The Kind Transmigrator

Great!! The storyline is very engaging. However, some paragraphs are too long; I suggest breaking them down into smaller sections.

Good afternoon, just checking in. 😜 Keep it up, everyone!

Just checking in 😌

One vote from you, one vote from me, and our idol will debut tomorrow!

I didn't use paragraphs at first either, and it made me uncomfortable to look at.

You can break it down into sections, look at mine. Otherwise you'll get dizzy.

I still like you very much, like the Milky Way stretching far and wide, my dreams resting on starlight. I still love you very much, like the exquisite moonlight and the stars hanging low over the plains. I still love you very much, like a field full of blooming flowers. I still like you very much, like the setting sun over the vast, distant mountains.