict that something happened to his junior brother, but he didn't take the time to check it out, it made people feel speechless.

Is this book a eunuch? Pirated copies are faster than genuine ones.

，， The book written by Zhuzi is really good. (Emphasis added) Zhuzi mentioned many times in the book that what he writes is not a novel, but a narrative story. He is not an author, but a storyteller who tells stories. I think this is a good book.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               out out out; if; if; Mango, your work is very unique. If nothing else, you have not followed the current flow of the invincible system. "Big Brother" is not brainless. It is just that you have too little writing experience and the world framework is not well written. This is my feeling. Now your writing journey has just begun. I hope that one day I can see the stories written by you. By then, you will not be an author, but a storyteller, telling us the true story of another world, showing us love and hatred, showing us the ways of the world, taking us to cultivate immortality and enter the mortal world. Come on Mango!

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The characters are very vividly portrayed. I haven't seen such novel material in a long time. Great work for the author! ! ! ! ! !

It's quite interesting to read. Each chapter has a lot of words. It's comfortable.

The characterization is very detailed and can

Is this book about harem or stock trading?

Highly recommended, clear thinking, unique ideas, and very good literary talent. Not much to say, it will definitely become popular. I hope the author can see how to invest, and how much is the minimum investment? I am a bit poor now, and I will never be rich in the future. I hope the author will not forget me.

Why do so many people troll the harem? I think there are quite a lot of second, third, fourth and fifth wives that rich people keep.

Female main building

Is this protagonist a scumbag? He said he loved Yunxiao, but he flirted with the other one when he saw her, like Zhao Hede. How could you take off someone's shoes when they've just met for a day? This operation confused me

I still don't understand how to invest? Look at my name, which expresses my confidence and support for this book and the author. I am a prophet. This book can be a hit.

What kind of thing are you writing about? If you don't want to write about it, don't write about it. If you want to write about it, just be serious about it.

The story is okay, but the writing is not good, and there is no sense of substitution. The text looks like a bystander narrating a running account. In addition, the background is very blurry. Is the protagonist from time travel or something? Do you know the history of this world? How did you get that there is a Journey to the West in this world? None of this was explained clearly, so I looked confused.

Don't be too fussy about the details but you can still take a look. The struggle between immortals is written in the same way as Young and Dangerous. There is no sense of immortality at all, only the level of force, no brains, and the villain can do whatever he wants.

Those girls from the Jade Girl Sect, who destroyed half the city just to catch a thief, are simply a cult. They eliminate demons and protect the Tao, but the demons are not as lethal as they are.

I originally wanted to take a look at it, but it turned out that the cover said Pepsi, which is not delicious, and it immediately lost its taste.

The author, your writing is obviously very good. Why do you have to write about this mentally retarded woman? From the comments, it seems that she is still the heroine. Is murder and arson a common practice? I have never seen such distorted values ​​in life.

How much money did Pepsi give you? The cover is used to advertise it. I, Coca-Cola, doubled the money_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

After killing a hundred thousand heavenly soldiers in one night, I ask you, are your hands sore?

What I write is messy and I let myself go completely. The little junior brother in the back has no role at all. The fat senior brother might as well not write it. He has obviously lost weight and weighed hundreds of pounds after leaving the virtual world. Eating books is too serious.

Personal evaluation, for reference only. Since novels started to become popular, I started reading novels. I read all kinds of novels and it opened my eyes. I give this book a general evaluation. Novels about cultivating immortals have remained unchanged for a long time. They have also formed a structure. I have read all the plots that should be read. This book does not escape from this structure, including sects, government, good and evil, and realms. So it's just average, it's not a novice at least. There are also some flaws, such as the strength of the senior brother, which is somewhat paradoxical. The swordsmanship has reached the realm of perfection. What exactly is the strength, why is it strong, and how is it strong? The second flaw is that people who call demons are demons, demons, and demons. The most important thing to avoid in writing is that one word appears frequently, whether it is to describe it by name or appearance. Frequent words will cause aesthetic fatigue and dullness. PS: I have only read Chapter 10, so don't think you have read less. The first impact is very important. The above is for reference only, no spray or black.

What is going on? Is it finished? Does the author have another account or is he writing a new book?

The author has updated. It has been two years. Mango, please update. It has been two years. Please.

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