I Mastered 999 Sword Techniques

Since being recommended, although the exposure has indeed increased a lot, it has been followed by a lot of negative reviews. To be honest, I was still a little bit shocked, ~QAQ This is my first time trying to write a web article, and I am inexperienced. Many times I feel that the handling of the rhythm of the plot and characters is indeed not adequate. So I would like to ask all readers for your opinions and suggestions on this book. It's okay to be harsh. I have read what you posted in the comment area before, and now I want to collect them together. Faizhai will listen to opinions with an open mind and strive to write a qualified story that will not disappoint Brother Meng. Speak freely, you can say anything! Writing novels is a small career that I love. I really want to write good stories. Thank you everyone🙏🏻

Author, your combat is too game-like.

The protagonist is so stupid and completely useless. The strong point is that the system has nothing to do with the protagonist. In other words, the protagonist cannot even use one percent of the system. It is too slow.

If you don't know how to write about women, just concentrate on writing settings and plots. It's better not to write this whole disgusting thing. It's so poisonous to watch.

The realm system has collapsed terribly... Swordsmen can cut down swordsmen, sword masters, great sword masters, and even strong men in the sword shadow realm... Will it collapse? Also, the heroine died in front of the protagonist as soon as she appeared, and a romantic drama was staged, which was equally nerve-wracking. I hope there won't be similar plots in the future, it's too bloody. Wishing the fire.

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Let's not talk about how it was written. . After watching more than half of it, it gave me a few feelings. . 1. Your fighting ability is a bit broken. . . The protagonist casually beats up people and monsters several levels above him. Invincible? ? ? Then what is the purpose of hierarchical stratification? . 2. Maybe the humor is forced for the sake of humor. . Some of the protagonist's mysterious behaviors and language make readers extremely embarrassed. . Although 3. The character development of the protagonist is very problematic. I think the author might want to create a high school boy who is a bit funny and a bit of a middle schooler. . But somehow I saw that the protagonist's character is a bit selfish, does not care about the opinions of others and friends, and is a bit of a 2b loser. . . IMHO. . New authors should still be encouraged. But your character is really not well developed. . Then, since you have divided the combat power into different levels, you should be more rigorous. . Although the protagonist has an aura that allows him to leapfrog levels, he shouldn't go too far. . Otherwise, it will be very easy to break down later. I feel like I'm breaking down even though you haven't written much. .

The two chapters from May 14th to 16th are too cliche. Once again, Niubi's parents disappeared for the country, leaving the treasure to Pigfoot, and then Pigfoot embarked on the road to find his parents. It obviously started well, but the gap is too big

No, it's too thin and needs to be fattened for slaughter.

Cross cut, wood cut, tic cut, and forest cut. These sword moves must have been improved instead of adding to the burden? Did Shen Nong test the poison?