The Unrivaled Tang Sect: The Most Venerable Sage

Let me explain, because this book came out of the author's whim. The preparation was very hasty, and I am a new writer. There are definitely many areas that need improvement. I hope you will bear with me and give me your corrections.

Make a solitaire post to gain some popularity for this book. Be serious, don't do too much in one day.

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. . Hiss

The biggest problem with this book is that the story is not told well. Halfway through, I can see that the author's creativity is indeed good, and the various plot designs are also good, but the biggest problem is that the author cannot tell the story smoothly at all. I can understand the author's desire to foreshadow the story, but he shouldn't describe the story in such a jumpy and fragmented style. This would be worse than a running account. At least the running account can help readers understand what story the book is about.

Why do I feel like I'm a little confused?

I was confused when I read the first few chapters. I didn't even know what the author was writing.

The author actually wrote a book about sissy Huo Gua! Come on!

The author is awesome, I just didn't understand it. I urge the author to write another book.

Don't brag, don't be slanderous, do some scientific calculations on Douluo Dalu