Entertainment Industry Trial Run

After reading Chapter 81, this entertainment article has a good overall grasp, but the details and logic are very poor. It can be seen that this is a world without in-depth architecture. The country and some things have made significant improvements, but the underlying logic and industry status quo still follow the status quo. Big shoes for small feet. Overall, it looks like it's being patched and set, and it looks nondescript. (What's wrong with today's authors? The most basic world structure is so sloppy. If you don't change the world context, there won't be so many dramas, so many useless patches, settings, just follow reality.) Character behavior logic, character dialogue and behavior must have their own internal logic. It is driven by inherent characteristics (character formed in the past), not just what the author thinks. The impact of past events determines his future behavior. What the author can do is to arrange events to change their characteristics. He doesn't just write whatever he wants, it's not just imagination, that's how he is. In fact, it is difficult to grasp the details of the overall direction of the protagonist in this book, and it is difficult to write that feeling. However, the image of a family member who loves their children very much is not well developed. On the one hand, the degree of love is fully described, and the plot of criticizing the tutor is also included. On the other hand, the family members feel like they are coming out of an air-conditioned room in the summer, showing concern but no actual help. And he keeps emphasizing that the family will not be able to give you any help. Even if you can't help, you still have to understand the situation. Interjecting into the discussion about the protagonist at home, asking your aunt for side support, etc., The behavioral logic will be much more harmonious. Now this situation is an awkward setting, and we don't even check whether the character's behavior is appropriate. If there is excellent writing, all this is actually easy to say. Excellent writing can cover up some flaws, but unfortunately, it does not. Instead, there will be some unsmooth descriptions. Keep up the good work, there is a reason why you are not popular.

I've been back for a visit, and I feel like my writing is getting better and better. There are many things that can arouse people's resonance. The writing style is the same as the male protagonist's character, like a touch of mint, calm, transparent and true. Online articles and entertainment circles are obviously fast-paced, routine, exciting, and as deep as the sea; but the author combines these two to truly express his feelings. There are fewer routines and less waves, but it has more flavor. In reality, boys like Han Shi are not as dazzling and mature as Cai Sutian; they are not as energetic as Qi Yi and know how to create a character; they are not as knowledgeable and experienced as Gao Zhe (I also love Gao Zhe), and even the final result of the competition failed to win unexpectedly. However, there is always a desire to watch, to pay attention to him, to understand him, to see the world with different eyes with him, not to judge the depth, but to feel with heart. He has a boyish vibe that I like, he is light-hearted, and he is neither outrageous nor pretentious in anything he does. The poems written in big letters are also good, so you know they are not simple. ⌯'ㅅ'⌯Afraid of being lonely, I came here to cheer up. I feel that the writing style is very similar to mine, it's i anyway. I hope I can write it down so that I can meet boys like Han Shi or Gao Zhe. Does the "test" in Korean exam mean to try?

I have been hoarding the articles for two weeks, and I finished reading them in one sitting today. I feel like I still have more to say. I really like Han Shi. Although he seems to have a weak ability to survive, lack of social experience, and is sometimes dull. Compared with other male protagonists, he is weak, helpless and pitiful, but there is a quality in him that makes his character stand up. I said before that your writing has a flavor that you can endure and read. This is also what I want to see most after reading a lot of online articles. This must be inseparable from the author's life experience. I still don't know why your article is not popular (I really feel the same about the 000-4 data, but it's because I often hang up and stop updating. I really feel sorry for your data), but it doesn't matter. The accumulation is there. I hope you will continue to maintain your current writing style. As for the plot, I think it may be a very ordinary plot, but I can still see the novelty. I always feel that the Korean test can bring me surprises every time, making me unable to guess the ending. Personally, I feel that Han Shi is like a person who is born and rejoins the world. He has half a foot in the entertainment industry and exists in the fireworks. Sometimes he is detached from the world and watches everything with a cold eye. I hope he will have this trait in the end. He is the only Han Shi in the world.

I really can't stand this book. I have tried very hard to read it. People with this kind of salty mentality are really not suitable for the entertainment industry, nor are they suitable for entertainment literature, literary youth, hypocrisy. After reading so many pictures, I feel that I am really making things difficult for myself.

In the end, Qin Muxue became the heroine, and her sister became the supporting girl, so they abandoned it. The sister's role was so ambiguous, but a school belle appeared halfway through and was cut off after a few chapters. The male protagonist dated the school belle as soon as he had an affair with his sister and went back. He was full of scumbag vibes.

In order to get angry with a little fresh meat, I will permanently reduce the income of my songs by 10% and give it to NetEase Cloud. You are the best.

The beginning is quite good. I really like the protagonist's initial character design, including some Buddhist mentality. Other descriptions are okay, but many parts are too clever and ignored. However, there are too many poisonous points in the aspects of operation, personal copyright, and platform. If you are not good at home, can you find connections and help? The author insists on cheating the protagonist a few times, deliberately setting up the character, which makes people feel very uncomfortable, especially for old bookworms, many details are more uncomfortable. For example, when we first negotiated the contract details with NetEase Cloud (asking my family and Zhou Yan), they were brought over in one lump sum, which made people very brainless. Later, they were sniped by others and had to give up profits to the platform in exchange for opportunities. Later, the reputation of the music festival increased, and the counterattack seemed reasonable, but actually poisoned Shennong to death! ! !

The protagonist is too eccentric. The entertainment article wants to write the protagonist as a god like Pu Shu or Dou Wei, but he also wants to become a popular star in the mainstream. This is a contradiction. Singing rock and folk songs is a bit fringe. And those who are famous in idol auditions are not considered mainstream among singers, and they have not been famous for a long time. These labels will not be washed away for a while. It still takes time to settle.

I thought my sister was the heroine when I looked at it, but a school beauty suddenly appeared after writing about it? ? ? ? Don't understand. . .

How should I put it? It was said before that it was impossible to write a song on the program team, and then I would sing the original singer, and then I would say that it was signed by someone else, so it would be fine to make a song that is not the original singer. But I still don't feel comfortable watching it. Maybe I'm too picky. I'll see you later.