Game Conquer Another World

Already collected, the overall plot is worth watching, but there are too many character dialogues, it feels like reading a dialogue novel. It is difficult to distinguish the characteristics of different characters in the dialogue. With a little correction it will be a good article

I don't quite understand it either, it's just my personal opinion, please forgive me if something is wrong! I hope you can give me more advice on my books.

If no one comments, just do it yourself: Come on author, you are the best

Um, I'm here to spray you. Come on.

I just finished reading the first three chapters, and I feel that the character setting is okay. It feels like the protagonist upgrades and fights monsters, and finally becomes the boss of Aquablue Star. The only flaw is that there are few things to attract readers' attention. You can add elements of villains and love... To make the article more readable. You can also write more about the plot of the competition, such as: Which boss everyone thinks he is (the description of the appearance must surprise everyone), and then there is a twist. Unexpectedly, the limelight is overshadowed by the protagonist!

I have received the short website and the contract has been sent out. The status will change in about two or three days. You are welcome to invest and pick up some coins.

Damn, wait until I have tickets for level 3, 😭,